He glanced at the exquisitely prepared dishes and furrowed his brow. “The five grains are all turbid energy. You should eat less of them.”
She gave him a sidelong look at his unconvinced expression, then smiled and asked, “The true energy one receives from Heaven combines with the energy of grain to fill the body. What makes the five grains turbid?”
He snatched away the famous sword that had nearly been used to pick bones and said sternly, “A treasured sword is sacred. It must not be profaned!”
Picking up another blade, sharp enough to cut through iron, she laughed. “Things made by people have value only when they're useful to people. Leaving them unused is the real waste.”
He loved deeply, without words and without regret. Peerlessly elegant, yet lonely and aloof: that was Murong Ziying.
The woman who loved him, understood him, helped him, and was even willing to perish with him is my own creation.
But
With two worlds separated by a distance as close as it is impossibly far, can they forge a path between them?
One is a cold, dignified young cultivator, devoted to protecting all living beings and bearing the world in his heart.
The other is a perceptive, resolute young woman from the mortal world, caught in a web of conspiracies.
What kind of ending will their story have?
Also: I've recently finished a round of revisions. If you have any more suggestions for edits, please leave a comment. I firmly believe a story can always be improved.
Recommended stories:
Theme:
First of all: thank the author for bringing this original female novel about Murong Ziying~
Twelve years later, it is really a big step too late. I don't know where the author has wandered and whether he will come back to read the comments?
It is really a great thing to be able to complete an article of 200,000 words. Thank you to the author for giving the story of Xiao Dongfang and Xiao Ziying a happy ending. Thank you! !
And the other thing that finally made me couldn't help but comment was the author's understanding of Ziying.
Whether it is the "resentment" section in the preface that made me laugh, or the author's careful consideration of Ziying's movements in the text, it can all reflect the author's deep thinking about Ziying. This kind of restoration of characters is what all original fans and character fans yearn for. I will not hesitate to respect and praise you!
In the story, Dongfang is a very good girl. Her cleverness, strength, intelligence, and understanding are in contrast to Ziying. On the one hand, she is different from the rules he has adhered to for many years, but on the other hand, it is not harmful. She can even do the so-called unachievable things that are bound by the rules. She is from a noble family, and the Murong family is also a royal relative. He is a little familiar, but also a little novel. It is reasonable for such an east to attract him.
And the two of them indeed put their children's love before justice or perseverance. Such forbearance and temperament are very compatible. If the heroine is too clingy, she will be bored, which will be incompatible with Ziying's character, and will make her feel awkward. In this story, Dongfang's character can bring out Ziying's youthful spirit and make readers smile.
Let's talk about Ziying's side. When I saw it, the "sexy" extra that the author mentioned had been locked (laughs), so I didn't mention it for now. Let's talk about the text. In the story, no matter how much Ziying is unable to control herself, she just blushes and hugs Dongfang to keep her. I agree with the author, and I also feel that if there were more, it would not be like him. This level of behavior is enough to show his intentions. The gentleman's demeanor is mixed with a little boyish recklessness, but it is particularly cute. Later, when Dongfang was seriously ill, he blurted out, "Please allow me to marry your sister." It was really desolate, decisive, sad and shocking, and it was a wonderful stroke.
The author did not give up the development and portrayal of Ziying's image for the sake of love. Whether it was "exchanging my life for Lingsha's life" or his determination to "eliminate demons, defend the law, and support justice", the plot was arranged in the story to show it. Some of the obscure emotional descriptions in the original work were also handled appropriately, and successfully turned into a complement to Ziying. Readers will be amazed!
Finally, there is the story's vision of "a hundred years". Allow me to say a few words: I have always been thinking about what Ziying will experience when he grows up from the ignorant little Ziying in the Qionghua period to the white-haired Ziying who "the law of heaven is always there" in the end? It must have taken many life and death, many reincarnations of fate before he could say such helpless but relieved words. So this time there needs to be a painful farewell, but there is also hope in it, so that he can persevere and finally truly enter the path of immortality. In the original work, Ziying has never experienced the pain and joy of love. Although it is not necessary, it always makes people wonder, if there is such a relationship, how will it end? It must be: there is beauty, but it is difficult to escape the sadness of dissipation, but it is not some great joy or great sorrow; the caress and twists and turns of the romance seem to be unconventional. The author's ending can be said to have given me a possibility that is very close to my heart: after the two fell in love and stayed together for decades, Dongfang's life as a mortal expired and he entered reincarnation. Ziying, on the other hand, became an immortal, immortal, traveling around, looking for the shadow of the East in another life. Such a Ziying must have the peace of mind that the dust has settled, and the sweetness of aftertaste, so that a hundred years of loneliness will not seem lonely.
