
After Becoming the Female Protagonist's Master
穿成女主师尊后
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 251k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
72Chapters
7.4kFavorites
8.2Score
1.2kNutrient gifts
14.2kClicks per chapter
790Comments
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Reader comments 24
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Well, actually, actually, I like the story very much, but I feel that my wife's writing is not strong enough. The original demon lord didn't come too suddenly, and Yao Xun didn't feel that there was a foreshadowing of him working for Gu Shen. I have a feeling that he suddenly appeared. Maybe we can add a little bit of Gu Shen and Yao Xun conspiring to kill the demon lord? The fact that Gu Shen was an innocent ordinary person came too suddenly. Emmm Luo Bai's feelings for Gu Shen also have a sudden feeling. It would be nice if Gu Shen had Luo Bai's throbbing reaction when he did something to Luo Bai. I think the relationship and twists and turns between Ye Rongyi and Wen Zhuo, to the final tragedy, are the most outstanding parts, and they are more exciting than the main CP in terms of senses. Finally, the above are all personal subjective feelings, just take a look and don't worry about it.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I blanch, I blanch! Don't torture me! Author, I kowtow to you! I really don't want to eat the knife! ! ! ! Leopard cry. Jpg
Alas, actually I always feel that Luo's feelings for Gu came too suddenly.
Throw flowers! ! After watching it, I felt that the finishing touch was that the male protagonist is actually Master's own male protagonist (?) Ahhh, I can't explain, it's just like that! A good ending to the initial encounter! I also want to read the heroine's story hehe
(It's so great. I thought I was going to be tortured, but I didn't expect it to be solved in two chapters. Wow, wow, wow. I like the speed of resolution.
I've finished reading it. The writing is very sweet and the plot is okay. However, sometimes the progress is too fast. I feel like I rushed to the next stage without much development. I hope the author will work hard and write better and better in the future~
Goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose Xiaoyan: Damn it, I'm marrying my junior brother ah ah ah
These two chapters felt like they were forcibly subduing me. I knew there was something wrong, but I just didn't say anything and just played around so that my body could be controlled. It's really just for the sake of the plot. I couldn't stand it anymore and retreated.
Hahahahaha, there's nothing wrong with ascending as soon as possible hahahahaha
How can I put it, I just feel that the plot progresses too fast in some places... I feel like it could be written better. In short - come on!