When the Port Mafia's Young Lady Enters an Escape Game

First, finish scattering flowers! ! ! ! It took me an entire afternoon to finally read this article. Personally, I am super satisfied! ! ! ! Since I usually read the comments section first and then read the article (I know this habit is bad, but I can't change it...), I also know how likely it is that a relatively comprehensive positive review can lead people into a trap. Here I will briefly talk about my feelings. For those who are attracted by the copy but are hesitant, take a look! The following content contains a small amount of spoilers (but there will be no specific plot, only some keywords) + personal subjective color [highlight], so some sisters who disagree with me please point out tactfully, Arigado! My first feeling after reading this article was that I was very moved. It is a heart-warming cookie article in which Chuuya and Dazai stumble through different dungeons and finally gain love and trust. Judging from the writing style, storyline, and the development of the emotional line, you can clearly feel the author's great progress and intention. The writing style is very smooth, and no part rushes out suddenly inexplicably. Some places are also explained clearly in the text, so normal reading will not affect the perception. Then there is the storyline, which I want to single out specifically. In the first chapter, it was actually a bit hasty. It only explained the background and Dazai's appearance, which gave people a feeling that the ending was very inappropriate. Then some sisters expressed their slight disappointment below, but then, you will find that the feeling is completely different. In fact, starting from the second copy - Linhai Kingdom, the quality has been significantly and extremely stable improved. I don't mean to say that the first one is bad, I just think that some things may need to be refined a little more. (Absolutely, there is no writing guidance here!!! I have completely received nine years of compulsory education, and my parents are safe. I don't bother the sisters. It's just my own feelings, just to set off the leap in the future [top the pot lid]) The development of the subsequent plot is getting better and better, but it can also be seen that Da DaDa is very busy in reality, so sometimes there will be some typos and wrong sentences. I hope Da Da Da will come back to fix it if I have time! Moreover, in this article, I have the opportunity to see Chuya wearing various small skirts and Dazai (?) Wearing skirts and private clothes randomly. The foreshadowing is well laid out, and in the last copy of the article (please allow me to call each small world this way, it is a game after all), it is about them meeting their 16-year-old selves. The writing is super fun and cute hehe. In terms of the emotional line, it was a bit worrying at first, but by the end of the story, it felt like it was natural and natural. Dazai gradually let go of his heart, and no longer used the way of fighting each other to attract Zhongya's attention like before. Instead, he seriously showed his feelings to Zhongya every time (ah, I really need to boast about the details here). Although Zhongya didn't believe it at first~ Although Dazai often talked a lot, he was very good at being restrained and a gentleman. Love is restrained and deeply affectionate. As for Chuuya, although he always shows us his specialty - stir-fried bandage essence, he is also gentle and gentle in some aspects. It can be said that they are the most suitable people for each other. There is OOC, but it is slight! To sum up, in the whole emotional scene, Dazai was jealous and competed with others. Jiuye also warned of micro-group favors. Jiuye often helped Dazai deal with his ex-girlfriend and gradually became a proficient business (?). Ah, I want to say here that the so-called ex-girlfriend is just a tool to support Ba Liao. She has no specific role and is only used as a joke. Um... That's it in general. I think that if you are interested, you can give it a try. At the same time, author, I am interested in the advance collection of your "Miss Yokohama's Youth Love Story", and I look forward to publishing it! Finally, I wish the author will get better and better both in terms of life and writing skills, and to write more excellent works! ! At the same time, I also hope to see the babies here happy every day! Kitten Refill~

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, as expected of Dazai Osamu, you can do it

Yokohama has tens of thousands of supernatural powers, half of them in Central Plains (dog head)

Hahaha I cheated myself, Dazai's routine operation (no

Make trouble! Make trouble! Chuuya's favorability is dropping like crazy. Do you know how long you have been doing it in the future? Dazai!

False mission: find the crystal and return to the original world Real mission: Remind your past self of cross-dressing Plan Pass (√)

As expected of you, Dazai Osamu

Ahahahahahahahahaha! ! ! Crazy, hahahahahaha! ! !

Looking forward to the scene where the two pairs of double blacks meet, it will be very interesting hahaha.

You are the one who deceived yourself, as expected, Xiaotu Zaiji