The raised eyebrows saying "you just know" are so sexy TT
Alita is very confused. She has a good hand. I don't understand why it developed like this. In fact, she has contact with every friend. She knows a lot but is forbidden to get close to them. No one can be trusted and no one is allowed to get close. It shouldn't be like this. The main plot has developed to this point. Alita is still lonely, and no one can trust her.
Press the claws and tie up the woo woo woo
It's even, so cheers up
The book is getting smoother and smoother. I am looking forward to the next plot.
The book is getting smoother and smoother. I am looking forward to the next plot.
Who is so ignorant, Reyyyds
I've finally caught up to this point. I've seen this from the beginning and noticed that my wife's writing has improved. Come on~
I feel like some of the sentences in this chapter are a bit unsound, such as "This is not because he wanted to kill Snape." I feel like the word "reason" is missing here. Maybe I can refine the chapters I have written in the future, and it will feel much better.
I think some details are a bit confusing if you don't read the explanations later, and the plot turns very suddenly, such as riding a broomstick.
The raised eyebrows saying "you just know" are so sexy TT
Alita is very confused. She has a good hand. I don't understand why it developed like this. In fact, she has contact with every friend. She knows a lot but is forbidden to get close to them. No one can be trusted and no one is allowed to get close. It shouldn't be like this. The main plot has developed to this point. Alita is still lonely, and no one can trust her.
Press the claws and tie up the woo woo woo
It's even, so cheers up
The book is getting smoother and smoother. I am looking forward to the next plot.
The book is getting smoother and smoother. I am looking forward to the next plot.
Who is so ignorant, Reyyyds
I've finally caught up to this point. I've seen this from the beginning and noticed that my wife's writing has improved. Come on~
I feel like some of the sentences in this chapter are a bit unsound, such as "This is not because he wanted to kill Snape." I feel like the word "reason" is missing here. Maybe I can refine the chapters I have written in the future, and it will feel much better.
I think some details are a bit confusing if you don't read the explanations later, and the plot turns very suddenly, such as riding a broomstick.