Love Has Gone

Love this ending. The finish is long. . .

Thank you so much. I like the heroine's character very much. Once you lose some things, you won't look back.

It's a really good article, and I can't describe it in words. At least I felt the heart-rending pain that I wanted to describe and the calmness of my last effort. Regarding the ending, I can only say that I am very helpless, and that is how life is. Thank you for sending such a good article~^_^

Surprisingly, now I can leave messages from the background again. Since I have already commented on it, I will treat it as if I am posting it just for this purpose, because it still shows that I have not commented on this article. . .

Since I learned about infertility, my writing has become more and more brilliant, but overall it still seems a bit dull. Regarding this, I think it is because of the way it is written. This article is written like a diary, with more talk than statement, so that the plot and the reader are always separated by a veil. As mentioned before, this problem got better after infertility. In addition to the writing skills, the structural arrangement is also lacking in planning. The article seems to look at the mountains but not the plains, and plot twists are naturally indispensable. However, how to cut into the story and how to arrange the plot sequence to arouse the momentum of the article and arouse the reader's interest in reading also need to be figured out. Moreover, short stories especially pay attention to the overall layout arrangement. In terms of storytelling methods, this article is too simple. Let's talk about the ending again. The ending was a bit rushed and there was not enough foreshadowing, and it was not clear that the female protagonist had much need to push away the male protagonist. This article seems to have a basis in life. If you put it into practice properly, it should become a good article. Finally, I didn't expect that I could still find my article collection post now. Haha, I participated in Jinjiang's article collection and comment activity, and later received a reward. I thought this matter was over, although I did not stop collecting articles. PS: I posted this message several times in the background without success. It seems that Jinjiang automatically excluded me from leaving comments after giving the reward. So I posted it here directly.

Since I learned about infertility, my writing has become more and more brilliant, but overall it still seems a bit dull. Regarding this, I think it is because of the way it is written. This article is written like a diary, with more talk than statement, so that the plot and the reader are always separated by a veil. As mentioned before, this problem got better after infertility. In addition to the writing skills, the structural arrangement is also lacking in planning. The article seems to look at the mountains but not the plains, and plot twists are naturally indispensable. However, how to cut into the story and how to arrange the plot sequence to arouse the momentum of the article and arouse the reader's interest in reading also need to be figured out. Moreover, short stories especially pay attention to the overall layout arrangement. In terms of storytelling methods, this article is too simple. Let's talk about the ending again. The ending was a bit rushed and there was not enough foreshadowing, and it was not clear that the female protagonist had much need to push away the male protagonist. This article seems to have a basis in life. If you put it into practice properly, it should become a good article. Finally, I didn't expect that I could still find my article collection post now. Haha, I participated in Jinjiang's article collection and comment activity, and later received a reward. I thought this matter was over, although I did not stop collecting articles.

- -I read the word count wrong, embarrassing, but I like this article

- -I hate this kind of old woman the most. She is very gossipy and unreasonable.

It's the relationship between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law again... By the way, I really hate children.

Phew, it's actually a short story - -. . .