Slow burn
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As a powerful figure in the cultivation world, the legendary Ancestor Xiaoyun was known for his baby face, aloofness, lack of compassion, and arrogance. He had always kept to himself. The outside world said he had successfully ascended, but only he knew the truth.
It seemed... he had failed to ascend.
That was Yun Xiao's last thought before he lost consciousness.
The amnesiac stared at the ruins scattered across the ground, the endless desert, and the stranger before him, lost in thought.
Who am I? Where am I? Who is this?
Qin Yi: "Who are you?"
The stranger: "...Who am I?"
Qin Yi: "..."
After acting sweet and clueless for a little while following his memory loss, the ancestor regained his memories and wished he could kill his former self.
In public, he stubbornly kept up his old persona. In private, he did whatever he pleased, taking down anyone who picked a fight with him. If he couldn't do it openly, he'd use underhanded tactics. He was having a pretty good time.
But in front of Major General Qin, he turned as delicate as a little white flower, raising a hand that turned red at the slightest bump or scrape.
"It hurts a little..." The little rabbit's eyes reddened, and Major General Qin's heart melted at once.
Later, Major General Qin accidentally caught his delicate little rabbit tearing into an enemy and threatening them.
Major General Qin: "...Who are you?"
Ancestor Xiaoyun stiffened, but still straightened his fight-stained clothes and turned to Major General Qin with a dignified air. "Your little sweetheart."
The stone-faced Major General Qin took a deep breath, his heart painfully constricted for once.
A sci-fi story.
A cold-faced, outwardly aloof but warm-hearted military officer as the top x a seemingly obedient and helpless bottom
New campus story: The Villain Breaks Free from the Script
Young Master Ning once had a long, vivid dream. From an omniscient point of view, he watched someone with the same name as him make one mistake after another, provoke someone he couldn't afford to offend, and end up in a miserable state.
When he woke, the fear lingered.
But the things from his dream never happened, and he soon put it out of his mind.
On the first day at his new school, he followed his homeroom teacher into the classroom. Amid the noise, he met someone's gaze. Young Master Ning stared at that face, nearly unable to look away.
His faded memories suddenly came back into focus.
What a coincidence. The person from his dream he couldn't afford to offend had that very face.
"Ning, where would you like to sit?"
"I'll sit there."
Young Master Ning lifted his chin. There was an empty seat right beside that person.
He wanted to see whether his dream was really going to come true.
A top student male lead as the top x a proud young master as the bottom
1. This is my first time writing, so I haven't handled the pacing very well. There are plenty of early plot holes, and the beginning is a little slow, but I can't speed things up later without making the story feel rushed.
2. Please treat this as a silly, brainless little story. If you want something you can analyze in depth, this isn't for you. If you don't enjoy it, feel free to stop reading, but please don't leave a review. Thank you.
3. If you find anything about the main character annoying, it's definitely the author's fault, not the little darling's.
4. The top has an unusual kind of cleanliness obsession, all in his head. It doesn't affect his fighting because he can put up with it (not).
5. At first, the bottom didn't just lose his memory. His memories also went back many years, so he reverted to thinking like a newbie. He recovers in Chapter 12.
[There are lots of flaws. I bow to you! Thank you to everyone who stayed with me as I grew~]
Theme: You can keep learning at any age. Learning never ends.
It's not easy for the author to persevere through such a long novel without falling apart. The emotional line is still a little weak. I've read a lot of dramas, and many of them only confirm the relationship at 80-90%, but the development of the relationship in the early stages is also cumulative. I feel that there are really too few early emotional lines in this film. There is no feeling that someone who doesn't want to fall in love is slowly moved. I hope the author will continue to work hard~
Finished spreading flowers! Throw flowers!
This is the first time I have read such a long article in the past two years. It is very well written.
I think it's well written. I look forward to writing more books. Not enough
The author is awesome. He said he has made progress. He really made progress. I didn't believe it at first. But after reading it, I found that the writing style has indeed improved a lot. The characters and plot are both good. It's just that the writing style and rhythm are a little off. The writing style has improved from being unreadable to barely readable. Can you try to revise the writing? The first part still spoils the impression a bit. Although it would be good if there is progress, I still feel that there is still a lot of room for improvement in the author's writing. I hope that the author's writing will get better and better! Let's see how the next book goes in terms of rhythm. Some plot lines are too long. I'm looking forward to the author's next book! If these shortcomings are corrected, we will definitely be able to collect over 10,000 yuan!
It's too late, the show is over!
Congratulations on the completion
It's the weekend again. I can finally read articles. Woohoo.
Fast forward to Qin Yi being disliked
Laughing so hard hahahahahahaha