Please add my new fantasy danmei novel, The Creator God Isn't a Little Fool, to your pre-release collection QAQ~
[Pre-release blurb] (The novel's blurb is below =w=)
In the year 7428, the universe was in chaos. Rumor had it that the only way to restore peace was to kill the Creator God.
Shi Qingdu was the Milky Way's chief god-slaying officer. In the middle of a mission to locate a god, he suddenly got a call from his younger brother's wife, who was wailing that his brother had cheated on him.
Shi Qingdu placed great importance on family values. How could he allow such a scandal to happen in his own family? So he grabbed a TH hydrogen gun and blasted his brother's research facility.
But with that one shot, he not only blew up the love nest where his brother had hidden his little lover, he blew his brother sky-high too.
Afraid their father would chop him to death when he got home, Shi Qingdu had no choice but to hide at the facility and take care of his half-dead brother for now.
He never expected that on the first night, just as he was about to fall asleep, a soft, white creature would crawl onto his pillow, wearing his brother's clothes.
Shi Qingdu: "Holy crap! Is this that little homewrecker my brother's been keeping?!"
The milky-white creature, transformed into human form, snuggled up against him. It blinked its big eyes, looking a little aggrieved.
"I want a hug!"
Later...
His unlucky younger brother woke up and opened his eyes to see his own older brother pinning a familiar-looking boy against the wall and kissing him.
He was shocked, pulled out a gun, aimed it at the boy, and shouted:
"Big brother! He's the Creator God!"
Officer gong x Creator God shou
[Novel blurb]
Yin Xiaokuang, owner of the largest pleasure house in Ling'an City, is an unparalleled beauty, innocent-looking yet intensely seductive.
But he's also shamelessly licentious, spending every day in drunken, decadent revelry.
Until one day, the most powerful Left Chancellor in the realm is murdered in his pleasure house.
Yin Xiaokuang doesn't want to die, so he has no choice but to use his best trick: seduce the man ordered to interrogate him.
"QAQ, my dear Prince, do you still need someone to warm your bed?~"
*
Everyone says that Fourth Prince Qi Yusheng is cold-blooded and ruthless. He wields half the power of the Ji Dynasty, with a brutal hand and no hesitation when it comes to killing.
In the tenth year of Jianhe, the Left Chancellor is murdered in Zuixianfang. Everyone says Boss Yin is done for. In Qi Yusheng's hands, he'll meet a truly horrible end!
Until one day, someone suddenly stumbles upon the Fourth Prince in a corner of the palace, clutching the utterly cold-hearted Boss Yin. He has completely lost his composure.
"Xiaokuang... did you really never love me?"
*
In the tenth year of Jianhe, the former Left Chancellor is murdered in Zuixianfang.
The following June, the newly appointed Left Chancellor is exposed as being entangled in an old case and sentenced to death.
In December, the emperor personally bestows a vial of poison upon the Right Chancellor.
One after another, the three founding ministers lose their lives. It seems an invisible hand is manipulating the fate of the entire court from the darkness!
And Yin Xiaokuang, the owner of Zuixianfang, whom everyone looks down on,
sits in a golden cage in the imperial palace,
smiling as he looks at the slips of paper in his hands, each bearing the name of a high-ranking official.
"Who will be next...?"
A former crown prince shou who pretends to be pitiful at first and becomes a total madman later x the most powerful prince of the current dynasty gong
Note:
- One-on-one. Neither gong nor shou has a white moonlight. Both are each other's first and only!
- The shou is the former dynasty's crown prince and is here for revenge. He won't abandon his revenge just because someone gives him a lollipop! There will be a happy ending, really!
- Old-school melodrama, because the author loves this stuff. If you don't like it, please click the X. Thanks~
Theme: Stand strong through setbacks, press on in adversity, and find a way out when faced with overwhelming challenges!
What's going on in the end? I'm going to die together. I really want to think about it. In fact,
Although he is very good at attacking people, I feel that it would be better not to be with him. It's so tiring to watch these two crazy people bump into each other.
I can't survive. Both of us are miserable. Everyone is miserable. It can't get any worse.
[Readers who have not read the book please skip, there are spoilers here]
First of all, congratulations on the completion! Everyone who puts their heart and soul into it and completes a novel word for word is great. The story frame and character creation of Wife are also very attractive. It can be said that I insisted on watching to the end just for this story framework. I admit that this sentence has both praise and disapproval. In fact, during the reading, I couldn't help but want to express my personal thoughts many times, but I felt that I should read the whole book to be more qualified to speak.
