(Qi Wu Fan Fiction) A Startling Night

Personally, I think this short story is a first-rate masterpiece in every aspect, an almost perfect masterpiece. And this short story is also the first one marked "Qi Wu" that struck me as cute, although this article looks so clear that it can be read as a normal pure martial arts novel. This article is written from the perspective of a bystander, and Qi Wu joins forces to assassinate Cai Jing. The protagonist Fang Suisui, or rather the bystander who pulls the strings, is just a small person in the capital. Those influential figures who stand at the top of the capital, and those hidden and shocking struggles between the government and the opposition, seem to be close to him but actually far away. That night, the protagonist was extremely nervous and determined to kill someone, but he unexpectedly witnessed a truly thrilling "big event." From beginning to end, bystanders pass by the core characters of this incident, and there are some interactions that are neither deep nor shallow. As a reader, it is easy to feel immersed in the incident. In terms of plot, this article chooses such a perspective and avoids important matters. Although the length is short, it is enough to explain the whole incident clearly due to the clever connection, while leaving a lot of room for people to figure out the details behind it. Rhythm-wise, although the plot is very compact, the writing still feels leisurely and unhurried. All the important characters enter the show evenly, and the plot builds up one small climax after another until it reaches its peak at the end. The remaining epilogue gives people endless aftertaste and reverie. When it comes to writing style, many of Wen's colleagues will imitate Lao Wen's style, such as the pear-shaped layout and sentence fragmentation, but many of them just look empty, or read with a deliberately stiff feel. I remember someone seemed to have said that one of the characteristics of Wenfeng is the ability to use modern language to express the beauty of classical context. Personally, I feel that imitating Wenfeng does not lie in extravagant and gorgeous words, or deliberately imitating the tone of ancient pear-shaped prose, but in having a unique sense of language in the description and wording, and using modern language to create a poetic and artistic conception. Personally, I have always felt that Queliangjun's writing style has the characteristics of Wenfeng, and it is not pretentious. Although it is definitely an intentional imitation, it has actually formed a certain style of its own. Compared with Lao Wen's original text, I feel that Queliangjun's writing style is softer. There are so many cute sentences from the beginning to the end of the whole text. Just those few images put together: night, crazy moon, innocent sedan chair, black clothes and white clothes, white flowers between fingers... Can make people think a lot. Just a few sentences in particular to describe the characters: Although there were a few stools at the tea stall, the three customers were all standing. Fang Suisui glanced over, but could only see one person. He was dressed in white and had his hands behind his back, standing calmly and even calmly under the moonlight. The clothes were soaked up by the moonlight. The right hand is behind the back. The thumb and index fingers of the left hand are holding a flower. His gesture of holding the flower was very expressive. The posture of hands behind hands is very lonely. Flowers make moonlight. The moon is as white as clothes. There is snow on the clothes. A white flower of white flowers. In fact, there are many good sentences about ruthlessness among fans, but not many are satisfactory about Qi Shaoshang. This paragraph about Nianhua at the end of the month and the above sentences about walking in the busy city in "A Broken Chapter of Heroes" are my favorite sentences about Qi Shaoshang among the fans. "Fang Suisui glanced over, but could only see one person." - Because Lao Wen wrote that Qi Shaoshang in white was like a candle in the dark night. When he looked at the sky, he did not have the arrogance of "I will come". He looked at the stars and the moon as if he were admiring the earrings of a beautiful woman. He looked at the sky, not up high. He looked far away, only slightly raising his chin to look at the sky in the distance. Needless to say, this Qi Shaoshang is also the cutest to me. As an aside, I have always felt that Qi Shaoshang, as written by Lao Wen, is extremely arrogant and aloof, but compared to the ruthless Sun Qingxia, Su Mengzhen, Bai Choufei and others, I feel that his arrogance is a kind of arrogance with a good mentality, not so crazy, not so cold, not so cold, not so cool, not so unapproachable. He has a self-centered arrogance in his heart, but it does not hurt others or himself. There is almost no positive mention of ruthlessness in this article, but the presence of ruthlessness is very strong. A Qingsha small sedan appears, as if it is alive, but its silence gives people a great sense of oppression, which is reminiscent of the appearance in "The Cold Water". And then the strange and traceless hidden weapon shot was written, leaving beautiful cracks on Fang Suisui's knife. It was so stylish that it reminded people of what Qi Shaoshang said in the original work: Others have style, the hidden weapon has style, and the things they make also have style. In this article, Qingqing, as the executioner of the assassination, must wear night