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Jiang You is a part-time quick transmigration actor. This time, he's playing the beautiful, strong, tragic love interest in a danmei novel with a harem of men.
The Immortal Venerable is infatuated with the charismatic childhood friend protagonist. He takes a sword for him and falls into demonic cultivation, but still can't make the protagonist smile. In the end, he meets his downfall.
After finally completing his mission, a System bug sends Jiang You back to the beginning.
This time, he doesn't have to follow the plot. Jiang You simply pretends something went wrong while he was overcoming his tribulation, turns his black hair white overnight, and drags his sickly body through life, quietly making himself a lazybones.
Jiang You's enemies try to take advantage of his illness to finish him off, finding him and surrounding him on the mountain.
The charismatic protagonist and Jiang You's fellow disciple rush over to protect him, only to see...
Jiang You casually wave his hand and send his powerful enemies flying.
Friends and family: ...???
With his lazybones secret identity about to be exposed, Jiang You quickly wipes his hands and pretends to be so weak he's about to faint. “I don't know what just happened, but I'm really just a lazybones!”
Jiang You doesn't want his secret identity exposed, so he reels in another fish, Si Tianyi, and takes him as his Dao companion. The two are in love and happily laze around together.
Until one day, Jiang You discovers that his Dao companion is impotent.
Their happy life develops a crack. Jiang You finds Si Tianyi bland in bed, but too precious to give up, so he resolutely sets out to help his Dao companion get his virility back.
Right then, the villainous Demon Lord makes his entrance, and the major sects go on high alert. Jiang You heads over to watch, munching on melon seeds.
But the Demon Lord raises a hand, and mountains crumble as the world is laid to waste.
Jiang You looks up from the seed shells shaken off his melon seeds and realizes that the Demon Lord, who was all-powerful in the original novel, is none other than his impotent Dao companion.
After the secret is exposed
Si Tianyi, looking pitiful: “Now that you know I'm a demon, are you going to break up with me, A You?”
Jiang You, expressionless: “Yes. But before we break up, you need to make up for the happy life you owe me.”
Cultivation levels in this novel:
Out-of-Body - Qi Attraction - Divine Soul - Golden Core - Primordial Spirit - (five tribulations) - Celestial - (five decline tribulations) - Golden Immortal
The upcoming novel, After Picking Up a Useless Beauty, I Was Forced to Win by Doing Nothing, is now available. Please add it to your favorites~
Transmigrating into a book as a cannon-fodder character with low cultivation, who lusts after the protagonist's fiancee and abducts her, only to have the protagonist run him through the heart with a sword, Lin Jin decides to defy fate and change his ending.
Since the original character has low cultivation, he'll work hard at cultivating and join the number one sect.
The original character lusted after women, so he'll stay away from all women. But on the way to the sect, he unexpectedly picks up a beautiful man.
The beauty is certainly beautiful, but he's a little dimwitted and does nothing but silently cling to Lin Jin. He's a bona fide useless beauty.
Thinking of the perilous plot that follows when the protagonist turns evil, Lin Jin grows a little worried.
But no matter how long Lin Jin waits, the protagonist never turns evil. Every time danger comes his way, Lin Jin somehow wins without lifting a finger.
Lin Jin can't make heads or tails of it.
Until, during a crisis, he sees the useless beauty use the protagonist's signature move. Under a brilliant shower of light, that once-dim face is spattered with blood, then turns to Lin Jin with a wild smile.
“I heard you stole my fiancee. Then you'll have to pay me back with yourself.”
·
Xue Fengqing realizes he's the protagonist of a book. The first half of his life was a lie, and he can't escape the fate laid out for him.
Unwilling to be controlled by outside forces, Xue Fengqing seals his own consciousness, choosing to remain lost in darkness forever.
In that endless darkness, he feels a hand gripping his tightly and hears a gentle voice.
At last, he wakes in a feverish haze and sees Lin Jin asleep by his bedside, having stayed up to watch over him while he was sick.
“You're the only reason I woke up from the darkness.”
Theme: If people show one another more understanding and tolerance, and a little less selfishness, they can see a whole different world.
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However, your description of the characters is somewhat inadequate, and the emotional reactions of some characters are inexplicable. Like the protagonist Gong's love for Shou and his easy forgiveness of Shou, Chu Yan's easy abandonment of Shou, and the love and care of Shou by most people. In my opinion, the reasons are not handled well, or described well. Is it too easy? The hatred, tears, etc., Can't be felt at all.
