Original title: After Becoming a Vicious Villain, I Hooked Up with a Brooding, Sickly Male Side Character
Blurb: As a powerful demon, Wenren Jin always believed she was the future hope of the demon race, entrusted with the mission of restoring its former glory. That was until, after making a breakthrough, she discovered she'd transmigrated into an old-school cultivation novel about a powerful heroine. Worse, she was the story's major villain, repeatedly injuring the heroine and sabotaging the protagonist's group, resurrecting her lover, the Demon Emperor, and nearly driving the cultivation world to ruin.
As for her ending, it was naturally a miserable one. She went to great lengths to lead the male side character down the demonic path, intending to make him a vessel for the Demon Emperor. Instead, he devoured the Demon Emperor and united the demon realm. He then tore her body apart with his bare hands and threw her soul into the Abyss of Demonic Flames, where she suffered the agony of being burned day after day.
Wenren Jin shuddered. She didn't want to die, and she definitely didn't want to resurrect some Demon Emperor. The demon realm belonged to her, and she wanted to be the boss!
And so a beautiful woman named Wen Jin suddenly joined their hastily assembled team.
...Yan Jiu hated this woman named Wen Jin. She was slick-tongued, hypocritical, and cunning. He always felt she had ulterior motives. What infuriated him was that everyone on the team except him liked her!
What Wen Jin found just as hard to understand was how this powerful male side character, who was cold toward her and devoted to the heroine, one day pinned her forcefully against a wall. With resentment and repressed longing in his eyes, he kissed her passionately with his cool, thin lips.
"..."
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Blurb Two: Wenren Jin thought she must have formed some kind of bond with her companions after spending so long with them. But when she and the original heroine were both in danger inside a dark, sinister demonic cultivator's cave, everyone flew to rescue the heroine and forgot all about her.
"..."
Fine. Had she really made such a mess of things?
Wen Jin's vision froze on the two men and one woman hovering in the distance. Seeing Yan Jiu lag behind the others, she couldn't help laughing. He was even worse off than she was.
At that moment, the man in the air seemed to realize something. His body stiffened, then he suddenly turned to look in her direction. His face instantly went deathly pale, his eyes filled with undisguised terror...
Wen Jin dimly saw him open his mouth with trembling lips, as if to say, "Run!" But before she could hear a sound, she lost consciousness. As her eyes closed, a face appeared in her mind. She was a little surprised. It was the first time she'd seen such a range of emotions on his face. Hadn't he always hated her?
But she couldn't be bothered to think about it. She was going back to become the great Demon King, and she would have nothing more to do with them.
So she never imagined that the man who had never once treated her kindly would willingly fall into demonic cultivation to bring her back to life, carving out his own flesh and ripping out his sinews and bones...
Theme: Just have fun
I feel like the author couldn't continue writing this book as he was writing it. It was too perfunctory and had no quality at all, so he rushed to finish it..
Is it because the novel about cultivating immortals has lost its feel and I don't want to write anymore? [It's changed]. From the moment the heroine enters the fantasy world, it feels like the whole thing is accelerating to the end. The character's arc is half-way through and the plane crashes. All the big plots and scenes in the later period are covered in one stroke. The characters who were arranged to appear in the plot later are also soy sauce (the heroine obviously has two juniors, but only Wen Renyu is the one) I turned around a few times after I came out [covering my face and laughing and crying]).. In fact, when I saw that the full text only has fifty chapters and not even two hundred thousand words, I felt something was wrong. As for the plot, if it was well described, it would normally take four to five million words to finish, but I didn't expect it to be so hasty [cheek-holding]. In terms of the author's writing style, this book is really a pity.
How to put it this way, the important plot has only been mentioned in a few strokes, and the plot is long and boring. The first part is obviously very good, and the male and female protagonists are also very good. Unfortunately, the emotional scenes in the back are a mess, and the famous scenes in the introduction are also written very blandly. I feel really uncomfortable watching it...
