[Harry Potter] Being a Problem Student at Hogwarts

Something has been wrong ever since the crow turned into a human. Chuu Er explodes? Then Tom also became constrained. The logic of his behavior can be explained by being affected by black magic, but is it too much to worry about someone? After that, Tom developed all the way towards the evil god. In the first two volumes, we didn't see that Tom had any talent for dark magic, except that his name was similar to Voldemort's, and he bought a raven as a pet. Although the fate has been emphasized in the article, the second volume also recognized a magic teacher. However, the Tom in my heart is the kid who is loved by Fox, who will cry for Mrs. Norris, who has keen intuition and can guess that Snape is a spy, who will quarrel with Principal Dumbledore over Potter, and who does not want the special contribution award because it is not a good omen. Destiny? Ridiculous fate

I can only give you a suggestion. When writing articles in the future, you must write an outline first. The first half and the second half of the story are not very compatible, not to mention that there is a section in the middle that is very fantasy and immortal. Those who like to watch the later plots will run away without seeing the second part, and those who like the early plots will also run away from the latter. It feels like I have let myself go because I don't have an outline. However, Yuan Buhui reluctantly made up a new setting, which caused the second set to become too much and the overall flavor changed. It didn't look like a HP fan, and the ending was also anticlimactic. The first hundred chapters are really well written, but it's a bit strange that the protagonist transforms from a crow into a human without telling Colonel Deng. Even his rebellious mentality conflicts with the previous character. In many places, as many readers have said, he is reckless and cowardly. In short, the character is not fixed. I think the weirdest thing is that after the magic power is out of control, it is completely a second design, and the style of HP It just doesn't match, and since then, both Lao Fu's character and Snape and others have been slightly OOC, and the protagonist has no contact with the original characters. Even the classmates are not so close. They appear too little and they all look out of place. They keep talking about how to control magic, find anchors, and become gods. The whole QD upgrade stream, I was watching male videos in a trance, but As I said before, these are all second designs, and there is no sense of logic that is closely connected with the original work like the Curse of the House Elf. It seems very empty. Judging from the original work, the subsequent plot is okay, but this is a fan. No matter what, at least the second design should have a reasonable explanation based on the original work, rather than a direct ancient mistake without saying anything. From the perspective of being based on the original work, "Transfer of Magic" might as well end directly when the protagonist is besieged by dementors and eats too many dementor fragments to become a dementor and dies. The following chapters are just fantasies before his death. They are all unfinished anyway. In the end, there is no foreshadowing and sub-plots to clarify the ceremony of becoming a god in a hurry. Stopping at the front can only be regarded as a flaw, but at the end I feel that I was tricked. I wish the author will get better as he writes more. The writing style is very good and the imagination is good, but the writing power is not enough to control the direction of the plot. You should write an outline first. Also, the writing is too influenced by the works I read at the time. The fantasy style of the insert is like this, and the grammatical style that has gone wrong is also the same. Also, the golden finger for the protagonist should not be too big, otherwise it will not look like a Mary Sue. Of course, this is also the reason why I say it is like a Qidian male video article. This guy must be different. He has the appearance of a great emperor at a young age. Do you understand that he feels like a cross?

Well... I'm a little disappointed. How should I put it? Although I had a premonition after mentioning the change in writing style in the third year, I was still shocked when I actually saw it. There is indeed a reason for the small collection. The image of the protagonist created before the third grade is very attractive. He is a young genius who does not want to be a pawn. He insists on self-reliance and has a sharp mind and pays attention to safety. Although he does things impulsively, he can at least protect himself. But after meeting the raven blessed by Voldemort's soul piece and Ravenclaw's crown, I felt like a different person.

There is a feeling that I really don't want to write, so I am hurriedly wrapping up and running away... But the writing is not too perfunctory. The main ending is a bit too... Sloppy. Many things are not explained, which makes people feel incomplete.

Maybe because I don't have enough brain cells, I don't understand much of the plot behind it. Why did Grindelwald help Tom so much, even when Dumbledore strongly disapproved of it? Did Tom end up parasitizing Death and replacing him? So was the old magic battle he promised to help Gouzi destroy destroyed? Gouzi came to the HP world to invade, right? So has his goal been achieved? How did Sirius suddenly come to the Ministry of Magic? What is the ending? Ahhhh, there is a feeling of an abrupt end. Tom should be sincere to his friends. What will happen next to Draco, Harry and Hermione? I felt like I owed them a lot. I kept waiting for Tom to confess, but he didn't.

This. . . It feels like a movie reaches a grand scene and then presses the pause button, ending abruptly.

It's a bit hurtful to say that it starts high and goes low, but the image of the male protagonist at the beginning and Lockhart's second creation in the middle really made me deeply feel the fun of fandom. Thanks to my wife for accompanying me. Although the second half is sluggish and blurry, it is definitely a book I would recommend. I don't regret reading it.

The author is great, actually. Why did I see a starting point article in Jinjiang (full of black lines on the face). This kind of monster-fighting and upgrading flow really made me feel uncomfortable, even though the fan can write anything (scratching my head) But the author still worked hard. I need time to comfort my soul. I was so traumatized. Be careful if you haven't read it before. After all, this article is more like a starting point article. You will be beaten into confusion by various cheating plots from a male perspective.

After reading it, the ending is indeed very abrupt... I feel like my brain is not working very well and I don't understand what it means.

Although the writing is quite good, and he has become a god and the greatest winner, can't he write a few extras? Isn't Xiaolong worthy of the devil's hand?