The Villain Is Ridiculously Snarky [Book Transmigration]

I don't understand (??? Dan??)?????? The relationship between Yucui and Jinghe is like this... It feels a bit shallow... Jinghe had a relationship with her apprentice because of the inner demon, and the apprentice became pregnant because of it... I really don't like Jinghe, he seems to be strong, but he fails to be responsible for his own actions (it was difficult to see Jinghe's zqsg towards her during Yucui's lifetime, and her attitude towards Yucui has always been long-term) The contempt and arrogance of the younger generation towards the younger generation, not wanting her to be hurt, but not wanting her to leave him to grow up. This is not the attitude towards a lover who can be with him for a lifetime. It makes people feel a strong sense of fatherliness... To put it bluntly, Jinghe just covets the innocence and beauty of the female disciple... All he can see is how Yu Cui cannot do without Jinghe, but Jinghe seems to be just a simple sustenance of emotions and desires for Yu Cui). It's really hard to say that this relationship is a two-way choice. Maybe it's because I didn't write carefully about the life and death they both experienced together. Without the support of the suspension bridge effect, it's really hard for people to feel the bond between them. It may make many readers, like me, feel that Jinghe is just an empty, lonely and cold uncle, unable to resist the temptation of his apprentice's beauty, and it is difficult to show off to his own daughter. Showing the responsibility of her father... She thought that Yu Cui was a powerless girl. Due to the strength of her master and the absence of her father, she may have developed an Electra complex. Before she had seen the rich world outside and before she could make her own understanding of love, she was chosen by her master, and then she got pregnant (???!!!) And finally died... Harmful, in fact, the identity of Yu Cui as a master and disciple is also considered as a kind of lightning point. In the traditional concept, once a teacher is a lifelong father, many people think that this can be regarded as a couple in a certain sense. (When I was reading the article, I also guessed that Xiaotian was Yu Cui using some kind of The descendants of Pixiu raised by a unique breeding method... I didn't expect that they would be the "prizes" after winning the "one-night stand"... It's really a sin... (Sigh), I hope Xiaotian will not meet such parents in the next life... (What a sin) My favorite characters in the article are undoubtedly Gu Yunniang and Ye Shenglan! ! ! These two female characters are so exciting! The highlight of Gu Yunniang lies in her decisive sacrifice for her family mission or personal ideal. She may also have an affair with her children, but she still chooses her mission and sacrifices for it... It's so admirable! Not to mention Ye Shenglan, such a woman with such a powerful force, beauty, and courage to take on the role is simply my favorite kind of heroine. It's a pity that she and Meng Jingzhe have different life paths. Couples are also made in heaven. Only Meng Jingzhe and Long Yin can accompany each other and comfort each other in a long and endless life, but if I recommend it, I will definitely recommend the combination of Emperor and Empress www But u1s1, the story of the protagonist in the early stage is really well written! Yygq and so on are really great! Hahahaha, I have to say that most of the plots are very relaxing. After all, it is very refreshing to watch a genius like Meng Jingzhe + a master of yin and yang fight against people, hahaha...

Senior brother, the man under the Extreme Cold Palace didn't make it clear. Who destroyed Shi Jiuying's underground world? And what about those two little bastards of the Demon Clan who keep fire? Oh, by the way, there is also the man who entered the same sect with the male protagonist, and Ah Qi from Yin Yang Tomb.

As for senior brother, there is no explanation

Also, the senior brother and the man at the end of the underground haven't made it clear what will happen to the blind queen.

Xiaotian's soul should be complete, and why is there still the mark of the Tianluo Spider on her face?

I haven't explained a lot of things, oh my god

Senior Brother: Can I only exist in the first few chapters?

The main line is still clear, but there may be too many characters and the portrayal is not very fascinating. Overall, it's pretty good! Looking forward to the next work

After watching it, there are too many holes dug that cannot be filled. The main plot is messy and unclear, and I can only rely on extras to make up for it. Meng Jingzhe should be the prototype of Shao Yu? Cultivation+Quick Travel+Shuangwen is very interesting. I hope the author can revise this book again and fill in the pitfalls in the future. It's better to publish a book hahaha.

In fact, the author's writing style is still good, and the fast-travel stories he wrote before were also very good, but it is true that the world of this one is too big, and there are some holes that have not been filled in. You need to work harder?