Top: You know that feeling when you're playing a game and the level cap is 100, but by the time you reach level 99, you can't get invested in any of the story anymore? You've become nothing but a leveling tool.
Bottom: So that's why you treated me like a plot NPC, forced your way through the story, and wanted to get married as soon as you entered the mission world, just to end the mission?
System: A ten-year romance was forcibly turned into a short-distance sprint.
And the romance died of exhaustion.
System: You know people love that sweet, innocent feeling of mutual attraction, where both people see through it but never say it out loud?
Top: I know, but I'm in a hurry.
Also known as: How to Keep Getting Away with Everything When Your Affection Level Is 100; You're Just Taking Advantage of How Much He Spoils You; You've Changed. You're Not the Honest, Dependable You Who Used to Follow the Plot Properly.
Theme: Don't go through the motions, even when it comes to love
The front part is quite beautiful, and the interaction between the two of them is very loving, I really like it.
But this chapter felt like God was unfolding it, but I didn't understand it.
Can the author explain it?
He Shou was lying on the bed in the dormitory. Instead of comforting Shou, Gong gave her a ring.
I understand the general meaning of what you want to express, but when I saw this paragraph, I felt a little weird and uncomfortable for no reason. Maybe it was because I had the reaction of a normal person.
What I wrote above is so interesting. I like it~
Maybe it's because I didn't pay attention to the foreshadowing before.
If you still feel like this chapter is progressing very quickly, it feels like it's deliberately speeding up the ending.
The following articles are also locked, which makes people worry about whether I can continue writing them.
But the descriptions and interactions of the big and small details are really great! !
Thank you for your wonderful writing, which gave me unparalleled pleasure.
Please keep it up! Come on! !
This article is well written, and in terms of the collection, I feel like I have found some dusty jewelry. But the time line made me a little confused. I said earlier that I would give Wei Wan tutoring during the summer vacation, and now it is the end of the semester. The college entrance examination is in the summer, and after the college entrance examination is the summer vacation. If you sign up to retake it immediately after failing the college entrance examination, then I can understand this summer vacation. However, the semester should be over when the results are known. Under this premise, the senior high school students should have just returned to school early to study during the summer vacation, and it has not yet reached the official start time. So how can it be said that it is almost the end of the semester? If you have already passed the first semester of your senior year of high school, then the winter vacation will be at the end of this semester. Anyway, I'm a little confused. And the mistakes in the names Jiang He and Wei Wan always made me suddenly doubt my life while watching it, and I hope the author can improve it. I really like this article. I raise my doubts and suggestions in the hope that it will be better, and I hope it won't offend you.
Damn, I feel like Xiao Jiang's sincerity is not enough
Catch a bug: Wei Wan suppressed the call system's heart
Wei Wan: I don't like things like ooc
These two names are misspelled.
Let's catch a bug: but the depth of the soul, the soul?
Ahhhhh, died young?
Stop it, QAQ is so sweet, okay?
Minute by minute, Brother Jiang's lifeblood, hahaha
When will you be back?
The front part is quite beautiful, and the interaction between the two of them is very loving, I really like it. But this chapter felt like God was unfolding it, but I didn't understand it. Can the author explain it? He Shou was lying on the bed in the dormitory. Instead of comforting Shou, Gong gave her a ring. I understand the general meaning of what you want to express, but when I saw this paragraph, I felt a little weird and uncomfortable for no reason. Maybe it was because I had the reaction of a normal person. What I wrote above is so interesting. I like it~ Maybe it's because I didn't pay attention to the foreshadowing before. If you still feel like this chapter is progressing very quickly, it feels like it's deliberately speeding up the ending. The following articles are also locked, which makes people worry about whether I can continue writing them. But the descriptions and interactions of the big and small details are really great! ! Thank you for your wonderful writing, which gave me unparalleled pleasure. Please keep it up! Come on! !
This article is well written, and in terms of the collection, I feel like I have found some dusty jewelry. But the time line made me a little confused. I said earlier that I would give Wei Wan tutoring during the summer vacation, and now it is the end of the semester. The college entrance examination is in the summer, and after the college entrance examination is the summer vacation. If you sign up to retake it immediately after failing the college entrance examination, then I can understand this summer vacation. However, the semester should be over when the results are known. Under this premise, the senior high school students should have just returned to school early to study during the summer vacation, and it has not yet reached the official start time. So how can it be said that it is almost the end of the semester? If you have already passed the first semester of your senior year of high school, then the winter vacation will be at the end of this semester. Anyway, I'm a little confused. And the mistakes in the names Jiang He and Wei Wan always made me suddenly doubt my life while watching it, and I hope the author can improve it. I really like this article. I raise my doubts and suggestions in the hope that it will be better, and I hope it won't offend you.
Damn, I feel like Xiao Jiang's sincerity is not enough
Catch a bug: Wei Wan suppressed the call system's heart Wei Wan: I don't like things like ooc These two names are misspelled.
Let's catch a bug: but the depth of the soul, the soul?
Ahhhhh, died young?
Stop it, QAQ is so sweet, okay?
Minute by minute, Brother Jiang's lifeblood, hahaha
Hehe, hehehe, I can't help my aunt laughing