I don't know if my wife will continue to pay attention to the comments on the old article, but I hope you can see it. The following are some shortcomings that I found during reading, but there is absolutely no intention to disparage the work. It is just out of appreciation for the author that I feel that the performance of this work could have been better, so I hope it can provide a little help for the author's future progress. Please forgive me if there is any inappropriateness or misunderstanding of the novel.
1. There are many typos, and even the name of the protagonist sometimes has typos. I don't know if it's because my wife is in a hurry during daily updates. I hope that I can check it carefully before publishing every time in the future.
2. There are also many bad sentences and inaccurate expressions, which are one of the two major problems that frequently cause me to act. This is a matter of your own language skills. You need to study hard and consolidate it every day. You should also think more carefully when coding and organize sentences well. A little suggestion for overcoming the problem of incorrect sentences is to practice with the problems of modifying incorrect sentences that are often done in middle schools, and practice more. Ah, there are also some words that are only used in modern Chinese (not talking about time travel). Generally speaking, it is better to use words that fit the historical background of the story as much as possible.
3. The way the characters' dialogues are written is another big problem that frequently troubles me. The dialogue methods that everyone is accustomed to seeing are [So-and-so said: "blablabla."] And other forms based on this style. The paraphrase method of describing dialogue will only be used occasionally when necessary. If used in large quantities, the reading experience of most readers may not be that good. Therefore, I still suggest that my wife adjust to regular dialogue writing.
4. The language styles of different characters in the author's works are different. If their styles are not distinguished, it will be very easy to be OOC and make people feel uncomfortable. What impressed me deeply was the dialogue between Xiao Kuang and Qi when he reunited after losing his memory. Personally, I felt that, firstly, it didn't fit the character's personality, and secondly, it didn't fit the situation at that time. Therefore, when the author designs a character dialogue, one test is to put himself into this character as much as possible, to think about who I am at the moment, what kind of character I am, what kind of situation I am in, and how I would express this sentence; when the next character speaks, he must put himself into another character and think in the same way.
5. At this point, I want to start talking about the plot. First of all, some plots or details are unreasonable, such as Xiao Kuang's injuries when he was beaten and tortured. In the story, Xiao Kuang suffered countless serious injuries, but he seemed to recover too quickly every time, and in the blink of an eye he was just fine. Are those tortures, tortures, and beatings so easy to endure and recover from? Moreover, even if it recovers, there will be more or less root causes or sequelae, and scars are inevitable, but this is not mentioned in the article. I find it incredible that he survived so many times. I know that there are miraculous doctors, but miraculous doctors are not gods after all. They are also mortals, and miraculous doctors are not omnipotent. Just, it still lacks some authenticity.
6. There is another unreasonable point. Xiao Kuang was only six or seven years old when his parents were killed. Queen Mo could only teach him until he was six or seven years old. With his learning ability at that time, he could only learn some very simple things. Why was he so familiar with using poisons and the high-tech things left by Queen Mo after more than ten years of knowledge? (I shouldn't have missed any supporting plot, right?)
7. This is not a shortcoming, it is just my reading experience. Qi's feelings and behavior do not match. He keeps saying that he loves Xiao Kuang, but what I see is that he repeatedly ignores the harm of Xiao Kuang's life and death, and goes back on his words. So many times I angrily thought: destroy it, BE... But my wife stressed several times that I would HE, and I also know that the grudges between them are too deep and confusing, and I can't figure it out, so... Let's just do it.
Finally, thank you to my wife for presenting this work, please continue to work hard~~
Huh? Is this how my first long review was completed? !
Hahahaha, rotten peach blossoms
23333 Is the feeling that beauty brings disaster...
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha burp
I thought I was going to torture and scare people to death...
Maybe It's the Moon in the Sky
The Man Who Is Not Loved
The Day I Fell in Love with You
Heartbroken
Where Can I Find Such Affectionate Attack?
First Snow Falls on the Harbor
Those Years When I Picked up Water Bottles to Support You
Some Extra Stories About Gan Ku and Little Beauty
Disobedient Android
He Is so Soft
Sweet and Sour
Heard About Qingxia
What's going on in the end? I'm going to die together. I really want to think about it. In fact,
Although he is very good at attacking people, I feel that it would be better not to be with him. It's so tiring to watch these two crazy people bump into each other.