I have talked about my endless admiration and admiration, but also made some small comments. After a cursory glance at the long comments of other readers, I can basically summarize them all. Probably, some plots are not perfect, such as the part where Xiao Ziying falls into a rumor. The brother represents "there is still a lot of jealousy in the Qionghua sect" and there is little explanation in the subsequent text. Moreover, it is a bit inconsistent to place the frame of the peach scandal on Xiao Ziying. There are many small plots that are more or less unfinished. And my selfish hope is that Ziying and Dongfang can stop being hurt all the time (tears), it makes me feel so sad...
That's pretty much it. It's late, I just want to leave some of my own feelings. As for when it will be seen by the author, it depends on fate! When this article was updated, I was only in the first grade of elementary school, and you were born before I was born——
Vulgar opinions, if any offense, please forgive me. Finally, allow me to thank the author once again, thank you for your works, and thank you for loving Murong Ziying.
Finally found the place where I originally posted! I don't know if you will see this comment of mine, but I still want to leave a message...
The first time I saw my article was half a year ago (I reposted it!). Since I saw this article, my admiration for me and my love for Ziying and Dongfang have been out of control... I feel that the Ziying in the article is exactly the Ziying in the game. It is not an exaggeration to say that this is the fairy tale! !
I really like my description of Ziying and Dongfang's slowly growing relationship. It's very delicate and true...
When I have nothing to do, I like to open it and take a look. In the past few months, I finally couldn't help it. I put it on my mobile phone and watched it anytime, anywhere, but I never got tired of it...
Especially several classic scenes, such as Ziying being injured and being dragged away by Dongfang, Ziying taking Dongfang to wield a sword for the first time, Dongfang deliberately falling off, and the gentle kiss between Dongfang and Ziying when they parted after the incident at the Huainan King's Cemetery
There are so many things worth recalling~~Sigh~~After reading such a long article about me, it's a pity that I didn't learn much about my writing skills, but there's nothing I can do about it~~If I had a writing style as good as yours, I wouldn't have written such a long article myself. Firstly, I don't have the perseverance, and secondly, unlike me, I don't grasp Ziying as accurately as I do!
All in all, my article is simply the highest level among the Xiansi fandoms I have seen~~
Well, I still have a little regret, secretly I still like Dongfang's black hair, and I also want Dongfang to have a child to accompany Ziying~~Wow, I'm still too greedy, just ignore me~~
It took three days to finish this article~
In fact, I originally disliked fan fiction. The characters in the drama may have become completely different when they entered the fan fiction.
However, the big Ziying is both real and illusory, which makes me have the urge to read more.
Yes, the woman standing next to Ziying is by no means ordinary.
You are a strange person who is independent from the world, and I am the dust of a complicated and troubled world. This setting is really good.
Dongfang is really good
Whether it's Ziying in the game or Ziying in the text, they are both so heart-wrenching.
But
Between life and death, what is broken is just the eyes.
Heart, still connected
Send Dongfang and Murong in the article
The ending is good, okay, okay...
Is this considered HE? . .
Cough, clear your throat. It seems that this chapter has not been rated yet, so I will add the long review I promised (by the way, have all my long reviews been given to this article? Rz)
Main topic:
This article is my own to say, this article is the only Fairy Sword fanfic that I (please don't doubt) can persist in reading and like. Well, maybe my taste is too unique, but personally, as a fan work, I love the most articles that are faithful to the original work and have the author's understanding of the original work.
And this article, first of all, is faithful to the characters in the original work. Needless to say Ziying, but I think Tianhe and others are also able to make people shine. Although it is a supporting role and not much is written, the character's personality naturally comes to life on the page. For example, Tianhe's verbal behavior after being blind makes people smile unconsciously when reading it, but they also feel sad and disappointed.
