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An urban romance about ancient gods. Love and hatred from a past life, grudges in this one. Did a misunderstanding cause them to miss their chance, or did missing their chance create a misunderstanding? There is no answer.
“Mo, do we really have to do this?!” asked the woman in white, her voice gentle and tinged with helplessness.
“Neither of us has a choice, do we?” said the one in black, their voice drifting down as if from the heavens, ethereal and endlessly seductive.
“That’s right. We have no choice, so let’s not choose.”
PS: This is not a tragic story. It absolutely isn’t.
Maybe it's because there are too few articles, and many places can't be seen clearly. I'm waiting for the author to write more, come on!
My comment is very direct, I hope you can forgive me, it is my personal feeling. I hope to continue your articles, come on, support Zhong O(∩_∩)O haha~
Overall, the heroine's personality is complicated. This is the feeling your article gives readers. I guess you wanted to show the heroine to be proud, independent, wise and elegant, but it seems to have failed. Although the heroine in this article has been hiding her desires, the concealment in the article is not enough. The heroine's character is relatively immature, but she has a sense of self-reliance. She is not cold enough, and she is not smart enough.
Looking at the overall situation, the article feels top-heavy. Zhuzi quoted "Miracles"
But for the peg itself, it is very artistic and I like it very much. It would be beautiful if the fantasy could continue to unfold like this, and it would be the beginning of a grand drama.
It might feel more natural if the peg is removed. This article focuses on modern romance, and the peg feels very forced and complicates things.
Collect first, so... Look slowly...
It turns out that present speech can also be written like this. Come on come on
Don't stop. . . It's still fascinating to watch. . . I want to see the love-hate entanglement between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. . I want to see the heroine fight hard. . . I want to see the colorful world behind the foggy Duan family. . .
Disconnected. . . Start living again. . . . . Met a handsome guy The story is over. . .