[HP/Tom Riddle BG] The Dark Lord on the Tip of Your Tongue

The writing is beautiful, the concept is wonderful, and the writing style is worthy of being a wife of the Chinese department. Even if Tom is OOC (if he is not OOC, he can only be. As a product of narcotics, unless his mother is alive and treats him well, there is no hope of understanding love). As a "pet snake" to a "person" in Tom's eyes, the heroine is really natural and warm to get along with Tom. Seeing that, I thought: "This couple must be locked up!" This background can be regarded as the era of HP ancestors (?). Because there is not much ink in the original work, some original characters of the author have to be produced, which is for sure; but when shaping these characters, in order to make the characters full and not dry (to be honest, I personally think that in this regard, the wife is in the top 3 of the dozens of JJ, Tomato and other cooking platforms I have read). But, what follows from the above is that my wife may have written a "group portrait article". Although people who are reading HP know who the protagonist is, most of the characters are too long, making it appear "high EQ: delicate; low EQ: lengthy". My wife can definitely optimize those, but I feel that my wife may be reluctant to part with the details that put a lot of emotion into. There are really too many Aphras and Virgils. They must be useful for the origin of the heroine's life experience, or to lead to the storyline, or to provide emotional support (emotions should be two-way, rather than the heroine's unilateral belief that someone is her good friend). Otherwise, it feels really disconnected a lot of the time... After reading, you have to combine the "author's words" to get the wife's line. Although I can understand it, I am very confused, really confused. The backgrounds of the eras jump back and forth between chapters, which makes people dizzy; the threads here and there cannot be connected... Alas, the first, second, and third grade Tom wrote in great detail, but the second part ended as quickly and chaotically as if the bell rang for the end of get out of class. My wife works hard. It would be great if I could come back and add some changes when I have time. Thank you.

What is the difference between this and a red note suddenly falling out of an old wallet that has been stored away!

The story is very emotional and the logic of the story jumps a bit, as if the reader is looking through the memories left behind by each character in the story line, using emotions as a thread, but it feels a bit like the protagonists' stories have not been fully read. Lightning protection: 80% of the heroine in the whole story is a snake, she is all sugar dregs, mostly emotional, little story line

I happened to see a poem that seemed quite suitable for Peg—— "My eyes are clear" Alberto Cael I trust the world like a daisy, Because I saw it. Instead of thinking about it, Because thinking means not understanding… I have no philosophy, I only have feelings... If I speak of nature, it is not because I understand it But because I love it. As for the reason for love, Just like in love, you don't understand what you love at all Or why love, and what love is… Love is eternal innocence, And the only innocence is not thinking...

It's a pity that I only saw this article now. It took me one day to read it, not only the fate of Peg but also the stories of other supporting characters. Abu is always upset. I shed tears when I saw the later part, and the sadness in my heart filled me with the ending. The wife's gentle writing style has a touch of sadness. After watching it, I felt completely relieved and looking forward to the next one! I really miss Abu! ! ! !

I've been rejected all the time and failed to be an art student, right?

After watching this, it's still the most beautiful and high-spirited period of my youth.

I finished reading it in 4 days... It was actually not easy, after all, I could only spare two hours to watch it every day. . . In fact, what attracts me the most is the writing style. This is the first time I read an article by this author. I like the writing style very much. It is like a fairy tale book - innocent, cute, romantic, unrestrained and free. From Pergarita's perspective, I see a beautiful world. And this is what I have lost. I rarely look at the world from this perspective anymore... I'm very happy that this article can help me find my innocence. At the same time, I really feel that it is a pity for Abu. . There is nothing too OOC about Laotang, like?

Why, why do so many people have such regretful endings? There is obviously a chance to correct it. Is this fate?

To be honest, the capitalization is more like prose or poetry, but as a novel it is really hard to read.