After the Magic Swordsman Took Up Poetry

Congratulations on the completion. I'd like to give you a small suggestion. I mean it sincerely!!! One is the character of the protagonist. I definitely chose the protagonist of this article out of love. I have to praise Dada because I have read so many Wenye Mantra palindromes and like Dazai Dundun and so on. I want to produce my own food and have never written a book yet. But, because the world of Shuhui Fumino is too crazy, even though the protagonist's strength is buggy, his personality does not match Fumino Shukai's. Of course, I'm not saying that it's not good to go from being autistic and timid to standing up to protect others. I just mean that I personally feel that the transition in the text can be more layered (although I can't explain it clearly, but I sincerely say that I was confused and frowning at the beginning) The second is the original characters. I think the original character descriptions lack flesh and blood. For example, at the beginning of the article 5t5 posted social fears, and even in front of Jibu, emmm, I personally feel that this is too much bullying, and I don't want to give face to others (I am not good at chatting. Although I type a lot online, I really know how to flip the table if someone is so unwilling to step down when face to face offline). Moreover, after 5t5 experienced the Xiayou incident, it is unlikely that this kind of attitude and behavior would be the same for a student with such an easily influenced personality. (Because 5t5 also has IQ and some emotional intelligence, right?) Also, Dongtang asked the protagonist where he likes such a person. Maybe I turned the page faster. Congratulations on the completion. I gave you a small suggestion. I really mean it!!! One is the character of the protagonist. I definitely chose the protagonist of this article out of love. I have to praise Dada because I have read so many Wenye Mantra palindromes and like Dazai Dundun and so on. I want to produce my own food and have never written a book yet. But, because the world of Shuhui Fumino is too crazy, even though the protagonist's strength is buggy, his personality does not match Fumino Shukai's. Of course, I'm not saying that it's not good to go from being autistic and timid to standing up to protect others. I just mean that I personally feel that the transition in the text can be more layered (although I can't explain it clearly, but I sincerely say that I was confused and frowning at the beginning) The second is the original characters. I think the original character descriptions lack flesh and blood. For example, at the beginning of the article 5t5 posted social fears, and even in front of Jibu, emmm, I personally feel that this is too much bullying, and I don't want to give face to others (I am not good at chatting. Although I type a lot online, I really know how to flip the table if someone is so unwilling to step down when face to face offline). Moreover, after 5t5 experienced the Xiayou incident, it is unlikely that this kind of attitude and behavior would be the same for a student with such an easily influenced personality. (Because 5t5 also has IQ and some EQ), and Dongtang asked the protagonist who he liked like this kind of person. It was a bit abrupt to come to Tokyo School from Kyoto School when nothing happened. Although Megumin is not good at words, she is a warm man. She dismissed a classmate who knew she had a sad personality with just three words "I'm fine", which is not Megumin's style. This is where I personally think it conflicts with the first point. The character of the protagonist is not consistent with Fumino Shihui. The behavior of the original character shows that the character of the protagonist is "normal", but the things the protagonist behaves are "abnormal". (I may not have explained it clearly and I'm not very good at explaining it. It's probably like patting a stranger on the street and saying "Long time no see"_(:зゝ∠)_magical metaphor) The big-written article fulfilled my dream of not finding Dundun CP articles. It would be nice if the connection between the two sides could be smoother. And there are a few small bugs. After the protagonist was picked up, Dundun was thrown into the orphanage. The protagonist can be said to be embarrassed to bother people, but he didn't take the initiative to go there even if he had the ability. There is also Atobu, who followed the protagonist to visit Dundun and would definitely investigate what happened before. Emm, anyway, if the protagonist hadn't met Dundun by chance, nothing would have happened to Dundun (my personal opinion is like this), and then he woke up after encountering his memory. The above only represents my personal views, which are affected by personal personality, preferences and experiences. They are one-sided and limited. I am absolutely not targeting, insulting or ridiculing anyone. I would like to thank the author for his great contribution to the harvest, and hope that he will continue his efforts and write a long curse to return to the field of literature and the shortage of grain.

Atsushi, I misjudged you. I didn't expect that you, with thick eyebrows and big eyes, would actually like to see others wearing women's clothes.

Matchmaker Zai: I worry so much about my second apprentice's happiness : D

Aaa so sweet aunt laughs

Feel like it's almost over? Is this an illusion?

[Purple Sugar]kswl, sprinkle flowers?

... I am listening to a song, a very lyrical song. To be honest, I don't feel immersed in the song at all :) It is not recommended to listen to the song when reading novels :)

It's over!???) It was over before I could even react. I still have to write extras, such as movie viewing and the like.

(Twist) Accomplice, whose xp is this? Could it be mine?

Madam, I'm hungry (crying)