I Don't Dare Write This Book Anymore

??? I have been reading this book for a long time, and it really got more and more interesting to me. I couldn't help but write a long review. The first story in the prelude [The Little Clerk Who Writes Internet Articles] is from Chapter 1 to Chapter 10. It is obvious that this part is used to explain the origin story of Ye Yuchen and the overall background to pave the way for the following stories. As a mere foreshadowing, this part will feel a little too forward, but the foreshadowing of this part is related to the subsequent story. For example, [This House Has No Ghosts] and [Rose Hotel], some clues have been initially given in the prelude, which makes it easier to follow the hints given earlier when going through the story. ??? Just looking at the plot of the prelude, the business war story in the bookstore is very ordinary and ordinary. I can only say that the protagonist and the supporting characters are not good people. It is true that Shen Yuli is a scumbag, but Ye Yuchen and Shen Yuli are only against Shi Yue. Although he claims to be righteous, he is just another villain, which can be seen from the fact that he looks for a scapegoat. Moreover, Ye Yuchen also has a very loud tone, and his behavior after he succeeds is very rampant. To be honest, I have a very bad impression of this protagonist. ??? As for writing style, there is no need to pursue gorgeous words in online articles, nor do you need to spend too much time polishing them. For readers in Jinjiang, this style of writing may not be used to it. The main reason is the crazy repetition of words that makes readers uncomfortable, and nothing else. Too many exclamation points can not only serve as emphasis, but also give people the feeling that the author is counting words. Habits when writing, such as crazily overlapping words, are what Ye Yuchen used when writing "Suzhou Horror Story". I personally think this is a very innovative design, because after reading the prelude, you will find that this design is a bit similar to the plot at the beginning of Cao Xueqin's "Dream of Red Mansions". The excuse is that "Dream of Red Mansions" is "Jia Yucun Yan" and Cao Xueqin just edited it for me. All in all, it gives people a sense of reality, as if something like this really happened, but the readers who are reading the book don't know it. In addition to the names of other real famous authors, the author also included his own pen name and name, which immediately weakened the sense of fiction. In this way, because of the strong sense of reality, the horror of the novel must be doubled. But I have to say that there are too many unnecessary repetitions, which cannot be described in nonsense literature. Too many repetitions give people a bad impression. ??? Unit 1: [This house has no ghosts] ??? The stories in this unit are mainly forum-based, and stories are told directly from the first person. First of all, Chen Qi said that he was very afraid of ghosts, and then I felt that because he was very afraid of ghosts, he became highly sensitive to ghosts. This should be the reason why he noticed the difference earlier than his companions in the story. The plot of this ghost story is not particularly new. It is a very common plot that the computer automatically starts. What happened to Lao Fan's son in the end (he must have died, but why was he in the house, why did Lao Fan dare to rent the house out, and what was his motive). I did not continue to dig into it. In fact, I feel that I can write more about this aspect. The plot of this unit is very cliche. As soon as the description of Chen Qi's careful selection when he was looking for a house came out, I knew there must be something wrong with the house he finally picked, and it was true. The Rose Hotel, the theme of the next story, also appears in this story. The strange rules are problematic at first glance, but this hotel is not the focus of the story. It is at most a seasoning. The story is quite stable and does not feel up and down, and the difficulties encountered in finding a house are also very realistic. It may be true as the author said, as the first unit ghost story at the beginning of the novel, it will be a little slower than the later stories. ??? Unit 2: [Rose Hotel] ??? This story has been emphasizing at the beginning that Song Jianfei is ugly, and he was ridiculed and treated unfairly because of his ugly appearance. This seems to be of no use, but it doesn't kick back until Gui Tiezhu's name and identity are revealed near the end of the story. The two unlucky guys who were selected as the next gatekeepers have in common that they were ridiculed because of their innate conditions and their lives were affected as a result. But to be honest, if everything is to blame for being ugly, there is definitely a suspicion of shirking responsibility. Low appearance will definitely have a big impact, but it won't be that big. After reading this story, my mind was full of "Don't do XXX in class". There are really few memory points in the early stage, the