My upcoming novel, The Moon Winks at Me, is available in my author page. Feel free to check it out! Here is this novel's blurb:
As the saying goes, "If you walk by the river often enough, sooner or later you'll get your shoes wet."
After reading hundreds and hundreds of transmigration-into-a-book stories, veteran feel-good-novel fan Xie Lingyun transmigrated too, landing in a harem novel written for a male audience.
Xie Lingyun: "Following the usual feel-good-novel formula, I'll surely slap down the scumbag and tear apart the wicked woman, escape the original plot, and reach the pinnacle of life..."
Unfortunately, she didn't realize she hadn't gotten a feel-good-novel script.
Question: What do I do after stumbling across some big shot's secret? I think I may have accidentally taken liberties with him, too!!!
Xie Lingyun: "...If I said I didn't see a thing, would you believe me?"
The big shot's long, slender fingers lightly brushed her neck, again and again, setting her nerves on edge.
"They say only the dead can keep a secret. What do you think?"
"I think..." Xie Lingyun tried hard to swallow. "Maybe you could try trusting your wife?"
A seemingly delicate but astonishingly strong airhead fairy * a stingy orthodox sect leader who thinks he's been cast as the villain
The big shot's inner monologue:
"She didn't take the chance to run away. Could she be after something from me?"
"This little fool may be silly, but at least she has good taste..."
"She really is madly in love with me, but the two of us can never be together."
"She's been staring at that new male disciple the whole time. Is he better-looking than me? I'll punish him by making him clean the latrines tonight!"
#A feel-good-novel fan wanders onto the wrong set and winds up on the neighboring sweet-romance set#
#The heroine thinks she's fighting to survive, while the hero thinks he's in love#
-----Blurb for my upcoming novel below. If you're interested, click into my author page and add it to your collection!-----
The Moon Winks at Me
Jin Yue has lost her memory.
Now she's paid off her enormous debts and gone from a virtually unknown actress to an A-list star, staging a brilliant comeback against fate.
It all happened because, before losing her memory, she tricked a top-tier wealthy family into marriage and successfully wed business magnate Ke Yan, whose family background is illustrious.
Take a chance, and a bicycle could become a motorcycle.
But if she gets found out, she might not even get to keep the bicycle...
In her terror, a cool and composed man opened the door and walked in. Jin Yue looked at her victim of the present, the King of Hell of the future, froze for a moment, then quietly hugged her little blanket tighter.
"H-honey, you're finally here. I missed you so much QAQ"
Ke Yan: "..."
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To keep her lie from being exposed, Jin Yue endured enormous mental pressure, approaching her cold, aloof, untouchable husband every day and playing the devoted, doting wife.
Her husband doesn't like eating?
Making him a loving dinner is a wife's duty!
Her husband doesn't reply to her messages?
My care for him will never run dry!
Her husband is rumored to be having an affair with his childhood sweetheart?
I love my husband, but he is free to do as he pleases!
While trying to please him, Jin Yue quietly saved up money to repay the big shot. Just as she'd saved enough, she found an agreement:
"Mr. Ke Yan and Ms. Jin Yue agree to marry in a spirit of friendly cooperation."
Jin Yue: ...???
She coldly put away the loving dinner and put on a businesslike expression. "Since this is a cooperative arrangement between friends, we'd better keep the boundaries between husband and wife clear."
The man nodded. "Sure. I'll get a lawyer to add your name to all my properties in a bit. Transferring my shares will be a little troublesome, but it won't take long."
Jin Yue nearly lost her balance. "W-what do you mean?"
Don't think you can bribe me with money at a time like this!
Ke Yan: "It's important to keep the boundaries between a married couple and the outside world clear. Is there a problem?"
#N-no problem!#
#The loving dinner might not be warm enough anymore. I'll go heat it up for my husband right away TVT#
A little drama queen who keeps seesawing between being clear-eyed and overthinking everything * an untouchable beauty
*The moon only winks softly, but I've already fallen for it.
P.S.:
1. A marriage of convenience. Their romance begins after she loses her memory.
2. A lighthearted, fluffy romance with no angst. Hope you enjoy!
Theme: I was just a bystander, but you drew me into a world of splendor.
The writing is pretty good, it would be nice if the protagonist's character could be more attractive. The character of the heroine is a bit silly now and not that likable. Some detailed descriptions can indeed shape the character, such as her love of eating, but first of all, this is not a necessary setting and has little benefit in promoting the plot. Secondly, there are probably not many people who like this kind of silly little girl who loves to eat. Although it seems reasonable for the aloof immortal to be attracted to such a person, it can be more exciting and more tense. As it is now, people will forget it all after watching it.
The characters of the male and female protagonists are a bit stereotyped. The male protagonist is cold and innocent, while the female protagonist is stupid and silly. There are a lot of novels like this. For example, the character Hua Xgu, who became famous in the early years, has some similarities with the characters in this article. I have always felt that the reason for the popularity of this type of novel is not how good the characters are, but the sufficient emotional tension. There is no character without emotional tension. To be honest, I didn't find it sweet, and it even made me bored.
