I,
Wield supreme power
Decide when to wage war
Decide when to let the people rest and recover
Decide who receives high rank and generous rewards
Decide who is enslaved for life
How many tears lie behind a smile through the years?
(From Hu Yanbin's “The Emperor”)
Can I keep her from chasing after freedom?
Can I only watch her fly like this?
Freedom, I’m afraid I can’t give it to her
I can only take her love this way
I followed her from there, hoping only that she would turn around and look back at me
P.S. This is a writing exercise, told in the first person by two “little ghosts” (though only Ye Ge is one), using alternating perspectives, so the point of view keeps shifting. Uh, I hope you’ll help me spot any mistakes!
[Please help give my story a boost~]
Stories by Didi:
Stories by a Certain Ye (Ye Ge):
Ahem... Actually... I and Suisu don't have time... I'm not in the mood to update...= =
You use a lot of exclamation points. Change them.
Are you Tiantian? Your writing style is very similar to Tiantian's. Tiantian is my classmate. Writing essays is very good, great, but writing novels is not good.
It's well written, encouraging, and has a deep brother-sister relationship!
Um, who is twins with whom??? Author's reply: A certain leaf:... I... I'm wrong, so it's okay...
Haha, worshiping the dead, my father is dead said
This is the mirror. I thought she was playing a supporting role, which was a bit scary.
Is Ye Yao her brother???
It's so cruel, my sister's inspiration is so strong, That brother also said something good or bad... I'm so surprised to say
OTL.. New article~~ Looking forward to the next article. . Come on! The author's reply: A certain leaf: Haha~ Because the idea is different from Sui's. It's more troublesome to revise the text... Uh~ so it will be slower~