plot is very trivial, and the story of the tenants is quite boring. The rhythm is slightly better. Later, when Song Jianfei and Song Jianfei entered the Rose Hotel to work, they were echoed by Agui's true identity and intentions through the strange ritual performed by Agui on his birth date. ??? The setting of Rose Hotel looks more like a prequel to a story, explaining where the ghosts in the subsequent ghost stories come from. The core of this story is still a bit unclear to me, but the stance against this phenomenon is clear. Ye Yuchen is also involved in this story. If I guess correctly, there should be Ye Yuchen's shadow behind all the subsequent stories. Ye Yuchen's partner, the so-called "monster hunter", will also appear. ??? Unit 3: [Hundred-person Haunted House Adventure] ??? The biggest difference between this story and the previous two stories is that there is more than one person's perspective. After the battle royale live started, the perspectives of several characters who were obviously cannon fodder were switched to show the live battle royale in various aspects. This can also give readers a sense of involvement even when the protagonist is controlled. However, the switching of perspectives and the respective stories of the cannon fodder characters are very messy, and no information is given except that they died. Moreover, the "Monster Hunter" also appears in this story again, but as a warning, although it is already too late at this time. Among them, the problem of the so-called Underworld Co., Ltd. He mentioned should be the evil ghost who fled the world with the death of Gui Tiezhu in the previous story "Rose Hotel". In this way, the two stories are connected in a tortuous way. ??? The plot of this story is also too confusing. The TV station is very cautious when it comes to live broadcasts, and it is impossible to do anything for the sake of ratings. Especially in this story, the TV station clearly knows that people may die just to broadcast and shirk responsibility, so they directly make the contestants sign contracts that assume responsibility. When a person from the future travels back in time and mentions parallel worlds and parallel universes, it is also very crude. It is obviously a supernatural novel but it still mixes elements of parallel worlds. Although the timeline and the Space-Time Management Bureau can also explain Ye Yuchen's rebirth, doesn't this conflict with the fact that Ye Yuchen died because of the underworld and was reborn after escaping from the underworld? The author seems not to have considered this bug. ??? After reading three stories, I felt that there were too many unnecessary repetitions. Reading too many repetitive sentences that constantly refreshed the screen made me a little irritated. In this story, we record what the protagonist did in the first eight days like a running account, and even include Zhu Yuxuan's reaction to what he saw, which is completely unnecessary. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist's affection for Zhu Yuxuan is very abrupt, and it feels like it is just arranged to keep the plot going. It is not obvious at all until he mentions his affection for Zhu Yuxuan. In such a situation, he directly dreams about having sex with her. It is very frivolous and feels very similar to Ye Yuchen to me. ??? Unit 4: [Underworld Co., Ltd.] ??? Finally, in response to the second unit, the ghost exorcism organization Underworld Co., Ltd. Was introduced, but it felt like it was a bit confusing yet as if it was not completely finalized. The protagonists feel very stereotyped and have similar experiences and personalities. They are often ridiculed for some reason. They don't have many friends. They are all lustful and those who have a crush on them prefer others. This story actually has more than just plot points, but the handling is quite rough. The first one is Ren'ai Hospital. I feel that this plot point is as unexplained as the renting story in the first unit. The second one is Lao Fan's dead son who appeared in the first unit. This plot point was the second time I thought I would delve into it more deeply, but I just brushed it off. The third plot point is a kickback to the ending of Rose Hotel in the second unit, but I am also confused about what the sudden introduction of a brother-sister relationship means. Grandma Chu's story is even more outrageous. It's a complete fantasy. I don't know why these little stories are described. ??? The method of exorcising ghosts is written in a mess, which makes people wonder how someone with such qualities can be selected into the special investigation team. It is messy, incompetent and funny. The identity of "Monster Hunter" was also revealed in this unit. It's quite surprising that it's Ah Ruan, but if you think about it carefully, it's not impossible. "Monster Hunter" is obviously much kinder than Ye Yuchen, which is indeed in line with Ah Ruan's "benevolent" character. It's unexpected and reasonable, but I'm a little curious about how he got involved with Ye Yuchen. ??? Unit 