clothes. In the original novel, Wu Qing never wears black clothes, and it is rare in fan fiction, but the description of Qi Qing in black is also written in a ruthless style. He was as black as a ball of ink soul. Even if he fell into the water, he would not be able to change his form and spirit. Watching Fang Sui Sui, he felt that he had condensed all the essence of his career into tonight—— The pale man in black. That blackness is so black that it is different from the color of the night, and it is not the same as the night at all. In this article, the protagonist Fang Suisui, who is a bystander, is not just a background prop. At the beginning, his psychological activities begin to exaggerate the atmosphere. It feels very like Lao Wen's style of writing about psychological entanglements. The middle section about "Yandang Feijunzi" intercepting Di Fei and Jing Lei Chun is also very expressive. The two Di Lei are also written in such a way that at first glance they feel like they are these two people, which is unforgettable. (By the way, does "the gentleman flying in the wild geese" come from the sentence "the gentleman flying in the wild geese" in Lao Wen's "Yellow River"?) Finally, let's talk about the so-called Qi Wu CP. This article is indeed pure food, and there is really too little JQ in the text. The most exciting part is the climax at the end. After Wu Qing is seriously injured, he uses Qinggong to escape. The part where Qi Shaoshang responds outside the wall makes people nervous and emotional. The matter of joining forces to assassinate seems to be full of JQ. The undercurrent behind it, the mutual trust, the connection of souls, and the sharing of life and death are enough to make people think of a whole chapter alone, and this article only ends there. It can only make people continue to use their imagination to think about it. This is the only point that can make people feel resentful. In addition, the different endings of the two original little characters in this article, Fang Suisui and Kui Qi (only their faces are shown), are also very interesting. From another aspect, they also reveal the same but different positions and concepts of Qi and Wu. Regarding this incident, Kui Qi was innocently involved and was silenced by Fengyulou. However, this person was a murderer who committed no evil and deserved death. According to the ruthless attitude of enforcing the law impartially, he should not handle it casually according to the rules of the world. However, Wuqi also understood that many things had to rely on Qi Shaoshang's rules of the world to succeed. Although the two cooperated, they had different ways of doing things, so there must be a run-in of persistence and compromise. The other person, Fang Suisui, originally went to seek revenge from Kui Qi, but accidentally encountered the sedan car rushing to the "grand appointment". The knife that was supposed to be the murder weapon was damaged by a hidden weapon the moment they passed by, and could no longer be used to kill people. Later, I met a man in white holding flowers under the moonlight. "The man smiled and said, "He only broke your knife?"... "If you are willing, you can come to our side and be my brother." This passage is also very interesting: a man who stayed on his way to do something big... The heart was touched by such a little martial artist, and he stopped him from recklessly committing a murder. The other one smiled heartily when he saw the broken knife, understood in his heart, and expressed his willingness to make friends and absorb useful people. The characteristics of the two are fully displayed. Such an absolutely excellent food article, although it does not directly write about ambiguous sexual relations, the two people written about it are so charming and charming, and more importantly, the temperament of the two people is really well matched in the writing, so although it is a bit too clear, it is also clear enough that it will not cause much regret.

No matter how many times I watched it, I was so worried that my heart skipped a beat, and I was so excited that I wanted to yell something... I loved it so much! I really like it, and I feel extremely sad. Why don't you all write about it anymore... Aren't they all born to you...

But I want to make a statement... I have never read the original work, so I am referring to Qi Gu Fangwu... I read this article as pure food...

I have always liked this kind of article written from the perspective of a bystander - each of us is a bystander, right and wrong, and only they really know it in their hearts at the time. However, this type of article is also the most difficult to write - it is not easy to just introduce the ins and outs of the story through a stranger, let alone the inner twists and turns that even the authorities may not be able to explain clearly. The idea is very good... I never understood the role of six and a half minutes until I saw the end... It turns out that it is like this~~

I worship the same. The author replied: Thank you. Silently covering my face>///<

Queue to apply for reprint... Well, it's the same place as upstairs...

Apply to be reprinted in Shenhoufu Xiaolou and stand out A first-rate fan~~~~The author replied: Thanks to the two adults above for agreeing^ω^ In fact, I have an account in Xiaolou, but I have never been too embarrassed to post there><. If you two adults think this article can be posted in Xiaolou, then I won't bother you to forward it. How about I post it myself?