The Record of Cultivating Immortality in the Myriad Realms

Why is the Perfect Avenger locked? Big!!!

Damn, why is your article locked??? I'm broken

This text is too dense. Woo woo woo, I suddenly thought of the knowledge that the text wanted to force onto me. The whole page is filled with commas and periods, divided into paragraphs, good sisters

The narrative description is pretty good, but the character portrayal feels uncomfortable. Qin is too greasy, and the mermaid feels weird to me, like a bitch. The protagonist is okay, but it feels a bit silly and sweet.

Please update ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I don't know if it's a cp-free article.

The details at the beginning are really nice, and the items in the space are also specially named. Unlike some articles that directly add a spirit before the name of the item, it is something in the world of cultivation.

The content is a bit bland, like a running account, and not engaging. But there are no big flaws, it's pretty good.

I don't think you should call others young people. Most people would call them young men or something like that.