[Soukoku] Those Years of Dazai and Chuuya

Zhongye is so direct. That's great.

Wuwuwu, double black is the best, double black is real!!

The long review dad promised is here! Your article is like a slow flowing stream, elegant and smooth. The writing is beautiful, the emotions are sincere and delicate, and it has a personal style. I hope you will continue to pick up the waves of life on your writing journey and make your style more perfect! Hahahahahaha Anyway, here are two sentences: I can't find any fault with the writing style. I feel like it's a bit abrupt at the end, maybe because you were in a hurry to finish the article, haha. Anyway, the writing is really getting better and better, come on, no one will remember to come to me to read it!

Hahaha my focus has always been on Zhongya being deceived

Hahahaha I really love Sister Hongye so much.

I didn't see any bugs myself, no need for anyone to point them out, thank you! Let's not change it for now. It will take another hour and a half to change two words (smile

Hongye: My white and fat Chinese cabbage

Come, say it with me: Double Black is real!!! My wife's writing is already very good. My wife and I should be the same age, right? And now I am still the only one who can only shout: Mrs. Saigao! The wife is getting married! Little trash...

Thank you very much. I finally found an article without any pitfalls.

It's so sweet, so I'm sure there won't be more chapters!