The writing is good, the psychological description of grief is appropriate, and it is close to the true character of the character~~
However, there is no clear explanation of Lan's death, and in Conan, Lan does not die easily. She is the "powerful heroine----Angel Lan" created by Aoyama himself, so the first sentence "Lan is dead" is a bit abrupt
This -2 points is not for your article, but for your book review, which makes me very disappointed as a Conan fan. The article in Jinjiangli is only for the article, not the characters~ If you think it is because of my poor writing style, poor conception, and outrageous writing, there is nothing to be said for it. If you give me -2 points because of my reading experience, then I have nothing to say about your book review, but if you give me -2 points because I write about Xinlan fandom, then I am really disappointed!!!!! I hope you can feel a little bit...
Also, don't think that all orchid fans don't like Ai. Ai's maturity and rationality are also what orchid fans like~~
Lan, sorry~~~Why are you all so boring~~~~-_-|||
You are one and there is another one named Ailan Yiying, and they can only write this!!!!!!!!!!!!
The writing is pretty good and very emotional. It would be difficult to write something emotional without having a previous relationship experience. Although it is a bit tragic, it may be caused by that feeling~~~ People in love are very stupid and often keep their mistakes in their own arms. In fact, as long as you share your feelings with the other person, you will not be so painful, and you will not feel that you are the only bad person, so good~
Reading your article, it's quite strange. Is Conan or Kudo the protagonist? After all, there is still a big age gap. A bit strange. But I still send you flowers because you used your imagination. I like Haiyuan very much and even imitated Haiyuan's personality for a while. But it didn't work. However, Xiaolan's death also hit me hard. Can you explain in more detail how Xiaolan died? In my memory, Xiaolan seemed to be with Shinichi in the original work, so she didn't die.
Very beautiful, I like it
The writing is good, the psychological description of grief is appropriate, and it is close to the true character of the character~~ However, there is no clear explanation of Lan's death, and in Conan, Lan does not die easily. She is the "powerful heroine----Angel Lan" created by Aoyama himself, so the first sentence "Lan is dead" is a bit abrupt
This -2 points is not for your article, but for your book review, which makes me very disappointed as a Conan fan. The article in Jinjiangli is only for the article, not the characters~ If you think it is because of my poor writing style, poor conception, and outrageous writing, there is nothing to be said for it. If you give me -2 points because of my reading experience, then I have nothing to say about your book review, but if you give me -2 points because I write about Xinlan fandom, then I am really disappointed!!!!! I hope you can feel a little bit... Also, don't think that all orchid fans don't like Ai. Ai's maturity and rationality are also what orchid fans like~~
Lan, sorry~~~Why are you all so boring~~~~-_-||| You are one and there is another one named Ailan Yiying, and they can only write this!!!!!!!!!!!!
The writing is pretty good and very emotional. It would be difficult to write something emotional without having a previous relationship experience. Although it is a bit tragic, it may be caused by that feeling~~~ People in love are very stupid and often keep their mistakes in their own arms. In fact, as long as you share your feelings with the other person, you will not be so painful, and you will not feel that you are the only bad person, so good~
Reading your article, it's quite strange. Is Conan or Kudo the protagonist? After all, there is still a big age gap. A bit strange. But I still send you flowers because you used your imagination. I like Haiyuan very much and even imitated Haiyuan's personality for a while. But it didn't work. However, Xiaolan's death also hit me hard. Can you explain in more detail how Xiaolan died? In my memory, Xiaolan seemed to be with Shinichi in the original work, so she didn't die.