There is a big problem with the copywriting. Some plots do not appear in the main text at all.
Also, the word count is too small, just over 150,000 words, and there is not enough CP sugar at all.
I have not read other articles written by Dasha, but as far as this article is concerned, I feel like a novice. (Like me.) Was this one written much earlier?
I'm really a little speechless. The introduction is really perfunctory. These villains actually appear at the end and I won't talk about it. What the hell is written after this. . . Why do you have so many collections? The copywriter defrauded
The writing in the front is quite good, but if you don't want to write in the back, you can't finish it hastily like this. What the heck is this? The biggest disappointment of this article has been covered in just a few strokes. It doesn't feel like it at all. It's the same as the outline.
It ended before Lin Jiansheng's identity was revealed. Is all the foreshadowing of the relationship fake? The protagonist didn't lose his temper in front of the public in the main text, which was quite careless.
This turned out to be a bad article. . . Okay, blame me for not looking at the table of contents before reading it. In fact, during the process, I felt that the author's writing skills were insufficient. There were many problems in both the writing style and the plot arrangement, but I still read it. Unexpectedly, there was a big rush event at the end, and the part of the Little Mermaid that the author said he liked the most was completely ruined. It's a pity. I hope the author can make progress in the future.
? ? ? This ending left me confused, what the hell kind of ending. . . Speechless
? ? ? ? It's the first time I've seen someone so confusingly say that it's a bad ending, but it doesn't count, and it's not a bad ending. It feels like I've been deceived.
It left me speechless. . . . . . . . This ending is too bad. . . . . . . . . . . . Both the writing style and the plot connection are awkward and awkward. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
If it was written a long time ago, the writing style was pretty good for that era. However, looking at it now, it still feels a little childish, the characterization is also very vague, the emotions are forced, and the plot is also weak. . . . So simple and crude
But you can still take a look. If you are short of articles, you can consider it.
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It's great to write in big letters! It's just that the plot advances too fast. To be honest, this kind of plot direction is the same as flying on an airplane. But it's a well-written novel with a good plot, good writing, and great character settings. It's a joy to read in series. However, your description of the characters is somewhat inadequate, and the emotional reactions of some characters are inexplicable. Like the protagonist Gong's love for Shou and his easy forgiveness of Shou, Chu Yan's easy abandonment of Shou, and the love and care of Shou by most people. In my opinion, the reasons are not handled well, or described well. Is it too easy? The hatred, tears, etc., Can't be felt at all. There is a big problem with the copywriting. Some plots do not appear in the main text at all. Also, the word count is too small, just over 150,000 words, and there is not enough CP sugar at all. I have not read other articles written by Dasha, but as far as this article is concerned, I feel like a novice. (Like me.) Was this one written much earlier?
I'm really a little speechless. The introduction is really perfunctory. These villains actually appear at the end and I won't talk about it. What the hell is written after this. . . Why do you have so many collections? The copywriter defrauded
The writing in the front is quite good, but if you don't want to write in the back, you can't finish it hastily like this. What the heck is this? The biggest disappointment of this article has been covered in just a few strokes. It doesn't feel like it at all. It's the same as the outline.
It ended before Lin Jiansheng's identity was revealed. Is all the foreshadowing of the relationship fake? The protagonist didn't lose his temper in front of the public in the main text, which was quite careless.
This turned out to be a bad article. . . Okay, blame me for not looking at the table of contents before reading it. In fact, during the process, I felt that the author's writing skills were insufficient. There were many problems in both the writing style and the plot arrangement, but I still read it. Unexpectedly, there was a big rush event at the end, and the part of the Little Mermaid that the author said he liked the most was completely ruined. It's a pity. I hope the author can make progress in the future.
? ? ? This ending left me confused, what the hell kind of ending. . . Speechless
? ? ? ? It's the first time I've seen someone so confusingly say that it's a bad ending, but it doesn't count, and it's not a bad ending. It feels like I've been deceived.
It left me speechless. . . . . . . . This ending is too bad. . . . . . . . . . . . Both the writing style and the plot connection are awkward and awkward. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
If it was written a long time ago, the writing style was pretty good for that era. However, looking at it now, it still feels a little childish, the characterization is also very vague, the emotions are forced, and the plot is also weak. . . . So simple and crude But you can still take a look. If you are short of articles, you can consider it.
The ending is quite bald...