Come on, I'll take you to see this universe, a world that's both real and dreamlike.
There may be plenty of things that seem unbelievable to you, but they're only the tip of the iceberg in this universe.
What are you waiting for? Get on board!
Theme: Astronomy can make you think about the meaning of your own existence.
The first person is a bit discouraging...
My personal opinion is that you should not always specify how girls understand it when marking it in the article, because some of your markings are actually unnecessary. I think anyone who has studied physics can understand it. There are not only female readers but also male readers in Jinjiang. It's very bad for you to look like this. Your description of the scene is a bit awkward, the transitions are not so natural, and there are missing subjects in some places. Although I can understand who your subject is, the connectivity is very poor. Secondly, don't break sentences randomly. The punctuation marks are also ugly and uncomfortable to read. The other is that your description is too flat and does not let me feel the emotional fluctuations of the protagonist in this scene. , To me, your physical data is just a piece of physical data, and the plot has no ups and downs. Science fiction texts pay attention to the fusion of science and emotion. I don't quite understand what you mean by the fusion of soft science fiction and hard science fiction. When I saw the conversation between the protagonist and the lieutenant, I just felt that they were chatting awkwardly. It was supposed to be an exciting scene, but it turned out to be a mess.
Emmm The explanation in the article personally feels a bit dramatic, but if it is placed in the essay, some people may forget the previous part when they read the essay_(??ω?? ∠)_
I'm coming~=????( °?° )
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