Rainbow Wind

So Mary Sue actually said that she is not omnipotent??? The vampire Slytherin, the basilisk, the contract, magic text, alchemy, snake language, or the master of Hogwarts??? Nicolas (Nicole May) worked so hard on alchemy and how old is your heroine before you can do this??? Is it easy to hack Lao Deng out of nowhere??? Although I am a fan of the professor, it is true that the professor was a Death Eater at the beginning. It is also true that Lao Deng later helped the professor. It is also true that he prevented the professor from entering Azkaban. Although Lily died, that was Pettigrew's problem, wasn't it??? Veritaserum is difficult to make, and its use is not specifically prohibited. Legilimency??? Do you think Lao Deng is the devil of slicing??? Lao Deng's love for his students is true. For Draco, he could choose to let the professor Avatar him. At the beginning, he was not as wary of Tom as in the fanfic, and it was normal for him to be wary of Tom. Because of his worship of dark magic when he was young, his sister died at the hands of Muggles, his brother broke up with him, and finally parted ways with Grindelwald. When meeting someone of the same type, wouldn't it be better to be a little more wary??? And Slice would still have taken this road even without Lao Deng. After all, Voldemort comes from French, Flying Away from Death. I suggest the author read more!!! And, since you write fan fiction, you need to at least watch the Harry Potter movies, read the original books, and listen to the interview with the magic mother. If you are not blindly talking nonsense, then you should know that wizards do not have nobility. After all, regardless of the indigenous people in the East, the West, or even Africa, the reason why they are called nobility is because of their fiefdoms. In medieval Europe, land was used as a link to connect hierarchical relationships. Therefore, Slytherin is not a noble, but just a rich or powerful elite among pure bloods. And there are many errors in details, such as the arrangement of the positions of various houses in the auditorium. Gryffindor should be in the middle and Slytherin on the left. Although I like the Platinum family very much, they are really not like this in the book and movie. How can you see a well-educated aristocrat attacking a child (Secret Room). The professor's personality is very problematic. He can't be that kind to a child, and he can't let her skip class. The wizarding world should be very rigid about education (you can tell from the teaching content that almost never changes), and the character's emotions are always It's blunt and inexplicable, and there are so many flaws that I really can't complain about it.

What about the promised second part? …Where? ... Sir, please come back soon!!!

I want to watch the second part~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Is there anyone??

Is this a spoof??? Thanks~~~Collect~

Embarrassing. . . Damn, you are so naughty

This article is great, I like it very much

Then after Harry told about the person they saw, the entire school staff tried to hold on to the out-of-control Dumbledore, who was crying: "My love - he is back!" Damn it, very powerful

Finally, I had finished reading and I must say this is one of the BEST fanfiction had ever read. I really love your writing style, it is simple and easily understand. I also love that this fanfiction had no CP and ambiguity. Gambate!!!

"I am committed to protecting the transmission of house elves' service culture, so you must learn from house elves their excellent skills... Such as crafts, cooking, cleaning..." Haha... Squirted!!

In fact, as long as she has that face, no matter what figure she goes with, everyone will care about Voldy-san~