Into the Cycle of Rebirth

(Not a writing guide, just a review) The completeness of the story is good, everything that needs to be rounded is rounded, and there are several big scenes that impressed me deeply. The expansion of the dungeon and the revelation of the final world view are also very innovative, such as the melting pot, the setting of the Meat and Wine Forest, and the development of the live broadcast room in this dungeon. It is a pity that I did not write a few more dungeons. I still want to continue reading. The only problem is that the character creation is a bit lacking. Some characters appeared so far apart that I didn't remember them. Originally, several characters were designed with distinctive features and could have been developed into group portraits, but it was a pity that they had too few scenes. This is just the first one, and it has great potential. I look forward to the next one!

I am number one, hahaha

Yay! The article I was stuck on back then, I came back to read it after a long time and it's actually finished.

Look what I found! Is it really over? ! I'm so excited, I plan to do it all over again.

Heaven and man hang upside down, it's like a picture

Finally! The last copy! It is expected to end around chapter 20! Thank you all for your perseverance. I knew I was very slow but I didn't expect it to be so slow... In short, I hope everything will be over this month or next month (forget it, I won't set the flag yet) All in all, new friends who are new to the industry should be careful to avoid me as a pigeon, and I recommend raising it as a waste (humble. Jpg) By the way, although it may be a little early, I still climbed up and asked in a low voice, what extra episode do you want to watch?

Finally updated! Is this copy a rule-based fantasy?

Happy New Year, Anzhao, great writing! (?▽`)

The two of them died for their love. In this context, both of them are quite powerful. One has his own ideas and breaks through the old ideas. The other is an undercover agent for the country and is a great hero.

"Just look at it, the wall" is a big bug for the author~