The Male Lead Won't Sell, Someone Save the Supporting Female Character

How should I put it? The second half of the whole article gave me an inexplicable feeling. The setting is OK, but a lot of content gives people a very awkward feeling. Some things also feel that they are not written clearly. The heroine's character is not particularly vivid and three-dimensional (of course, it does not mean that the heroine is not good). The whole article feels awkward to me, but for the sake of context. I have to comment on it again. Generally speaking, it is still readable, but the author really needs to work harder. (This is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Go away. There is no sense of ridicule or sarcasm. I apologize if there is any improper language or offensive remarks. I just feel it. I didn't say anything unpleasant.)

The author is really good at writing. Generally speaking, his flaws are not concealed. The narration method is very novel, but it is really too fragmentary for readers. An's story is very full, and the two characters fight against each other in the plot line. I think it is very similar to human beings themselves. For the world, human beings cannot be more insignificant, just like the paper people in this story, but human beings miraculously change the whole world, brave and wise. Just like their struggle in the story, although everyone knows that it is a moth to a flame and a mantis blocking the car, everyone chooses their own dignity and defends the rights of being born. So I like this story very much The following is my personal opinion: An has experienced three lives, but this matter was clearly expressed in the poem at the beginning. You may consider writing more about this place next time. The whole story is a bit too rushed. The live content of the awakening in the second half of the romance drama is too broken. I understand the meaning of this plot, but there may still be some problems with the connection. (Personal opinion, just a little opinion, please don't mind the author)

I finished reading it in one go. The story at the beginning is very exciting. Even if the stories of the other male protagonists are written in detail, I am still willing to read it. But at the end, it was too jumpy. What kind of robots, what kind of bets, these feelings are all pulled out for the ending. Although the heroine also dreamed about robots in the previous chapters, the overall feeling was very ridiculous. Why don't you think about getting all the male protagonists, hahahahaha.

A good satirical sweet novel turns into a suspenseful novel. Reading the novel makes people think about who am I? Where am I? Such a profound topic

I thought I read a sweet love novel, but now I can't stop crying.

Finished reading it in one sitting! The writing is good at the beginning, but it feels a bit sloppy at the end.

I discovered this novel when I turned off automatic subscription [I was afraid]. I stopped reading it after the college entrance examination after following the series. Why didn't the author write another book? At that time, I found out that this was the author's first book. I thought it was very well written and very spiritual. I didn't continue writing. What a pity.

I really like my childhood sweetheart and it's a bit sad to end it.

After reading the whole book, the first part is very good and smooth, but the second part feels a bit confusing.

It's good to read, although the plot behind it is a bit brain-burning, but I think it's very meaningful, and I'm very happy to enter this novel this winter and get closer to these characters. Each male protagonist has their own personality, which makes me unable to make a decision. But in the end, An Chengxing is another There is a feeling of relief. Fortunately, it is him. In the end, it is him. Hahahaha. Maybe I also understand the behavior of the heroine. I hope they can live happily in another world. Thank you to the author for writing this article. I look forward to other articles from the author [cat head] [cat head]