Second, and what I think is most important, is that this article truly adheres to the spirit of Sword and Sword 4. From a macro perspective, the so-called great chivalrous person serves the country and the people, Qionghua's decline, Ziying's transformation (it is undeniable that he was a bit "pedantic" at first), Tianhe and others' righteous chivalry, and even the Machiavellian actions of the original heroine Dongfang. It seems that it is due to everyone's temperament, but behind it is the desire to eliminate evil, promote good, and protect the common people. From a micro perspective, it can also be said to be another clue, which is also consistent with the concept of Fairy Sword 4, that is, "My destiny is determined by me and not by God." There is no need to say more about the other characters because their characters are based on the original ones. As for Dongfang, as an original character, her behavior and choices when faced with difficulties also reflect this. The most impressive thing is that near the end of the article, the two of them have already intended to go to hell together, but Dongfang still insists on seeking the elusive life for Ziying. In fact, under destiny, no matter how tragic the personal struggle and resistance is, it is just in vain. However, the reason why people are respected and appreciated is precisely because they will not give in even if they face an unshakable fate.
With these two points, this article can be read.
What makes this article attractive is the author's unique plot and character setting.
As for the protagonist, I will only talk about the heroine (the other characters are relatively faithful to the original work). Dongfang Xiu is actually a difficult character to please, not only because of the contrast between the original character and the existing characters in the original work, but also because of the simple question of "is he worthy of Ziying?" In the first few chapters of the article (I'm talking about the version before revision), the author should have already comprehensively set up Dongfang's character. Perhaps because of this, too many aspects of the character are displayed in front of the reader at once, which makes people feel a little confused. It is inevitable that the heroine's character is not very unified. However, as the plot develops, many of the initial character fragments gradually merge, and the image of the East becomes three-dimensional and vivid. At this point, the reader suddenly feels emotional.
To put it simply, I personally feel that Dongfang's character can be divided into two aspects. On the one hand, she is a thoughtful and manipulative "princess" created by her long-term and step-by-step life, and on the other hand, she is an ordinary girl who is firm, intelligent but pretty. Dongfang is not Dongfang without any aspect, and the combination of these two personality factors can be said to have caused the tragedy of Dongfang's fate. If she can give up one of them, maybe she can get a purer happiness. (Okay, even though there is that "reincarnation", I just think it is a tragedy, a tragedy = =)
But having said that, it was precisely because of such personalities and experiences that she and Ziying were able to attract each other. The author himself said it well, Dongfang and Ziying, at first glance, one seems to have a very secular spirit, while the other is pure and ascetic, and they seem to be completely different. However, in essence, they are the same. Whether they use secular tactics or magical weapons, what they pursue and yearn for is not the power and glory of the secular or fairy world, but just to protect the common people. (Flower arrangement: Xuan Ling, who hates the fairy world even more, is actually a very cute character, um, and his rumored girlfriend - -+ But I won't go into details here)
Now that the characters are done talking, here's the part about the plot.
Let me just talk about the most impressive points. The first is Dongfang's "cruelty" to certain soldiers when he first appeared on the scene. As the princess, this behavior can be explained by the words "strict military law", so I didn't pay much attention to it at first. But as the truth was revealed, I felt emotional. Not to mention the profound meaning of Dongfang's actions, just those few dead people (laughing). They are passers-by and little people. However, they also have their own joys and sorrows. From the warriors who bravely charge into battle to kill the enemy, to the wanton criminals, to the final gratitude to the East before execution, it also contains many indescribable twists and turns of emotions. The author is very fond of me for being able to write a sidekick like this~
Then skip countless plots and only talk about some small episodes of staying together for a hundred years. The details of the two hiding their faces and running away under the teacher's "caress" are really cute. There are also Dongfang's words and deeds when facing the nymphomaniac little girl... Compared with the previous big plot, these can almost be regarded as insignificant, but they make people feel warm. Even if it was short-lived (in fact, it cannot be said to be short-lived), after all, the two of them were really happy. As for that reincarnation, as some girls said, even if it is the same soul, the memory is different, the growing environment is different, and those very "oriental" characteristics and even shortcomings are no longer there, how can it be regarded as perfection for Ziying? (Girl Linghua, you tortured us on purpose, right = =#)
Okay, after so much verbosity, let me talk about the shortcomings of this article.
