“What exactly do you want?” she finally burst out, unable to hold back any longer.
He raised his head, his eyes filled with pure, unclouded mirth, his amber gaze clear as water.
He said he wanted to make her smile and smooth away the furrows between her brows.
That was all!
And so
With a devotion so baffling it defied all reason, he followed close on her heels.
With stubborn, impenetrable reserve, she retreated step by step.
A seemingly harmless young man from beyond the world,
relentlessly made his way into someone’s heart;
A seemingly aloof, cool-hearted girl,
was powerless to resist, and let him stay in her heart.
Why not update? What a beautiful writing style