A Few Things with My Water Breathing Senior Brother

Wow, it's such a pity that it ended in an anticlimactic manner. After Midori left Fujiya, the plot suddenly became strange. Even though they became a couple in name, it was an interesting development, but I couldn't accept all the comedic treatment of the relationship between the two of them. Especially compared to the delicate description of the relationship between the two of them in the early three years, the sloppiness in the later part is even more uncomfortable. The characterization of Giyuu also tended to be comic, and it failed to successfully transform from the silent and youthful feeling of a boy. From my love for Tutu to my love for Giyong, I wrote it so delicately in the early stage but ended it hastily. This article is really difficult to understand. I really want to see the deep and delicate feeling that Giyong and Alu really love each other. Besides, this article! ! ! If it's Meow, I'm really looking forward to the kiss and some detailed descriptions of the progress above, but I skipped them all. I can understand why this article is not good, but I still look forward to seeing Meow-chan's more complete performance next time!

The last sentence really perfectly shows the nature of Tong Mo. This thing has no heart, no heart.

It's really rushed... It would be nice if the relationship between the two of them was described more according to the progress of the plot... There is also "explaining the meaning of Jiyong's words" and the like. This article is a bit of a pity

To be honest, I think it would be difficult to write based on the previous settings. Ah Lu can neither hold a sword on the battlefield nor have the skills to research medicine. There is nothing else to do except worry at the stronghold, just like the time when the Qiu Rabbit Yiyong was selected and left. But it was indeed a little caught off guard. At least Tong Mo can still write a little more. (The above is if you haven't seen the extra chapter) The extra chapter adds a little bit, and I can almost accept it. It would be nice if there was a child-fighting fan who mentioned it, but according to the original story, Jiyong did not participate orz

This ending is too hasty, right?

This... Feels like money wasted in vain...

There are really few love lines QAQ Queshi is very beautiful, but I also finished all the bento QAQ

Ah, I can't get enough! I want to see the couple life of Giyong and Alujin, hahaha, and the writing style is so beautiful, like Japanese literature, clean and refreshing, it's a great confession! !

How does Yiyong, a guy who can read the air, do business? ? ?

Although Tongmo really wants him to die, I feel that if he really had a relationship, it should be Kotonoha?