First of all, Ziying's character is a little deformed in the middle of the article = =# Well, it's the part where he and Dongfang are entangled. Perhaps Ziying should be more tolerant of Cheng Ming's temperament. Certain reactions are still a bit abrupt for him and Qiong Yao.
Second, I seem to have said once in a certain chapter that too many plots from the original Fairy Sword were introduced in the middle. It seems that some girls think this is good, but in my opinion, either focus on creating original plots, such as the visit to the fox girl, which is very cute; or add original details to the existing plots, such as the Jimo Lantern or Qionghua Moonlight.
Well, that's it for now. Went to eat...
Final statement: The above comments are for the original version. I haven't had time to read the revised version yet (I've been so busy lately). After reading the revised version, I may add some comments, and maybe I'll hide my face and snicker (she's very lazy).
Above.
Ps: My specialty is incoherent words, please just make do with it = =. . .
Another ps: I said, Miss Linghua, you have opened a new pit!
After seeing the ending... I feel that I would rather that the lady was not Dongfang... Because Dongfang after reincarnation may not be Dongfang...
Well, my article has been updated a little bit... Please take a look. .
Little Mo'er came out…
One more thing to say before going to bed——
When will the adults be able to fix the text?
Once it's fixed, let's download it and save it on your phone~
This article is extremely well written.
The character's personality is well grasped. At least I have read so many long novels about Jin Jiang and Xianmeng (note that I said long novels), and finally came back to this article.
You deserve praise, and more importantly, you can write a complete and unhurried conclusion, which is good.
Actually... It would be nice if the whole article could have its ups and downs. I still think a flat narrative is more suitable for a short story.
The article is too bland... Well, this is a shortcoming, but it is also an advantage.
To be honest, I felt sick to my stomach when I watched the Fairy Sword YY fanfic some time ago. Although I cannot deny the value of some adults' words, I feel that if the characters are written in a way that is too distorted and "sentimental", then it will be an insult to Fairy Sword just like the fairy drama!
I really like the words written by adults.
Also, I personally feel that if the real Ziying doesn't like (this means loving) Lingsha, he should be a little more frank with Dongfang (just a little), because looking at the overall situation, even when he firmly believes that monsters are evil and people are good, he has thought deeply about his own ideas.
Xu Changqing was a lot more stubborn, and Xian San did not reflect deeply from the beginning to the end. It was not until Xian San Gaiden that I understood the deeper meaning.
After all, Ziying is not Xu Changqing's inflexible Jinshimumu.
It's been seven years since I got to know Fairy Sword and Fairy Tales, and I've been frantically searching for Fairy Sword and Fairy Four fandoms recently. Now I just want to say one thing -
Hmm... I'm so lucky to see this article.
First of all: thank the author for bringing this original female novel about Murong Ziying~ Twelve years later, it is really a big step too late. I don't know where the author has wandered and whether he will come back to read the comments? It is really a great thing to be able to complete an article of 200,000 words. Thank you to the author for giving the story of Xiao Dongfang and Xiao Ziying a happy ending. Thank you! ! And the other thing that finally made me couldn't help but comment was the author's understanding of Ziying. Whether it is the "resentment" section in the preface that made me laugh, or the author's careful consideration of Ziying's movements in the text, it can all reflect the author's deep thinking about Ziying. This kind of restoration of characters is what all original fans and character fans yearn for. I will not hesitate to respect and praise you! In the story, Dongfang is a very good girl. Her cleverness, strength, intelligence, and understanding are in contrast to Ziying. On the one hand, she is different from the rules he has adhered to for many years, but on the other hand, it is not harmful. She can even do the so-called unachievable things that are bound by the rules. She is from a noble family, and the Murong family is also a royal relative. He is a little familiar, but also a little novel. It is reasonable for such an east to attract him. And the two of them indeed put their children's love before justice or perseverance. Such forbearance and temperament are very compatible. If the heroine is too clingy, she will be bored, which will be incompatible with Ziying's character, and will make her feel awkward. In this story, Dongfang's character can bring out Ziying's youthful spirit and make readers smile. Let's talk about Ziying's side. When I saw it, the "sexy" extra that the author mentioned had been locked (laughs), so I didn't mention it for now. Let's talk about the text. In the story, no matter how much Ziying is unable to control herself, she just blushes and hugs Dongfang to keep her. I agree with the author, and I also feel that if there were more, it would not be like him. This level of behavior is enough to show his intentions. The gentleman's demeanor is mixed with a little boyish recklessness, but it is particularly cute. Later, when Dongfang was seriously ill, he blurted out, "Please allow me to marry your sister." It was really