She prayed to God to take away her loneliness. She begged God not to abandon her again or deprive her of the right to cry. She had no family and no friends. Lonely by nature, she fell in love with her half-brother. Her love was rejected by her classmates at the beginning, and by family ties at the end. At last, the truth surfaced, and the cruel reality drowned her in the blue sea. From birth until the end of her life, she silently bore everything alone. He wanted to love her, but he didn’t dare and couldn’t, because God seemed to have taken away her right to love. What she didn’t know was that the person she loved was just as deeply in love with her. He stepped out of her imaginary world and came to her side, protecting and loving her at all costs, because only they could understand each other’s lives. Their tragic love was frozen in that moment…
Why didn't Wubie take Meila away?
There are typos, come on
The idea is okay, very good.
OK! There's something to see
I am your brother. Why is it that one chapter is shorter than the other, but it is well written, with good language and plot. But the format can be improved.
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Well, this chapter is also very good Come on
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Very good, keep up the good work!!!
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