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--She is the dazzling galaxy, and the love of his life.
When Jiang Liu was nine, a handsome older boy moved in next door.
His name was Zhou Bochen. He was only two years older than her, but he was terribly aloof and hardly ever spoke.
The first time Jiang Liu brought a plate of fruit over for Uncle Zhou, she accidentally stepped on and broke Zhou Bochen's aircraft carrier model.
The boy's eyes turned red. He swept her fruit plate to the floor, frightening her into tears.
But what stayed in Jiang Liu's memory wasn't Zhou Bochen knocking over her fruit plate. It was the wind catching his clothes and his scent as the boy, growing taller with every passing season, rode his bike with her to and from school.
Zhou Bochen was cool and taciturn, but he never held back from treating her gently.
Jiang Liu didn't know when she had fallen for him.
She only knew that he had always treated her like a little sister, and she had only dared to think of him as an older brother.
Until he graduated from high school and got together with another girl.
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They met again three years later.
In the ranks of new students at L University during military training, a man slowly walked up to her, his gaze cold. He wore green camouflage, his tall, straight figure striking. Beneath the shadow of his military cap, his sharply defined features were faintly visible.
Jiang Liu didn't dare look up at him, but in the end, she couldn't help sneaking a quick glance.
Then Zhou Bochen said coldly, "Did I tell you to look at me?"
So cold and distant, as if they were strangers.
But Jiang Liu didn't know that the moment Zhou Bochen saw her, his heart began to ache with a heavy, stifling pain.
She didn't know that through all the years after he lost his mother, she had come into his life.
Like an angel.
In his memories, that little girl tugged at his sleeve, sometimes aggrieved, sometimes sweet, sometimes hiding a little secret. She always called him softly, "Big brother."
But he had lost her.
Now that she had appeared before him again,
he didn't want to miss her ever again.
A cool, aloof air force pilot X a warm, healing young writer
Both are each other's first love, childhood friends, mutually in love in secret
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Theme: Pursuing your dreams
After reading it, I skipped reading. To be honest, I always felt that the description of the characters was not vivid enough. I didn't feel like I was entering the novel after reading it for a long time. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Please don't criticize me.
Negative points, I can't stand it anymore, can't the male protagonist just confess his love? Now that it's all said and done, can you please make it clear? Otherwise, who would fall in love with you if you already have someone you like? Want to be ambiguous? You insist that the heroine touch everything in front of you, but you don't want to pay at all? Pretentious.
I don't know if it's because the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist in the early stage disgusted me, but now I feel a bit awkward when I see the male protagonist and the female protagonist together.
The male protagonist pretends to be in love, but he still kisses the baby of his love interest. He saves a depressed girl and travels with him for three years... Is this still his first love???
It's seriously unfinished, and the author's previous copywriting notice stated that the results of the leave exam week would not be updated for three months. I updated on the verge of time to solve v. I didn't even apologize to the readers, I kept pretending to be dumbfounded from behind. It's the first time I've read an article and I'm so angry. I won't talk about the bad ending. Many bugs have not been corrected. Regarding the double first love in the copywriting, I suggest you change it. The male protagonist is not the male protagonist. In order to save the female partner, the male protagonist installed central air conditioning, fell in love with the female partner, kissed, and traveled together. A secret love is a unilateral and humble secret love that the heroine has. The hero hooks his little finger and the heroine follows. I was so angry when I encountered this kind of nonsense. I bought it and read it just to see how the author completes the plot. If it turns out that it doesn't work out, I'll just let myself go and write randomly. The supporting cast attracted so many people and the ending was not revealed in the end. The author doesn't even have the courage to apologize (regarding the issue of deliberate discontinuation of updates)
I think it looks pretty. Why do so many people say it doesn't look good?
So pretentious, really so pretentious.
After reading the comments, I decided not to give up and subscribed, intending to read on. However, this article really corresponds to the title of the work. It's already over fifty chapters and I'm still scratching my head. To be honest, only the female protagonist can bear such a stomach-ache and discomfort. Anyway, I may have no patience at all when I meet such a person in real life. I hate the practice of using other members of the opposite sex to test the person I like (most importantly). You even kissed me) How come there is such a disgusting person, and the problem of the female protagonist is not resolved. Even if he is with the female protagonist later, is it possible that such a "gentle and considerate" man should be separated from the female protagonist after receiving the news that the female protagonist is committing suicide?
I really like it. The two-way secret thoughts in the front are very real. They obviously like both parties, but they both think they like others. The back part is so sweet.
I haven't canceled it yet because the comment section of this book is so exciting. I also wanted to see how the male protagonist bleached his hair. However, the male protagonist is still like that. The female protagonist was quite lovable at first, but why has she become more and more love-minded and has no bottom line? I think the main male protagonist is not worth it.