After I Wronged the Immortal Lord

Why is the writing level of this book so different from that of the one where the male protagonist turned evil? Many sentences are incomprehensible.

Qingyu, this double-standard dog, is fine.

The ending feels a little abrupt

The male protagonist becomes useless every time he sees Qing Yu. No matter how much he sneers, looks weird, or behaves abnormally, he is still useless.

Can't wait to finish (⌒-⌒; )

Thinking of the movie I watched before, the heroine's boyfriend died in a car accident. Using cloning technology, the heroine gave birth to her boyfriend, raised her from childhood, watched him fall in love, and then grew up and left her.

Ah, I think it would be good if A Zhi is not good with the male protagonist. He is also a good boy. Personally, I think the main character Shi Ze's behavior is a bit indecisive, which makes me think that if he is really a scumbag, it would be a good idea to dump him. Of course, it is just my fantasy. I kind of hope that A Zhi can return to modern times. I feel that it is really depressing in the world of cultivation, so I gradually become a pervert hahahahaha Hahahahaha, I understand it very well. What she wants is all the trust and decisive decision, so I personally feel that the male protagonist's hesitation makes her feel insecure. Now I feel that she has more intentions and is pestering the male protagonist in turn. In my opinion, she is not as free and easy as before emotionally, and can no longer withdraw at any time, but the male protagonist makes me feel that it is not worth it. Of course, these are just my opinions.

Why is it gone? QAQ

Hahahahahahahaha I laughed so hard, I deserve it!

In the heart of the male protagonist, everything and everyone is more important than the female protagonist. He wants to kill the female protagonist for the sake of the so-called common people, and he wants to kill the female protagonist for the sake of that annoying senior brother. This is another Bai Zihua