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Shen Ning has always been a top student and a sweet little darling.
In her spare time, she loves sweet stories, sweet dramas, and sweet little treats.
Then she transmigrates into a male-lead-centric cultivation novel she's never read.
The story has already ended. The male lead has become a legendary Sword Saint, the undisputed myth of the martial world.
And she is the Sword Saint's beloved daughter.
Twenty years ago, her father was a handsome and extraordinary Sword Saint.
Now her brother is a handsome and extraordinary Sword Saint.
And she is a pretty good-for-nothing when it comes to swordsmanship.
Her aptitude is mediocre, and she'll never reach the level of a first-rate swordsman in her entire life.
She has no script to tell her what will happen, and no protagonist's halo or extraordinary talent.
Shen Ning: ???
Sorry for holding you back. I'm out.
When Shen Ning was five, she met a handsome, dashing young man with incredible martial arts skills.
He coaxed her: If she worked hard and practiced her sword diligently, then no matter how poor her aptitude was, he'd wait until she grew up and could defeat him.
When that day came, he would marry her.
So Shen Ning trained hard. Sure enough, when she grew up, she became a second-rate swordsman.
Just as it seemed she would never marry her dream guy, she discovered...
Over the years while she was growing up,
her dream guy had founded a sect, united the martial world, fallen to the demonic path, slaughtered innocents, been hunted down by the entire martial world, and died without a grave, among other things.
He'd been dead for two years now.
Shen Ning: I may not have amounted to much, but didn't you promise to marry me?
[The setting is fictional, and all details are invented.]
[The heroine is a good-for-nothing at first, but learns to practice swordsmanship scientifically later on.]
[The male lead blends in with the villagers at first, but later turns out to be a wolf in sheep's clothing.]
[Warning: The male lead never actually had a fiancee or a romantic past, for reasons. The heroine, male lead, and second male lead remain devoted to one person from beginning to end and never waver.]
Theme: Good and evil are repaid in kind, and diligence is rewarded by heaven.
The setting is great!! The characters of the male and female protagonists and supporting characters are very unconventional. For example, if Gu Zhihan's heart is to kill, he needs to indulge in women to suppress his murderous intention. For example, Luo Xiaoshan is not so much trapped by love as by guilt for not delivering medicine in time. And Xiao Lan, a loyal gentleman~ But it is a pity that the plot line is a bit weak, which weakens the protagonist's character, and the supporting characters' stories are not rich, resulting in a somewhat tool person with no logic. For example, Liu Yanxing, a pioneer in promoting educational equality, was framed because he touched the interests of others. It is interesting to see such an idealistic character being slapped in the face by the reality. This kind of situation where a tree is as good as the forest but will be destroyed by the wind is also very embarrassing (for example, I am thinking of the master of Qinglong Island in Liuyao). It is a pity that the author changed his mind later and wrote his true character as Bai Qihei, who is deep-minded and indifferent, relying on his high martial arts skills to "persuade" the righteous sects to share educational resources, and using the image of a gentle fairy to benefit the Zhuzhi sect's ideals. In fact, this image is more consistent with the facts, but this image is contradictory to the previous plot when Shen Ning revealed that "Liu Yanxing was killed because he touched other people's cakes." If it was the former idealistic image, it would be logical for Shen Ning to explain this to him and make him think that this beautiful girl was thoughtful, so he would treat Shen Ning differently. But if it was the latter, he must be well aware of his situation. He just relied on his martial arts skills to look down on her, and lost due to his arrogance. For example, Yao Xuejuan is a very important supporting role. Her portrayal is her final self-narration, with no foreshadowing at all. Another example is Xuan Chi. There was no foreshadowing, and Xuan Chi killed Yin Buqi. The plot of the conflict was handled too simply. There are also some better settings, such as Tao Xin (life/death in Earth Scroll, Liuli Xin in Guizangji, Xiaoyao Dao in Shanhai Scroll), but they are not explained in detail. I personally think that even if Shen Ning has good mental skills, she is still not a genius in swordsmanship. It is too abrupt to become a female sword master. She has the Nirvana Pill and can be the first person of her generation, but in terms of swordsmanship and sword intention, she should still be far inferior to a genius. Generally speaking, the plot before entering Emperor Honggu was very smooth, until Liu Yanxing found out that he could not be cured, and pretended to be estranged from the heroine. After the heroine broke up heartbroken, he pursued her in a cheap manner. Liu Yanxing could not help teasing the heroine, which caused the image of the hero and heroine to collapse for me (like the second season of Yuanlong, I just hope that the protagonist will die soon). I understand that the author wants to portray conflicts to promote the plot, but is there a better way to handle this paragraph... In short, I like the setting of this article very much. It is rare that every supporting character has a distinct personality and everyone has a story. The reason why I am so verbose in the previous paragraph is because I really like the world and characters constructed in the article. I feel very sorry for the weak plot line. Although my wife seems to have stopped writing? But please accept my praise. The setting of the first article is so good. You are really talented! If my wife regains her original intention and continues writing, please keep up the good work!
Wuwuwuwu, Na Lanlan, do your best in your career.
I liked this article so much that I came back to read it again!!! Author, you have been missing for four years and almost five years!? No more new posts?°(°?????°)°?
Xiaolan is really suffering so much.
A well-intentioned article that deserves to be seen by more people
Liu Yanxing and Shen Ning are not Liulixin. They have gone through countless experiences and still retain their original intentions. Thanks to the author for his story, I hope we can still be moved by purity, sincerity and beauty after experiencing countless ups and downs in the world, and may we cherish and care for these beautiful qualities. The brilliance will not be erased by time, how can it be regrettable? I wish everyone will not be entangled in the world. Ability and money are things outside the body. Only good quality and good people are by your side, and you have the ability to protect these good things. I hope everyone can appreciate the beauty around us and still be young when we return.
The end is full of flowers ~ the author is cheering for you
Very warm and cute martial arts novel haha
I feel like I got bored writing the second half. The characters are templated, the plot is routine, and the emotional chatter is unattractive. Dear author, love cannot be emphasized repeatedly, otherwise picky readers like me will easily get bored. To be more confident in your writing skills, you can express it clearly and calmly. Instead of expressing your love and affection forcefully, there is a narration next to you: They are in love, and ambiguity is invincible. The stuffed candy is sweet but greasy
It's been so long and ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm still so sad. Every time I see Xiaolan I feel sad, and then I hate the male protagonist even more. Well, there is nothing wrong with whoever the heroine likes. Someone will get hurt among the three of them. Lan Lan has never gotten the number plate of love and wants to try hard to convince herself. But because I like him so much, I really can't accept people who hurt him. Yes, I hate both the male and female protagonists... That kind of disgusting emotion is especially when the male protagonist can buy everything for the heroine casually, but Xiaolan can only buy a small piece of cloth after spending all his belongings. Such a comparison! That kind of distressed emotion, he tried his best to give his beloved girl what she liked, but she didn't want it and didn't care about it, because the male protagonist could give her more and she wanted it. Normal people would be shocked, but Xiaolan is very naive. He still doesn't understand anything and still continues to like the heroine. Ah, that old bitch of the male protagonist! I was very angry and sad, angry that the child was ignorant, could not grow up, and was always hurt. Because reading this book made me so angry, haha, who told me to fall in love with the second male lead! I ordered it all for Xiaolan, because Xiaolan gave up writing. Finally, I still want to say that Xiaolan is really a great and super good boy.