The too rapid development of love lines is also a problem I feel. A bitter and resentful person is easily warmed by an ordinary person, and the relationship develops very quickly, which makes it feel somewhat hollow. Fortunately, the plot is self-explanatory - the immortal has never seen much of the world since he was a child.
There are places where the plot feels incomplete. For example, the heroine's family heirloom made people feel unusual as soon as it came out. I guessed at the time that it might be a golden finger. How could an orphan girl from an ordinary village have a jade pendant? A jade pendant is probably not something that a family that has been farming for generations should have, or is there inflation in the world of cultivation? At the beginning, the description of the reason why the male protagonist let go of the female protagonist was not clear. I thought these would be explained later, but they just disappeared? Some short stories are not fully explained, so I won't give examples one by one here. Although the story of life may not have an end, there must be an ending in the world of the novel. This makes people confused after reading it. Is it possible to use Abbas's treatment method? Ha ha ha ha.
To sum up, the characterization of this article is a little weak, but the plot is good. The author seriously considers the readers' feelings and does not immerse himself in self-movation. The writing style is quite good, especially for this first novel. It is already perfect. Given time, I will be able to write good articles that touch people's hearts and become a great author.
I am bored and panning for gold in the sand sea of Jinjiang. Although this article can only be regarded as a rough jade at the moment, it still surprises me enough. I must work hard! I look forward to becoming your loyal reader!
"Win" is a big bug for the author~
welcome
Come on, it's really interesting. It would be nice to have more sweet details.
I really enjoyed reading this book. I hope there will be more.
Great writing! Come on
When I saw this sentence, Lord Ange, sit down, all I could think about was, Reiner, sit down.
Hey, I suddenly felt that this sentence was so heavy. [Everyone defends his own morality in the world he has glimpsed. ——If this was a passionate novel, it would be a proper preview of the sword.
You are a sweet text! Why did he suddenly get a knife? ! ! !
The writing is pretty good, it would be nice if the protagonist's character could be more attractive. The character of the heroine is a bit silly now and not that likable. Some detailed descriptions can indeed shape the character, such as her love of eating, but first of all, this is not a necessary setting and has little benefit in promoting the plot. Secondly, there are probably not many people who like this kind of silly little girl who loves to eat. Although it seems reasonable for the aloof immortal to be attracted to such a person, it can be more exciting and more tense. As it is now, people will forget it all after watching it. The characters of the male and female protagonists are a bit stereotyped. The male protagonist is cold and innocent, while the female protagonist is stupid and silly. There are a lot of novels like this. For example, the character Hua Xgu, who became famous in the early years, has some similarities with the characters in this article. I have always felt that the reason for the popularity of this type of novel is not how good the characters are, but the sufficient emotional tension. There is no character without emotional tension. To be honest, I didn't find it sweet, and it even made me bored. The too rapid development of love lines is also a problem I feel. A bitter and resentful person is easily warmed by an ordinary person, and the relationship develops very quickly, which makes it feel somewhat hollow. Fortunately, the plot is self-explanatory - the immortal has never seen much of the world since he was a child. There are places where the plot feels incomplete. For example, the heroine's family heirloom made people feel unusual as soon as it came out. I guessed at the time that it might be a golden finger. How could an orphan girl from an ordinary village have a jade pendant? A jade pendant is probably not something that a family that has been farming for generations should have, or is there inflation in the world of cultivation? At the beginning, the description of the reason why the male protagonist let go of the female protagonist was not clear. I thought these would be explained later, but they just disappeared? Some short stories are not fully explained, so I won't give examples one by one here. Although the story of life may not have an end, there must be an ending in the world of the novel. This makes people confused after reading it. Is it possible to use Abbas's treatment method? Ha ha ha ha. To sum up, the characterization of this article is a little weak, but the plot is good. The author seriously considers the readers' feelings and does not immerse himself in self-movation. The writing style is quite good, especially for this first novel. It is already perfect. Given time, I will be able to write good articles that touch people's hearts and become a great author. I am bored and panning for gold in the sand sea of Jinjiang. Although this article can only be regarded as a rough jade at the moment, it still surprises me enough. I must work hard! I look forward to becoming your loyal reader!
"Win" is a big bug for the author~ welcome
Come on, it's really interesting. It would be nice to have more sweet details.
I really enjoyed reading this book. I hope there will be more.
Great writing! Come on
When I saw this sentence, Lord Ange, sit down, all I could think about was, Reiner, sit down.
Hey, I suddenly felt that this sentence was so heavy. [Everyone defends his own morality in the world he has glimpsed. ——If this was a passionate novel, it would be a proper preview of the sword.
You are a sweet text! Why did he suddenly get a knife? ! ! !
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