desolate, decisive, sad and shocking, and it was a wonderful stroke. The author did not give up the development and portrayal of Ziying's image for the sake of love. Whether it was "exchanging my life for Lingsha's life" or his determination to "eliminate demons, defend the law, and support justice", the plot was arranged in the story to show it. Some of the obscure emotional descriptions in the original work were also handled appropriately, and successfully turned into a complement to Ziying. Readers will be amazed! Finally, there is the story's vision of "a hundred years". Allow me to say a few words: I have always been thinking about what Ziying will experience when he grows up from the ignorant little Ziying in the Qionghua period to the white-haired Ziying who "the law of heaven is always there" in the end? It must have taken many life and death, many reincarnations of fate before he could say such helpless but relieved words. So this time there needs to be a painful farewell, but there is also hope in it, so that he can persevere and finally truly enter the path of immortality. In the original work, Ziying has never experienced the pain and joy of love. Although it is not necessary, it always makes people wonder, if there is such a relationship, how will it end? It must be: there is beauty, but it is difficult to escape the sadness of dissipation, but it is not some great joy or great sorrow; the caress and twists and turns of the romance seem to be unconventional. The author's ending can be said to have given me a possibility that is very close to my heart: after the two fell in love and stayed together for decades, Dongfang's life as a mortal expired and he entered reincarnation. Ziying, on the other hand, became an immortal, immortal, traveling around, looking for the shadow of the East in another life. Such a Ziying must have the peace of mind that the dust has settled, and the sweetness of aftertaste, so that a hundred years of loneliness will not seem lonely. I have talked about my endless admiration and admiration, but also made some small comments. After a cursory glance at the long comments of other readers, I can basically summarize them all. Probably, some plots are not perfect, such as the part where Xiao Ziying falls into a rumor. The brother represents "there is still a lot of jealousy in the Qionghua sect" and there is little explanation in the subsequent text. Moreover, it is a bit inconsistent to place the frame of the peach scandal on Xiao Ziying. There are many small plots that are more or less unfinished. And my selfish hope is that Ziying and Dongfang can stop being hurt all the time (tears), it makes me feel so sad... That's pretty much it. It's late, I just want to leave some of my own feelings. As for when it will be seen by the author, it depends on fate! When this article was updated, I was only in the first grade of elementary school, and you were born before I was born—— Vulgar opinions, if any offense, please forgive me. Finally, allow me to thank the author once again, thank you for your works, and thank you for loving Murong Ziying.
Finally found the place where I originally posted! I don't know if you will see this comment of mine, but I still want to leave a message... The first time I saw my article was half a year ago (I reposted it!). Since I saw this article, my admiration for me and my love for Ziying and Dongfang have been out of control... I feel that the Ziying in the article is exactly the Ziying in the game. It is not an exaggeration to say that this is the fairy tale! ! I really like my description of Ziying and Dongfang's slowly growing relationship. It's very delicate and true... When I have nothing to do, I like to open it and take a look. In the past few months, I finally couldn't help it. I put it on my mobile phone and watched it anytime, anywhere, but I never got tired of it... Especially several classic scenes, such as Ziying being injured and being dragged away by Dongfang, Ziying taking Dongfang to wield a sword for the first time, Dongfang deliberately falling off, and the gentle kiss between Dongfang and Ziying when they parted after the incident at the Huainan King's Cemetery There are so many things worth recalling~~Sigh~~After reading such a long article about me, it's a pity that I didn't learn much about my writing skills, but there's nothing I can do about it~~If I had a writing style as good as yours, I wouldn't have written such a long article myself. Firstly, I don't have the perseverance, and secondly, unlike me, I don't grasp Ziying as accurately as I do! All in all, my article is simply the highest level among the Xiansi fandoms I have seen~~ Well, I still have a little regret, secretly I still like Dongfang's black hair, and I also want Dongfang to have a child to accompany Ziying~~Wow, I'm still too greedy, just ignore me~~
It took three days to finish this article~ In fact, I originally disliked fan fiction. The characters in the drama may have become completely different when they entered the fan fiction. However, the big Ziying is both real and illusory, which makes me have the urge to read more. Yes, the woman standing next to Ziying is by no means ordinary. You are a strange person who is independent from the world, and I am the dust of a complicated and troubled world. This setting is really good. Dongfang is really good Whether it's Ziying in the game or Ziying in the text, they are both so heart-wrenching. But Between life and death, what is broken is just the eyes. Heart, still connected Send Dongfang and Murong in the article
The ending is good, okay, okay...
