Please Don’t Leave Tonight
今夜的你请别走开
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 6k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
2Chapters
425Clicks per chapter
6Comments
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Reader comments 6
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今夜的你请别走开
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Come on, don't give up halfway, your writing is still okay!
The writing is good and the language is very coherent. It makes you want to read it all in one go. However, the characters are a bit cliche. I feel that the psychology of the characters should be portrayed more deeply so that the characters can be more vivid. I hope the plot can be more twists and turns. Come on, I hope you will continue to work hard.
Your novel is very good. I will improve it in the future. The first chapter is well written. I hope you will continue to work hard in the future.
The work is well written, and I hope to work hard to write better works next time.
Why is it gone at this critical moment? Hurry up and write it down. I can't wait any longer!
It feels good, but I haven't read enough. I hope the author will write the next chapter soon.