The Empress Does as She Pleases

So does the emperor take care of his skin? Do you want to share it with the heroine?

I finally stayed up late to read this book. I was attracted by the introduction of the copywriting, and I was a little disappointed from the bottom of my heart when I saw the end, but after seeing what the author said in the essay, I think it is understandable. The writing style can be gradually improved, but the author's sense of responsibility in not directly ruining the text is very worthy of encouragement. Then write a long review to share some of my personal feelings, first talking about the shortcomings and then the advantages. My general feeling after reading the full text is that it feels a bit like a novice? First of all, the most interesting thing is that the male protagonist is an emperor, but in the text he doesn't seem like that kind of scheming person. He doesn't have the composure and ruthlessness of being an emperor. I think he can be like this in front of the heroine, but overall his image is not plump enough. In short, the male and female protagonists, including the Queen Mother, seem to be a bit intellectually inferior or younger for some reason. In addition, there is a question about whether this "redemption" is a turning point for the heroine herself. To be honest, the appearance and ending of this scene are a bit inexplicable. It would be better to just make it sweet and not have this scene at the end. And what happened that year that caused the male protagonist to remember it for so many years? It seems that the author didn't write it out? Of course, considering that I may be in bad shape in the later stages of the game, I think it's understandable that I won't be able to write the original idea. Carvin is something that happens to every author. But the ending of the Queen Mother is also a bit hasty. In my opinion, the Queen Mother's line can be cut off directly from behind the imperial mausoleum, which is a bit redundant. The advantages are also obvious. The author's greatest advantage lies in writing sweet articles. Many aspects of the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists are indeed sweet to me! The clumsy and blushing appearance in front of the heroine can arouse the reader's imagination, and the description that makes people feel picturesque is the best part. I still like the rivalry between them, especially as an emperor washes his hands and makes soup for the queen! Real! Of! Too! Sweet! Got it! The second point is as I said before, I think I am very good at writing copywriting. I like this setting and copywriting very much. Keeping this advantage will attract more readers to read the article! I think the name is pretty good! (Because I know that some authors' copywriting is so useless that people don't have the desire to click in and read it…so being able to write good copywriting is also a skill!) As far as the current writing style is concerned, I think we can consider starting with campus writing and then writing more difficult sections that require a more three-dimensional image. Otherwise, there may be a so-called "insufficient writing power". You can also consider not spreading out the emotional lines of so many supporting characters. When practicing writing in the early stage, you can consider treating the supporting characters as tool people. I think the protagonist's opposite role is much more important than the supporting role. Then I suggest that when writing transitions and more three-dimensional images, you can consider asking friends who have read more articles or other authors to help you with advice, so that you can check for gaps and fill them in a timely manner. As for the author's previous works, I think it is very impressive to be able to reach such a level! Don't get discouraged, it's never easy at the beginning. I believe you will write better when you gain experience. I look forward to seeing you write more exciting words in the future~(^з^)-☆Come on!

The emperor is not a waste, isn't he? His rights are being squandered, isn't he? What kind of nanny dares to call out the emperor and the empress? Do you know what kind of crime can be punished if you dare to ruin the clothes of the Mother of a Nation, a powerful Mother of a Nation? It's normal to kill her. How useless is the heroine? The former servant and maid dared to do something to her, but the latter one dared to ask her for an explanation?

"Zeng Jie" gave the author a big worm~ Zeng Zhi

Damn, the article is very good, come on!

No, something so bloody is about to happen.

Author: Is there something wrong with Hatsumomo? The Hatsumomo you described in these two chapters makes me so panicked. It's that sense of betrayal that is essential in palace fighting novels! Also, the thing Anyue-chan drank with her mother in the first two chapters was not tampered with by Hatsumomo, right? So panicked!

So the female guard didn't find such a cheater?

The male protagonist is quite cute, I like Yueyue

Ah, no more, do it quickly, do it quickly