5: [Rebirth as a human being] ??? This should correspond to Ye Yuchen asking the author earlier if he believed in rebirth and then telling him a story. ??? Since everyone is called this name, they must be reborn. I have been waiting for Ke Jiaming's rebirth, but his experiences before his rebirth were written too much and too trivially. Is it really necessary to pull out so many extra threads? The character of the protagonist makes people feel a bit speechless, and it is really very stereotyped. Every protagonist has a girl he likes, and then this girl must take advantage of or look down on the protagonist's feelings. Is there nothing else to write about? After watching five or six such emotional lines in a row, I feel numb. ??? I personally think that the biggest highlight of the story in this unit is that when Ke Jiaming was reincarnated, he was not reborn directly. Instead, he was reincarnated as He Fu and returned to the past timeline, racking his brains to find a way to save himself without being able to directly contact the past Ke Jiaming. I personally think this design is the most complex and less direct part of the plot. It's just that if you go back to the expired joke, there may be a lot of bugs, especially if the administration joins in, it will make the situation even more confusing. But I'm still very curious about the original He Fu's feelings, because they can't be seen at all in Ke Jiaming's line, and Ke Jiaming was reincarnated into He Fu, so where did the original He Fu go? I think this is also a problem. You can't just disappear without knowing it to make room for the protagonist's soul. ??? And the strange setting of the underworld feels outrageous and laughable. Many processes are a bit forced to serve the plot. However, this is the first time I have seen a plot that accuses the corruption of the underworld. From this perspective, it is actually quite novel but a bit crude. ??? Furthermore, I still feel that the work is a bit overwhelming, and I feel that the writing is a bit confusing and rushed, and the timeline is not very clear. Various institutions have begun to come out to dance, and there are more and more characters. Some of the plots buried earlier were not explored as deeply as I expected but were only briefly mentioned. It suddenly made people feel like they didn't know what the purpose of spending so much space on it was. ??? Unit 6: [Mysterious Mansion] ??? The first chapter is obviously just an introduction, but this time it seems to be from a female perspective. Although the grasp may not be perfect, it is still a breakthrough. Every time, it is almost the same that men are really numb. Finding things through fortune-telling is very common in articles that have something to do with supernatural beings, but here it seems to be to highlight the fortune-telling person. The protagonist of this unit is finally not the first person to see a ghost, but someone around him who stepped on the trap first. Compared with the previous one, I think it can be considered an improvement. After all, the perspective of the cut has indeed changed a lot. ??? The story of this unit is much stronger than the previous ones, and the core is more profound. The struggle between the good and the evil factions is quite interesting. Regardless of whether they are ghosts or humans, human trafficking is very, very bad. Traffickers should die as soon as possible! Xu Chenkai in this story has made great progress compared to the previous male character, and has become more complex to the naked eye. Especially when he was humble and kind at the beginning, then he became self-absorbed and degenerated, and then after meeting Zhu Rongrong in a foreign mansion, he inspired long-lost kindness and guilt. Xu Chenkai is very layered in both character and experience, approaching each other layer by layer. The heroines in this unit all seem a bit single in comparison, but they are also more innovative than the previous female characters. Zhu Rongrong can be said to be the only woman and ghost in such a long story who clearly appears only as a victim, and she plays a great role in promoting the plot. In the past, even if ghosts were victims in life, they would still bear blood debt after death because of various selfish motives that harmed people. However, a group of ghosts represented by Zhu Rongrong were deceived and killed during their lifetimes. After their deaths, they were still persecuted and trapped in a foreign mansion and forced to provide services. Even so, they only killed the perpetrators when they had the ability to take revenge, and did not implicate innocent people. Wang Lingfeng is the main force output in the decent sect. He adheres to his master's teachings and does not flinch even when he knows he is facing a behemoth like the Maoshi Group. If most of the previous stories show the evil side of humans and ghosts, then the stories in this unit show the good side of humans and ghosts. The progress in plot, level, connotation, and conception is very obvious. ??? Big title page story: It tells the story behind the Hundred Man Haunted Mansion adventure. I feel that the author is more open-minded and at least does not discriminate against the gay community, which is good. Moreover, he was involved with the Maoshi Group and was connected. ??? Unit 7: [Ghost-recruiting game] ??? This unit is a little more terrifying than the previous units. Sure enough, the suspenseful plot is more attractive. The first few units were too straightforward, resulting in a less twisty story. ??? The games mentioned in the stories of this unit are all quite famous, and they all have horror scenes similar to meme, which gives a very strong sense of immersion. Moreover, the Bixian in the Bixian game has been redesigned. Although it may not be very subtle, it can at least avoid setting collisions. It's just that there are too many stories about crazy men and women. Although I was still angry when I watched it, I was also a little tired of aesthetics and emotionally numb. ??? This story explains what happened to Si Yang who disappeared without explanation in the previous unit's story. I have to say that although Liu Shuai has been complaining about Xian Jinghai's unreliability, Si Yang is also very unlucky to be friends with him, basically getting involved for no reason. Si Yang is a decent character, kind and courageous, and he is also very interesting to his friends. And in addition to the decent villains on the surface, there are also hidden decents and hidden villains, and the plot has become more complex and reversal. ??? I also noticed that the building that appeared in Zhang Jun's story actually appeared in "Hundred Man Haunted Mansion Adventure", which is considered a kickback. However, it's really weird that the NPC's lines are exactly the same, and there's something wrong with them at first glance. ??? Unit 8: [Travel Strange Tales] ??? Let's not talk about the plot of the story in this unit. A large title page story is inexplicably inserted in the middle of the story, and the perspective is cut directly after the story. Although it can be logically connected to the previous plot, this will affect the feeling of watching it, especially the title page story is followed by a "story within the story", which has a greater impact on the rhythm. I don't know how other readers feel. Anyway, I felt very irritable while watching it. ??? The story in the previous unit used the game as a node, and this unit uses the story as a node. I think it's pretty good, and the overall rhythm is much better. However, compared with the previous unit, this unit always has stories within stories, which is quite confusing. ??? The several reversals of good and evil in the middle of this unit are pretty exciting, and the rapid reversals are also very fast-paced and not too laggy. Moreover, the ghost traffickers mentioned in this story who are similar to human traffickers are obviously related to the Maoshi Group. I always have a problem here. The villain Maoshi Group is set to be so powerful that it covers the sky with one hand, and the protagonists are basically weak. Most of them are just ordinary people who are afraid of ghosts. If it is to end, it feels too difficult. ??? Unit 9: [××××] (unfinished) ??? The opening is from a live broadcast perspective, which has appeared many times before, but what is very different about this character is that he is very reckless. Even his first reaction when facing a ghost still delays his work of promoting the haunted house. Compared with the protagonists who were relatively superficial at the beginning and were very sensitive to ghosts, Zhang Tianxiang is much more special. It feels like it strengthens his label as a working man. This point will definitely arouse widespread resonance. When he accepted this promotion, he only looked at the money and did not change because of the girl. This is also a very distinctive point among the characters in the book. Moreover, he always encounters ghosts during live broadcasts, which explains his calmness. Without him, he just knows how to do it. The ghost hide-and-seek games in Ren'ai Hospital and the shopping mall are all call backs, and there is also a hair dryer that can exorcise ghosts. If I remember correctly, it should be the one that Yang Xu lost in Ren'ai Hospital. The main adventure scenes of Red Star Kindergarten and ENC Formula Escape Room have also been foreshadowed in the previous article. Indeed, the plot kickbacks are also quite good. ??? As a professional anchor, Zhang Tianxiang can indeed explain it by fighting for traffic. I have also seen similar pedophile incidents in kindergartens in the news. Compared with emotional entanglements, the core of the story is deeper. He felt more immersed when watching the video broadcast on TV, including the fact that the audience Xiao Heng recognized the person on the TV as the missing Cao Qiang and also buried the sub-line, and the direct pull into the horror line was a little slower than I thought. I thought Zhang Tianxiang was about to encounter a ghost when he was picked up, but it