Is this considered HE? . .
Cough, clear your throat. It seems that this chapter has not been rated yet, so I will add the long review I promised (by the way, have all my long reviews been given to this article? Rz) Main topic: This article is my own to say, this article is the only Fairy Sword fanfic that I (please don't doubt) can persist in reading and like. Well, maybe my taste is too unique, but personally, as a fan work, I love the most articles that are faithful to the original work and have the author's understanding of the original work. And this article, first of all, is faithful to the characters in the original work. Needless to say Ziying, but I think Tianhe and others are also able to make people shine. Although it is a supporting role and not much is written, the character's personality naturally comes to life on the page. For example, Tianhe's verbal behavior after being blind makes people smile unconsciously when reading it, but they also feel sad and disappointed. Second, and what I think is most important, is that this article truly adheres to the spirit of Sword and Sword 4. From a macro perspective, the so-called great chivalrous person serves the country and the people, Qionghua's decline, Ziying's transformation (it is undeniable that he was a bit "pedantic" at first), Tianhe and others' righteous chivalry, and even the Machiavellian actions of the original heroine Dongfang. It seems that it is due to everyone's temperament, but behind it is the desire to eliminate evil, promote good, and protect the common people. From a micro perspective, it can also be said to be another clue, which is also consistent with the concept of Fairy Sword 4, that is, "My destiny is determined by me and not by God." There is no need to say more about the other characters because their characters are based on the original ones. As for Dongfang, as an original character, her behavior and choices when faced with difficulties also reflect this. The most impressive thing is that near the end of the article, the two of them have already intended to go to hell together, but Dongfang still insists on seeking the elusive life for Ziying. In fact, under destiny, no matter how tragic the personal struggle and resistance is, it is just in vain. However, the reason why people are respected and appreciated is precisely because they will not give in even if they face an unshakable fate. With these two points, this article can be read. What makes this article attractive is the author's unique plot and character setting. As for the protagonist, I will only talk about the heroine (the other characters are relatively faithful to the original work). Dongfang Xiu is actually a difficult character to please, not only because of the contrast between the original character and the existing characters in the original work, but also because of the simple question of "is he worthy of Ziying?" In the first few chapters of the article (I'm talking about the version before revision), the author should have already comprehensively set up Dongfang's character. Perhaps because of this, too many aspects of the character are displayed in front of the reader at once, which makes people feel a little confused. It is inevitable that the heroine's character is not very unified. However, as the plot develops, many of the initial character fragments gradually merge, and the image of the East becomes three-dimensional and vivid. At this point, the reader suddenly feels emotional. To put it simply, I personally feel that Dongfang's character can be divided into two aspects. On the one hand, she is a thoughtful and manipulative "princess" created by her long-term and step-by-step life, and on the other hand, she is an ordinary girl who is firm, intelligent but pretty. Dongfang is not Dongfang without any aspect, and the combination of these two personality factors can be said to have caused the tragedy of Dongfang's fate. If she can give up one of them, maybe she can get a purer happiness. (Okay, even though there is that "reincarnation", I just think it is a tragedy, a tragedy = =) But having said that, it was precisely because of such personalities and experiences that she and Ziying were able to attract each other. The author himself said it well, Dongfang and Ziying, at first glance, one seems to have a very secular spirit, while the other is pure and ascetic, and they seem to be completely different. However, in essence, they are the same. Whether they use secular tactics or magical weapons, what they pursue and yearn for is not the power and glory of the secular or fairy world, but just to protect the common people. (Flower arrangement: Xuan Ling, who hates the fairy world even more, is actually a very cute character, um, and his rumored girlfriend - -+ But I won't go into details here) Now that the characters are done talking, here's the part about the plot. Let me just talk about