Anger, as a reader who has been following you since you started writing, this is my first feeling when I read the ending.
One thing to say, this book is really poorly written, not up to the standard it used to be.
The first part is very well written, but the second part ends so quickly, and the ending is a bit hasty and a bit fragmented...
I feel like the author's writing skills are not as good as before. Mainly because of the storyline, I don't think it's as good as Wangfu Xiaoxin or that other male lead. Excessive emotion is unnatural and hasty. There are no small abuse points that should be there
Too hasty! ! ! I have been collecting it since it was pre-released, and I have been following the series. I stopped reading it because of something else some time ago, so I found out that it was finished a few days ago. After reading a few chapters, I knew it was definitely not finished. As friends who have been together for so long, how could I be so angry when the male protagonist died? ! ! The emotional line is also very baffling! ! ! ! The plot points of the copywriting are also an understatement! ! !
Although it can be considered a complete ending, the later stages were really rushed. Starting from the heroine's fake death and returning to the devil world, the rest of the plot ends like a running account.
Will Ah Jin look disappointedly at the "mother" who created her in that world?
Boss, He Doesn't "Talk" [Era]
What a Charming Lady
What a Blessed Lady
The 70S Villain's Little Wife [Extra 2]
Pamper Your Male Partner to the Skyextra
Dressed as the Villain's Daughter-In-Law in a Historical Drama
And the Villain He
Sixty-Year-Old Widow Remarries
My Disciple Looks at Me Strangely
That Handsome Male Educated Youth
What Do I Do After Transmigrating into Two Books at Once?
After Becoming the Male Lead's 'Girlfriend'
I feel like the author couldn't continue writing this book as he was writing it. It was too perfunctory and had no quality at all, so he rushed to finish it..
Is it because the novel about cultivating immortals has lost its feel and I don't want to write anymore? [It's changed]. From the moment the heroine enters the fantasy world, it feels like the whole thing is accelerating to the end. The character's arc is half-way through and the plane crashes. All the big plots and scenes in the later period are covered in one stroke. The characters who were arranged to appear in the plot later are also soy sauce (the heroine obviously has two juniors, but only Wen Renyu is the one) I turned around a few times after I came out [covering my face and laughing and crying]).. In fact, when I saw that the full text only has fifty chapters and not even two hundred thousand words, I felt something was wrong. As for the plot, if it was well described, it would normally take four to five million words to finish, but I didn't expect it to be so hasty [cheek-holding]. In terms of the author's writing style, this book is really a pity.
How to put it this way, the important plot has only been mentioned in a few strokes, and the plot is long and boring. The first part is obviously very good, and the male and female protagonists are also very good. Unfortunately, the emotional scenes in the back are a mess, and the famous scenes in the introduction are also written very blandly. I feel really uncomfortable watching it...
Anger, as a reader who has been following you since you started writing, this is my first feeling when I read the ending.
One thing to say, this book is really poorly written, not up to the standard it used to be.
The first part is very well written, but the second part ends so quickly, and the ending is a bit hasty and a bit fragmented...
I feel like the author's writing skills are not as good as before. Mainly because of the storyline, I don't think it's as good as Wangfu Xiaoxin or that other male lead. Excessive emotion is unnatural and hasty. There are no small abuse points that should be there
Too hasty! ! ! I have been collecting it since it was pre-released, and I have been following the series. I stopped reading it because of something else some time ago, so I found out that it was finished a few days ago. After reading a few chapters, I knew it was definitely not finished. As friends who have been together for so long, how could I be so angry when the male protagonist died? ! ! The emotional line is also very baffling! ! ! ! The plot points of the copywriting are also an understatement! ! !
Although it can be considered a complete ending, the later stages were really rushed. Starting from the heroine's fake death and returning to the devil world, the rest of the plot ends like a running account.
Will Ah Jin look disappointedly at the "mother" who created her in that world?