
[Naruto] Uzumaki Muren
[火影]漩涡慕人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 73k Words
- Genre
- No CP
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
25Chapters
570Favorites
8.9Score
42Nutrient gifts
3.1kClicks per chapter
225Comments
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The first one~ And Da Da has already said so much. I would also like to talk about my thoughts when pursuing Da Da. The Mu Ren described by Da Da is indeed very gentle, and the setting is also very good. However, if Mu Ren continues to be gentle, it will inevitably make people feel that the character is not full, has no real sense, and cannot integrate into the world of Naruto, a tragedy for everyone (for example, there is no resonance with others). The setting of Mu Ren is a bit biased towards Itachi, but Itachi has sublimated the view that he hurt Sasuke for his own good. It is the contrast between light and darkness that injects flesh and blood into the character of Uchiha Itachi, so I think Mu Ren has experienced tragedy to better reflect his growth. In the world of Naruto, people can grow up quickly, either because they have huge hatred or trust that cannot be let go, or they are an extremely pure person like Naruto. Naruto's progress in the original work is very fast. It would be a bit far-fetched if Mu Ren was always better than Naruto with talent and hard work (after all, Naruto also really works hard). In fact, for Naruto, it is some perfections and imperfections that constitute a ninja and this bitter but passionate story, so I hope to write about the first type ~ Finally, the article is great! Sorry! I will always support you! (≧?≦) Oh wow, you have fulfilled my Hokage dream!
I still want to choose one. In fact, line 2 can be written as if line ()
Choose one, but I feel like I can compromise a bit... Leaving one seriously injured, so I won't feel truly alone in my heart.
It looks great. Come back and take a look.
Damn it, if the three-dimensional thing is finished, please update it (*?????)
Decisively choose 1, after all, this is the world of Naruto, sometimes life is a luxury
This ending is a trap, I thought it was finished, WoRi
One, after all, nine out of ten Naruto World are abusive, and the remaining one is either OOC or Mary Sue, so how can it be better if it doesn't make it a bit abusive.
If you press 1, it has more ups and downs, while 2 is a bit gentle. It feels like it is not without the characteristics of the Hokage zone. If you want to write a brother chapter, it is indeed possible. I still feel that 1 is better. The plot of 1 can be the same as the original Infinite Tsukuyomi. The plot of 1 can be written about Mu Ren's dark psychology and Naruto's cheerfulness again, but it is still good for Naruto!
Someone really watched it. Please update. QAQ