the most impressive points. The first is Dongfang's "cruelty" to certain soldiers when he first appeared on the scene. As the princess, this behavior can be explained by the words "strict military law", so I didn't pay much attention to it at first. But as the truth was revealed, I felt emotional. Not to mention the profound meaning of Dongfang's actions, just those few dead people (laughing). They are passers-by and little people. However, they also have their own joys and sorrows. From the warriors who bravely charge into battle to kill the enemy, to the wanton criminals, to the final gratitude to the East before execution, it also contains many indescribable twists and turns of emotions. The author is very fond of me for being able to write a sidekick like this~ Then skip countless plots and only talk about some small episodes of staying together for a hundred years. The details of the two hiding their faces and running away under the teacher's "caress" are really cute. There are also Dongfang's words and deeds when facing the nymphomaniac little girl... Compared with the previous big plot, these can almost be regarded as insignificant, but they make people feel warm. Even if it was short-lived (in fact, it cannot be said to be short-lived), after all, the two of them were really happy. As for that reincarnation, as some girls said, even if it is the same soul, the memory is different, the growing environment is different, and those very "oriental" characteristics and even shortcomings are no longer there, how can it be regarded as perfection for Ziying? (Girl Linghua, you tortured us on purpose, right = =#) Okay, after so much verbosity, let me talk about the shortcomings of this article. First of all, Ziying's character is a little deformed in the middle of the article = =# Well, it's the part where he and Dongfang are entangled. Perhaps Ziying should be more tolerant of Cheng Ming's temperament. Certain reactions are still a bit abrupt for him and Qiong Yao. Second, I seem to have said once in a certain chapter that too many plots from the original Fairy Sword were introduced in the middle. It seems that some girls think this is good, but in my opinion, either focus on creating original plots, such as the visit to the fox girl, which is very cute; or add original details to the existing plots, such as the Jimo Lantern or Qionghua Moonlight. Well, that's it for now. Went to eat... Final statement: The above comments are for the original version. I haven't had time to read the revised version yet (I've been so busy lately). After reading the revised version, I may add some comments, and maybe I'll hide my face and snicker (she's very lazy). Above. Ps: My specialty is incoherent words, please just make do with it = =. . . Another ps: I said, Miss Linghua, you have opened a new pit!
After seeing the ending... I feel that I would rather that the lady was not Dongfang... Because Dongfang after reincarnation may not be Dongfang...
Well, my article has been updated a little bit... Please take a look. . Little Mo'er came out…
One more thing to say before going to bed—— When will the adults be able to fix the text? Once it's fixed, let's download it and save it on your phone~
This article is extremely well written. The character's personality is well grasped. At least I have read so many long novels about Jin Jiang and Xianmeng (note that I said long novels), and finally came back to this article. You deserve praise, and more importantly, you can write a complete and unhurried conclusion, which is good. Actually... It would be nice if the whole article could have its ups and downs. I still think a flat narrative is more suitable for a short story. The article is too bland... Well, this is a shortcoming, but it is also an advantage. To be honest, I felt sick to my stomach when I watched the Fairy Sword YY fanfic some time ago. Although I cannot deny the value of some adults' words, I feel that if the characters are written in a way that is too distorted and "sentimental", then it will be an insult to Fairy Sword just like the fairy drama! I really like the words written by adults. Also, I personally feel that if the real Ziying doesn't like (this means loving) Lingsha, he should be a little more frank with Dongfang (just a little), because looking at the overall situation, even when he firmly believes that monsters are evil and people are good, he has thought deeply about his own ideas. Xu Changqing was a lot more stubborn, and Xian San did not reflect deeply from the beginning to the end. It was not until Xian San Gaiden that I understood the deeper meaning. After all, Ziying is not Xu Changqing's inflexible Jinshimumu. It's been seven years since I got to know Fairy Sword and Fairy Tales, and I've been frantically searching for Fairy Sword and Fairy Four fandoms recently. Now I just want to say one thing - Hmm... I'm so lucky to see this article.