Behind the Whole Game

So what? He or be? Cry loudly>_<|||

It's a pretty good article, good luck to the author~

The writing is pretty good, although it's a bit of a pity that the only ending is Draco and Black.

Talk. . . I think this article is pretty good, although there are some flaws in it. . . The overall storyline, at least I don't think it's the same content I've seen in other fics. . . . Of course, there are many similarities with the original work. . . But it's actually a fan, so I think it's okay. . . The plot of this article can be said to be very fast. . . I think the author may not have intended to write it so carefully, right? ? Many details are not noted. . . . It jumps from one plot to the next very quickly. . . About the end of the story. . . Can it be said that the original BE was followed by the comforting HE? ? First, everyone who can die is dead like in the original work. . . . I don't know what the use of the protagonist and Peter knowing the original content of HP is. . . . No one was saved. . . . Lao Deng, professor, Lu Ping. . . All dead. . . . The final ending of the article is like the author couldn't change it and wrote it as BE. . . I don't want to be BE. . . So simply travel through time again? ? But it's not enough to rely on your own literary talent. . . So I still feel that the author can write this article much better than me. . I think the author can work harder and write better in the future~~

What's going on with this ending?

It's Sirius, not the heart...

It's very interesting. Although I didn't understand a few chapters, it was well written! Nice to say!

Chaos~!! The plot is very confusing, many key points are omitted, and it is very hard to figure out... The timetable is not clear, it is too montage... The framework, settings, etc. Are all very good. Looking forward to an overhaul of this article…

I hope to continue updating. It's been a long time and I don't even remember the past.

Oh~~~Come home from get off work~~~Sit on the sofa