After My Lover Split in Two, I Entered a Supernatural World

Uh, the copywriting is quite good,,, and I felt like I was lonely after reading it,

The story of Shou being burned to death is a true story, so what happened to the old attacker who entered the story at the beginning and found seven elite veterans in a week?

This jump must be too big, it makes me look confused

Make up

It was actually good at the beginning, but it was a little weird at the end... It was a bit anticlimactic.

Why do these ghosts like to attack with drugs?

~╭══╮┌══════════┐ ╭╯Make way║ Song Chen and Gu Jing's wedding car ╰⊙═⊙╯╰══⊙════⊙══╯

I spent an evening reading through the author's column. If there is only copy, read the copy, and if there is text, start from the first chapter. But often I am persuaded to quit by the plot and writing without even reading Chapter V. It is really embarrassing. I suggest the author improve his writing style. The copy and plot are really good and I am looking forward to it. But when I first read the main text, I felt bad. Those mindless sweet pet stories are okay, but be childish. Once it is a slightly in-depth plot or background, Haojia The whole story or characters fell apart. I thought that after writing so many books for so long, there would be some progress. I never expected that from beginning to end, all of them were dismissed within thirty chapters, but it ended at the same time. I personally can't accept a brainless sweet pet novel that is too white-watered, has no logical emotional line and fast-forwards, but objectively speaking, there must be a reason for its existence. For example, sisters who have just finished reading extremely brain-burning and thrilling articles and want to relax their brains can give it a try, or just Sisters who are so naive and sweet in writing can also come to Kangkang, as long as they can accept the more chaotic writing style. However, it is worthy of recognition that the author has made great achievements in the field of imagination. The author's column covers almost vertically everything I have seen since I entered Jinjiang. Seventy or eighty percent of the genres I have read, and the author's self-innovation can even be seen from some of the copywriting. I admire this very much, but digging too many holes may become a burden. Halfway through the writing or just after writing ten or twenty chapters There is a lot of literature that has not been updated for a long time. When this idea that has been put aside has been ignored for a long time, the author is likely to lose his creative passion for it. The words he writes may be more hollow, and the articles written without settling the pen will not have the depth to win applause and resonance. I hope the author will be long-lasting, dedicated, calm, and concise. The above are some personal opinions. Although I try to be objective, it will inevitably have some subjective colors. If it offends, I apologize.

"You can be more greedy" is a huge thorn in the side of the author~

Make up the points, make up the points, make up the points, make up the points, make up the points.