[HP: James and Lily] Pride and Prejudice
[hp-詹莉]傲慢与偏见
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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It's so beautiful. Pride and Prejudice-style love. It's because of Zhan Li that I watched Pride and Prejudice 🐶🌹.
Fine, I feel like some things are not quite right but overall it's pretty good. Well, let me tell you my understanding. I think Lily is a sunny, enthusiastic, cheerful and charming girl, and James is definitely not the only boy who likes her. When James was still very naive, I wanted to teach him a lesson and asked him to go to the library, but because of James's letter, I studied with him. I think it is still a bit stiff. I can't quite tell if this is after breaking up with Severus. But I think it should be put behind this. He is not a girl who will be touched by a letter casually. James must start to change and apologize sincerely before he can slowly forgive him. I think at the beginning, you can study with a few friends in the library, and then the relationship will gradually improve. After all, I remember in the original book, did James' transformation begin in the sixth or seventh grade? And it will be more interesting if friends can assist you. Of course this would make the article longer and these are my personal opinions.
The writing is quite beautiful. But I don't think Lily would blush and read a book with James all afternoon when she wanted to stand up for Severus. Such a twist is a bit abrupt.