When Superheroes Meet a Little Siren [Western Crossover]

Open Jason's door, suck Jason, and when it's over, he says he loves Alice, laugh to death hhhhhhhhhh

Ugh! The ending is so touching!!!! It's great to be imprisoned in a small dark room! Lock up Jay Kitty so he never leaves again! Speaking of which, the desire for control is really a lineage of the Bat family.

My wife's previous writing was pretty good, but the second half fell apart... It doesn't matter if you just read the explanation or plot summary, but if you read the previous and subsequent chapters habitually, it will feel very fragmented. The biggest problem is first of all the plot setting. When I met Shining, it was a little off topic. Later in the content of Don't Starve and Avengers, the heroine has almost no growth. It was said to be about the growth of the heroine, but in addition to the increase in abilities, she became more and more like a child. They said she was 14, but the description of her height made me feel that she was only seven or eight years old... To be honest, the previous parts of the Bat family and the clown were really well written, and it felt a bit pity. Then the character design was also OOC, saying that the heroine lost, but this is only a selfish person who would think so. After all, she got the ice cream later, right? And she lost some people, but met some new people, why did she suddenly turn dark??? As for other characters, especially Bucket, there was an OOC plot in the front where he forced the girl to give up the shark to express her attitude. This was no problem, but in the end he didn't secretly return it to the girl??? This is not Tong's style... You will know how he treats Bizarro. Then, since he has agreed to the girl, it is impossible for him to give up on the girl. He is the type who doesn't care what others say, and I will fight my way to perish with you - at least he does this when dealing with family affection and hatred. Then, it's weird that the bats can't find the girl's problem... It can only be said that the author's wife finally made a crazy ending and forcibly subdued the other characters in order to complete the story... This kind of thing is really uncomfortable to watch. Even if it ends in the end, it is more comfortable than forcibly subduing the character. And those so-called foreshadowings, to be honest, can't answer these weird things at all. Finally, there is the inexplicable emotional line... What on earth does the heroine do with the bucket? We haven't seen each other for so many years. What are you doing grabbing the bucket? If it's love, wouldn't it be too abrupt? If not, why just grab the bucket? To be honest, I don't know how dark the heroine is. It can be saved even if it's mild, and Tong won't care about it, but if it's serious, Tong is the kind of person who will fight to the death... And this arrangement is a bit strange. In such an unjust world, it is actually more normal than the heroine who is living a good life... How can I put it, this kind of setting feels like it can only appear in people with antisocial personality. Because my wife was attracted by the previous content, I bought it without thinking too much. I can only say that I regretted it a bit after reading it... Not because the ending was not happy enough, but because the second half to the ending was obviously perfunctory... It is a very, very pity for this fanfic.

Jason... Jason's sense of presence is so low recently. I want to see the furious Jason with his crazy output and curses to wake everyone up.

Wow wow wow Veer is so cute!! Jason's smile at the end was so handsome, rice was so miserable

Can Jason accept Weir who has gone astray? They will blame themselves. They wanted to send Weir to live a normal life, but after being pushed away time and time again, the little mermaid finally turned into a siren.

I'm so afraid of being abused but I'm also curious about what's going to happen next. I don't have strong mental endurance but my curiosity is overwhelming.

I think it would be quite touching to expand the ending.

Todd!!! It's Wiltord!

I've finished reading it. It's very interesting. I probably understand it. I can understand Weir's decision but Jason is still a little OOC. However, different fan stories written by different wives have different characters. At least in this article, they all seem to have a perfect (?) Ending.