seems that there are more evildoers in Red Star Kindergarten. ?? The call back that Goose Head Club went to find the missing Cao Qiang was the Twin Haunted House in the first story told by Yue Cheng in the eighth unit. You can basically guess this call back, but what you didn't expect was that the supernatural anchor who appeared at the beginning was also related to Goose Head Club. It's not surprising that the store is related to the incident. The attendance rate of Maoshi's store is so high, I feel that this store may be related to Maoshi. I blindly guessed that Cao Qiang's encounter was not good because he was a worshiper. Xu Fuqi's setting, whether it is a ghost or the person in charge, feels a bit like Maoshi's enemy specifically looking for trouble. If nothing else, at least he seems to be stronger. It is estimated that he is the main combat force among those who enter the escape room. This unit must be a story within a story. After completing the escape room plot, it is time to follow the kindergarten plot. ??? Overall evaluation: First, let me talk about a few things that made me feel very bad. One is the repeated screen browsing. It is a bit annoying to scroll through a page of meaningless screens with little information. Another thing is that there are a lot of dialects throughout the article. You have to know that many readers and the author are not from the same place at all. Without any special explanation of what it means, the whole article is dialectal and colloquial, which is very fatal, at least it affects my understanding of some words. Another thing is that the protagonist's character is actually quite speechless. It wasn't until Si Yang appeared that a male character with basically no problems appeared. It wasn't until Gu Qing appeared that the female character finally appeared in the opening scene. She was not the kind of person who plays with feelings and has no self-respect and self-love. The fact that the main character is so unlikeable will definitely affect the perception of the book to some extent. There is also some confusion in the timeline logic chain. This problem is not big, but it just feels like it is too big. ??? For example, the problem of the protagonist's personality being stereotyped has been mentioned before, but from the previous point of view, it can be said that this problem has been improved, and the layering of the story has also improved visibly to the naked eye. However, some reversals still look a bit stiff, and some feel a bit like a forced whitewash, especially Yue Cheng's reversal, which feels a bit stiff and forced at the end. ??? The format is a little strange. It must be because I want to benchmark published books, so there is such a thing as a title page story. But in fact, there is a very big difference between online books and published books. The story on the title page basically disrupts the rhythm in this story. It can only be said that paper books and electronic versions are still different after all. ??? Although it is not very strong, you can see that there is still progress. This type of style is not popular in Jinjiang but it is still marketable. If the author continues to write, he will definitely get good results one day. I look forward to seeing the characters and story lines of different units connected in series and combined in the future.

Long comment warning! The following is purely my own opinion, if you are afraid of spoilers, please don't read it~ It took me several days to finally see this, and I couldn't help but want to write a long review to the author. At first, it was because I was short of books and was addicted to the panic-type articles in the infinite stream, that I found this article by chance. As soon as I saw it, I was like, wow, what an interesting idea. I read the first chapter and kept following it. To be honest, the main factor that attracts me to follow is the author's conception and imagination. As a bookworm in the past ten years, I am not very interested in clichéd articles that can predict the next plot at once. Some niche novels have become more and more popular, not to mention that there are very few authors who get better and better with their writing~ Jumping quickly from the first short story to the 100th one, I thought DaDa wanted to write a realistic story between people, using Brother Ye's dream as a branch line. Unexpectedly, there were several big twists, but these turns were unexpected and connected very smoothly. This is what makes DaDa awesome! The first two short stories are just an introduction. Starting from the official unit drama story "Rose Hotel", it truly reflects the author's powerful imagination. This unit has its own protagonists, Xiao Song and Agui (ghost). The description of the communication between them is very good. The story is mixed with many horror stalks and elements. The overall shaping is also very good, and the atmosphere is given. Dada slowly unfolded the previous foreshadowing and started a new round of foreshadowing, which was exquisitely conceived. But the