All-Around Life Player [Full-Dive]

It felt a bit high-key and low-key. I liked it very much at first. The story of farming was also very smooth. Although it was a bit boring to join the plot, it was okay. However, it became a bit watery from the time I arrived in the vice city. The plot was also careless. Many mysteries were not solved and even a local character in the jewelry shop was introduced. In the end, the consignment and proprietress Sister Yuan's shop were just mentioned without even mentioning the outcome. Phoenix and Bai Wei appear very rarely in the first period, and I even doubted whether the other Phoenix was raised to death. In the last few dozen chapters, Major General Xie said "it's been arranged", and the food at the end was also very careless. The introduction did not mention 5000 blood, part-time jobs were not upgraded, and the skill cards were not foreshadowed. Although the ending was reasonable, it gave people an unsatisfactory feeling. The personal space is not mentioned at the end. In the end, the only players the protagonist knows are Orange, the deputy leader and the one in the gang who can cook. There is not even a group portrait, which makes people feel that the game is only played by these few people. Birdman 18 did not reveal his identity in the end. Binzi Qiangzi pulled out the proper tool man to whip the corpse and ended it hastily. The apprentice of the unknown old man knew the identity of the unknown old man. You didn't write about the beggar who originally took in the proprietress and her sister. It's not as if the three stall owners were just giving away mission props. The owner of the Heartless Valley just rushed to the street without explaining what happened in the valley. The plum blossom tree mentioned by the three old people was not crossed three times. Wu Jiugui has not been seen since he finally left the village. The village chief is also like a decoration. How about the ending of Granny Kuang and the village chief? Granny Kuang has not been seen since leaving the village. The two medicine boys at least mentioned it later, but Bai Qing is so talented, and the foreshadowing of her special identity has disappeared. The good plot in the town did not even have a word about the court at the end... I was a little disappointed. I stayed up late to read the novel at the beginning and found it more and more strange. It's so weird that even Gan Xue was procrastinating and repeatedly whipping corpses to do all the stupid things when he went to the street. It felt like a stupid villain. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist came so quickly that there was no accumulation of the original plot. The new story felt anticlimactic... Let's check the new story to see if there is any improvement. I hope you won't let me down again...

I have finished reading. The layout and framework of the novel are adequate, but the middle is too slow. I almost gave up several times. I just wanted to see the foreshadowing. I persisted. However, many of the foreshadowings in the middle were too messy and confusing to read. I was very tired from reading this novel... I thought it was a refreshing novel, but it didn't seem to be particularly enjoyable. I thought it was an upgraded monster-fighting novel, but many places that deserved more scenes were solved in one stroke... Which is inexplicable? All in all, it's a bit anticlimactic... I was initially intrigued, but this is what happened? Is this the end? It feels... And the portrayal of the heroine is a bit characterless, neither smart nor distinctive. All the adventures are delivered to the door. Is God force-feeding her? This aura makes me blind... I can't even tell what kind of person the heroine is when I look at her. You say how kind she is, but I don't feel how good she is to the game's NPCs or pets or friends outside the game... I can only say that she is an ordinary person with a huge aura of the heroine and nothing serious. To be honest, I think these are Halo estimates that the heroine of the villain will be better than the heroine... Of course, I am not saying that the heroine's behavior of traveling through time and stealing the achievements of the heroine is right, but the heroine is like a child with treasures. It is a pity. I hope that the heroine of the next book will have more personality, instead of the kind that is not good even with all the gold fingers?

I came here for the copywriting, and I endured it until I finished reading it. All I can say is that it is just a running account, and the pacing is mediocre. There is no climax in the whole process, and it is always stuck in an awkward position. It is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. And it's unfinished. A lot of the foreshadowing in the past has been sent. There are too many things I want to write and I can't grasp the writing skills. It feels like new things are constantly appearing, including NPCs in the pet gang rankings, etc. However, the world view in the later period is very poor and extremely rough. I regret not checking the ratings before watching, I am speechless. The evaluation of the book cannot exceed 125 words. I feel that the emotional scenes must also be complained about. You don't have to write the emotional lines. I can only describe the relationship together as "inexplicable". It is simply the complete Waterloo of my many years of literary reading. No more words.

It feels like after I left Novice Village, the things about Jueqing Valley that appeared suddenly seemed like another martial arts book. I was obviously writing about farming before, and the copy was sparse and messy. Indeed, there were too many details about repeatedly delivering meals in the village. Moreover, the whole novel is really long-winded. The writing is not so slobbery. It feels very tiring to read.

Come on, author, I'm really speechless after reading this. It's so obvious that I want to finish.

It really sucks. . .

How to put it this way, the novel is positioned as a game, but there is no game at all in the ending, and there is no ending in the game. The emotional line is a little more delicate than the previous book, and the male protagonist has more presence, but the game does not have an ending. I am a little disappointed. Is it true that after playing the game, everyone gave up on it? The endings of the two books are about the game being hastily wrapped up, and the foreshadowing that was put out is not taken back, which is uncomfortable.

After reading it, there is a very important question that seems to have not been answered. Chapter 39 mentioned that people who awaken to spiritual experience will have a short life span. The more powerful they are, the shorter their life span will be. Does that mean that the male and female protagonists will inevitably die young?

The male protagonist's sense of existence is so weak that it feels far-fetched. If possible, I will write without CP from now on.

This world is so crazy, the mouse is the bridesmaid to the cat~