Online Gaming: A 1+1 Money-Making Plan

Hehe, we dived too deep and the submarine was damaged. Let's come out and breathe first.

After reading another article, I applaud and applaud~~Let's spread flowers~~Bah, bah, bah~~

I saw HOWO above, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Big, it should be HOMOahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's M not W… Okay - - I don't have any balls anymore, but I couldn't help but come out to catch bugs when I saw that the professional terms were wrong.

After reading this article, the description of the plot and the growth of the characters are all very successful. The growth of Xiao Fangfang is also very gratifying. I would like to mention a few shortcomings here. Of course, this is not to make a fool of myself. I personally think that Xiaofang's initial settings can be changed. Xiao Guang wanted to write about a timid and weak-spoken Xiao Shou, but the portrayal was too much. A normal person would not be unable to speak a word for more than ten minutes, and his behavior was too childish and far different from the 23-year-old. I think this is why the readers of this article will be at each other's throats. Xiao Guang's idea of ​​letting Xiao Shou grow up slowly is a good idea, but the initial setting is divorced from reality and makes people uncomfortable to watch. I think Xiao Guang can add a little introduction to Xiao Fang Fang in the first chapter to make his character more reasonable. For example, he became autistic due to some stimulation when he was a child; or he had autism or a slight language disorder, but it was not very serious. Or, Xiao Fangfang had an injury to his throat before, and then he didn't speak for a long time, so he became less talkative after his throat healed (= =||This reason is a bit lame). Everyone's character has its own reasons for its formation. Give Xiaofang's character a reasonable reason, so that everyone can calm down and watch a child with a slight speech impediment and autistic tendencies slowly grow up, and then gradually become more confident, walk out of the dark room of autism, and gradually grow up mentally into a normal young man in his twenties. I think this article will definitely move people more. After all, truth is what moves people. Haha, I was very confused at the beginning of this article, but I persisted and read it. It is still very good. As long as you position the protagonist and imagine a reason for his character, it will not become difficult to accept it. I don't know if Xiaoguang will change it, but this article is finished, so maybe not. If Xiaoguang sees a certain pig's comment, I hope it can bring a little help to Xiaoguang's future writing. They are all people who like online games and hope to see Xiaoguang's better Danmei online game works. Sprinkle flowers~~~~~Spread flowers~~~~~~~~Spread flowers A certain pig can actually say such serious words. Looking at the sky, if those bad friends see it, they will definitely get sick. Hahahaha 2009.12.1 14:58 A pig with convulsions stays

Not bad, not bad Hahaha Looking forward to your new article

Big. . . . You ended up like this. . . . . . . I feel like I haven't seen enough. Will there be any extras?

. . . . . It feels like Lu Chu has become more feminine

= =||||. . . . . Marry his mother. . . . It's a shame he figured it out. . . . . But it's like killing two birds with one stone. . .

Xiao Fang~ conquered the rain~~~~~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

. . . . . . . Well. . . . . . . . As expected, Xiao Fangfang was still very fragile inside. . . . . Qian Cheng Suiyu needs to give him more sense of security. . . .