Dream of the Red Chamber: The Unassailable Daiyu

Instead of writing about cookies, write about the military career of two people fighting side by side.

To be honest, I didn't feel it after reading the previous part, but when I started writing the military part, I started to show my timidity.

I don't know why I can't stand it anymore, I feel like "I am NTR myself"... I will take my time.

People in this time travel are very selfish.

The later writing was too delayed and too long. But thanks to the author for sharing a lot

I actually saw the counselor Mr. Lu in another novel, which reminded me of Mr. Lu in this book, or what is the connection between the two?

I couldn't help but comment again. My love for Sister Lin and my contempt for the Jia family in the original novel made me couldn't help thinking that if Lin Ruhai had not died in office, then under Lin Ruhai's inspiration, could Daiyu be as magical as in the novel. It may be difficult because the life of the Jia family made her immersed in the company of sisters and her unexplainable feelings for Jia Baoyu. In fact, Jia's mother had already succeeded in getting Daiyu and Jia Baoyu to become husband and wife. If it doesn't work, there is no loss. The only loss is Sister Lin's reputation, which has nothing to do with her Jia family. Is it true? If Sister Lin hadn't come and gone clean, then what good would it be if Sister Lin fell into the hands of Wang and Xue after Jia's mother passed away?

I really like Daiyu in this article. She is indeed a special forces soldier from the future. When she takes one step, she sees ten steps away. I really feel that Sister Lin is also comfortable in the modern battlefield.

It's a piece of fan fiction of very high quality. Daiyu is beautiful and smart, strong and hard to mess with, and money well spent! I just feel there are some flaws: For example, Lin Sheng and Yuan Zhuo are lovers talking about marriage in modern society, but they didn't recognize each other for seven or eight years after traveling to ancient times? Do you have to agree to get married before you can get a glimpse of the truth by talking in your sleep? The lover's expression, tone, and movements should all be familiar, but you can't recognize them? Nothing else, I just hope they can be sweet sooner. Another shortcoming is that there is no mention of them having sex and being pregnant.

":"Jade" is a big bug for the author~ It's not appropriate to call Yu'er here in front of a foreigner. You should call her Princess.