I can't survive. Both of us are miserable. Everyone is miserable. It can't get any worse.
[Readers who have not read the book please skip, there are spoilers here] First of all, congratulations on the completion! Everyone who puts their heart and soul into it and completes a novel word for word is great. The story frame and character creation of Wife are also very attractive. It can be said that I insisted on watching to the end just for this story framework. I admit that this sentence has both praise and disapproval. In fact, during the reading, I couldn't help but want to express my personal thoughts many times, but I felt that I should read the whole book to be more qualified to speak. I don't know if my wife will continue to pay attention to the comments on the old article, but I hope you can see it. The following are some shortcomings that I found during reading, but there is absolutely no intention to disparage the work. It is just out of appreciation for the author that I feel that the performance of this work could have been better, so I hope it can provide a little help for the author's future progress. Please forgive me if there is any inappropriateness or misunderstanding of the novel. 1. There are many typos, and even the name of the protagonist sometimes has typos. I don't know if it's because my wife is in a hurry during daily updates. I hope that I can check it carefully before publishing every time in the future. 2. There are also many bad sentences and inaccurate expressions, which are one of the two major problems that frequently cause me to act. This is a matter of your own language skills. You need to study hard and consolidate it every day. You should also think more carefully when coding and organize sentences well. A little suggestion for overcoming the problem of incorrect sentences is to practice with the problems of modifying incorrect sentences that are often done in middle schools, and practice more. Ah, there are also some words that are only used in modern Chinese (not talking about time travel). Generally speaking, it is better to use words that fit the historical background of the story as much as possible. 3. The way the characters' dialogues are written is another big problem that frequently troubles me. The dialogue methods that everyone is accustomed to seeing are [So-and-so said: "blablabla."] And other forms based on this style. The paraphrase method of describing dialogue will only be used occasionally when necessary. If used in large quantities, the reading experience of most readers may not be that good. Therefore, I still suggest that my wife adjust to regular dialogue writing. 4. The language styles of different characters in the author's works are different. If their styles are not distinguished, it will be very easy to be OOC and make people feel uncomfortable. What impressed me deeply was the dialogue between Xiao Kuang and Qi when he reunited after losing his memory. Personally, I felt that, firstly, it didn't fit the character's personality, and secondly, it didn't fit the situation at that time. Therefore, when the author designs a character dialogue, one test is to put himself into this character as much as possible, to think about who I am at the moment, what kind of character I am, what kind of situation I am in, and how I would express this sentence; when the next character speaks, he must put himself into another character and think in the same way. 5. At this point, I want to start talking about the plot. First of all, some plots or details are unreasonable, such as Xiao Kuang's injuries when he was beaten and tortured. In the story, Xiao Kuang suffered countless serious injuries, but he seemed to recover too quickly every time, and in the blink of an eye he was just fine. Are those tortures, tortures, and beatings so easy to endure and recover from? Moreover, even if it recovers, there will be more or less root causes or sequelae, and scars are inevitable, but this is not mentioned in the article. I find it incredible that he survived so many times. I know that there are miraculous doctors, but miraculous doctors are not gods after all. They are also mortals, and miraculous doctors are not omnipotent. Just, it still lacks some authenticity. 6. There is another unreasonable point. Xiao Kuang was only six or seven years old when his parents were killed. Queen Mo could only teach him until he was six or seven years old. With his learning ability at that time, he could only learn some very simple things. Why was he so familiar with using poisons and the high-tech things left by Queen Mo after more than ten years of knowledge? (I shouldn't have missed any supporting plot, right?) 7. This is not a shortcoming, it is just my reading experience. Qi's feelings and behavior do not match. He keeps saying that he loves Xiao Kuang, but what I see is that he repeatedly ignores the harm of Xiao Kuang's life and death, and goes back on his words. So many times I angrily thought: destroy it, BE... But my wife stressed several times that I would HE, and I also know that the grudges between them are too deep and confusing, and I can't figure it out, so... Let's just do it. Finally, thank you to my wife for presenting this work, please continue to work hard~~ Huh? Is this how my first long review was completed? !
Hahahaha, rotten peach blossoms
23333 Is the feeling that beauty brings disaster...
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha burp
I thought I was going to torture and scare people to death...
Let's have a little more sugar...
Hey, it's not easy to get to this point.