After Preventing the Tragic Hero from Getting 404'D

The settings of the female characters in the novel are very flat. The author worked hard to add that all the right-hand men around the protagonist in the original novel were homosexuals, and was unwilling to give the female characters a reasonable logic of blackening, just like to show the brainless viciousness of the original harem girls, just like It is to deliberately highlight how fresh and refined the protagonist is. The character setting is quite flat, and there is no effort at all to create the character. Not to mention that there are female characters, which are also very one-sided. They are the most common good guy characters in novels, and they don't even put much thought into it. We spend money to read novels just because we want to see that every character has his or her own position and that the characters are well-developed. The most unacceptable thing in the whole novel is that the descriptions of some female characters are very blunt, and their thoughts are also very one-sided and vicious female supporting characters that are common on the market. I can only say that the author can carefully write some logic and settings that female villains should have next time. Many other characters in the protagonist group are well described and complete. The story is also very good. Although it is a bit frustrating to read later, it is also very realistic. As I said, everyone has their own position. I hope the author can pay more attention to the small characters. After all, it is really irritating to see a character in a good novel who has not been carefully developed at first glance.

I have read this article three times, once in elementary school, junior high school, and high school, and have already ordered it all. So I think I can evaluate this article First of all, people who love this article love it very much, but people who don't like it will find it very uncomfortable. The author wanted to write a story that was less intellectual and more structured, so he arranged a lot of twists and turns in the plot. It turns out that the author's ideas are good, but his writing skills are insufficient. There are many flaws in the article, which is a bit too high-minded and too low-key. The biggest flaw is the portrayal of the characters, the protagonists Shi Qin and Cheng Yu. What I don't understand the most is that later on, Shi Qin gave up his current life to live with Cheng Yu, and directly gave up his studies. In order to beautify this behavior, the author arranged for his family members to understand him. For this behavior, his brother, sister, and parents all showed a kind of support that was difficult for me to understand. They used support to downplay the conflict, and even used stingy pen and ink to describe the struggle of the family members who loved him. Only his friends will fight for him. Shi Qin, where is your ideal? The author paid more attention to portraying Cheng Yu, but for Shi Qin, something seemed to be missing. I was very distressed when I saw the plot being dissected, but I also understood that it was necessary for the plot. I have seen the first version and the later revised version. But I still feel that there is no need to describe the pain of the plot in such detail. This will really make it difficult to convince readers when those people are punished later. Because the author seems to have once again touched on the pain of those people. . . For Cheng Yu, Cheng Yu is very responsible and responsible in the early stage, and will appease his subordinates and stabilize the morale of the army. His plot flaws are not as serious as Shi Qin's. But later on, I sometimes feel that it is too cruel, and my management ability is not good for some reason. The characters are a bit distorted. But all in all it's still acceptable There are more flaws in the supporting characters. Especially the female characters, they are stupid and bad, too stereotyped, and the bad ones are a bit overlapping. The male characters are slightly better, but in the later stage, I felt that the supporting roles of the anatomy protagonists were not handled very well. Especially the plot of Pei describes his past and gives a lot of words about what this is for the world, blah blah blah. Even though the people he values ​​​​died because of his research, he still treats others in a cruel way. It makes me feel very hypocritical and alienated. It's better not to wash it at all But having said all that, I still love this article. Although he has a lot of flaws. The author's writing skills are insufficient, but the plot is still okay. I said it bluntly that if the author could handle it better, many of the plots could be very touching and the plot would be bigger, and there wouldn't be so much controversy. I always feel a little aggrieved after reading this article, mainly because there is too much bitterness and too little sweetness, and the focus is unbalanced. The author himself admitted it in his whispers at the end of the article. But the emotional line is really okay. You can feel that the protagonists truly love each other. I still like this article very much, even if it is not excellent

After reading it, I found that one chapter was skipped, but it did not affect my understanding of the plot... The first part is very interesting, but the second part feels very long... And there are a lot of typos, and some typos are very confusing. After Shi Qin came back, he felt that the plot was not good... But the beginning was very good and the ending was also very good... If I could give it a 4.5 Rating.

This ending is really heartbreaking. That day, Cheng Yu met a special zombie, a zombie that changed his destiny, his fateful lover. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

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After reading the article, here are my thoughts after reading it: First of all, this article is much better written than the Master's reverse routine article, and there is not as much nonsense in plot advancement and design as that article. I feel the improvement of the author's writing skills, which at least makes people want to read on. Secondly, this novel still has shortcomings, that is, the author omits too much in advancing the plot. Many expressions are like an outline, and I feel that the details need to be considered. If you decide to write a full-length novel, you need to pay attention to transition chapters and key chapters. This is my personal opinion. Then, regarding the portrayal of the protagonist Shou Shiqin, I feel that the highlight is still a little lacking, and there is almost no sense of participation. Especially in the final battle, for the protagonist Shou Shiqin, my impression is almost the same as the background plate No. 1. The same goes for the misunderstanding about a month. The deliberately created conflict may be the author's original intention to increase the interest and sympathize with the young couple, but when I saw it, I just felt it was so long-winded and boring. Instead of feeling distressed, I felt a little irritated. From this point of view, is the author's design reasonable? Finally, regarding the retribution of the villains, I always feel that it lacks an epic feel, and Guo Yi cannot shoulder the mission and shape of a great villain. However, the biggest highlight of the entire article, and the author's writing is good, is Gong's self-strategy and paranoia. I'm going to taste the next one, and wish the author better and better

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They are finally happy forever, I really cried to death

I also forgot to mention one thing. What I care about more is the deputy cp. Fortunately, the content is not high in the main text. If it were all a pair of pairs, it would be really embarrassing and funny, and the world would be unified or something. Moreover, if you write too many deputy CPs, the main CP will be very limited. It feels like they don't have to be in pairs, they are all boys. Also, there is no need to arrange a powerful awakened person to fall in love with Gong. I feel that he has no role in promoting the plot, but makes people feel uncomfortable. How about arranging an affectionate second male lead for Shou?