story is too short, and I feel that it is overkill as a unit drama. I don't understand the meaning of "ugly" at the beginning, and then I still like to use repeated words to express the inner drama. Very straightforward words and expressions, this kind of feeling is more immersive. Sometimes too gorgeous words can easily cause drama, and it can be seen that there is real intention in writing. (Insert a digression, the description of the beautiful girl is very strong... I can tell you a few stories later.) Ahem, back to the point, compared to the story in Suzhou, this story is a qualitative leap. If the Suzhou horror story can have a bigger "game" like this story, the tone and starting point must be better! (My requirements are really high, please ignore them, they are already great enough hh) Regarding the short story of the Hundred Man Haunted Mansion Adventure, to be honest, I don't think it is as scary as the previous short story, because I am a bit out of character. In terms of the environment, I feel that I want to create horror elements without giving up the comedy, but the connection is a bit abrupt. There are too many overlapping words and sentences in the environment, which is a bit redundant, and it makes me feel funny. For example, there are ghosts all over the screen and nearly two lines, poof! Let's talk about the theme framework. It's pretty good. The story is told from the perspective of an ordinary person. The radio newcomer Wu Ge tells the story from the perspective of a girl he likes. It's a bit like Xiao Song's hahaha counterattack meme. The second half of the story is very interesting. On the adventure, life is different, people's hearts are different, what you see is not what it is, what is false is false, what is false is true, what is false is true, it is really well portrayed. Then it leads to a time-traveling plot, paving the way for what follows. In the story of Underworld Co., Ltd., I was a little interested in the rescue dice at first. This setting is very clever and rare. What impressed me deeply was Xiao Hong in "Hundred Demons at Night". It was really hard to watch. Family is very important for children. As a girl, in a deformed environment that favors sons over daughters, she can still maintain her conscience, be kind, and value her younger brothers. It is really rare. I feel sad for Xiaohong, especially the sentence "Xiaohong left tears of dissatisfaction." What's not to be angry about? This is obviously great, and my wish was just to see my brother, but after going through so much, it finally came true. The end of the story is connected with the Rose Hotel, and the foreshadowing that was laid comes to light, but the next foreshadowing begins immediately. As for the short story of reincarnation as a human being, I feel that it is a bit flat in the middle. The beginning is really attractive to me, with the system of farming, buying, buying, buying, golden fingers and so on. Maybe the expectations are a bit high, so I am not very interested in the middle part. The rescue plot at the end is actually good, but I don't quite understand some of the personal settings, so it doesn't affect his use of time. Finally, I also explained the relationship between He and Ke, Song Ge's cameo, and the bosses of Mao Shi and Fang Xi. The ending was amazing hahaha The story of "Mysterious Mansion" is a bit unexpected hahaha. The overall feeling is not as loose as the previous stories. It is very compact and describes many realistic and human things, which is very touching. Many details are linked to the characters in the previous story. When put together, the author's imagination is really strong! Wang Daochang, the light of righteousness, is so powerful! A lot of my focus is on Brother Yang's small theater on the title page. Brother Yang is well set up. Although there are some unspeakable things in the plot, the overall look is indeed very attractive. Starting from the mission of the women's house, there are few foreshadowings, but it is very attractive. The author has a lot of room to conceive the scene, and the description is very humorous. The words "Traveling a Thousand Miles in a Day" are really funny! It's a good story, but only a small part of it appears. I really can't get enough of it. Then there is the story on the big title page, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. In fact, the female ghost is really pitiful. I hope that in reality, she will get her wish and repay kindness with kindness. The next story is a ghost-recruiting game. I have to say that I was confused by the title. It is not a traditional game, but a combination of several games with many novel elements added. It is very refreshing to watch. Looking at it, I suddenly felt that it was a bit similar to the configuration of Squidward Game and Alice in the Land of Dying, which was particularly interesting. Ahhhhhhhh xn It's like this a lot of times, because I watch this unit basically at night, at two or three in the morning, it's very quiet, and I completely become the protagonist, okay! (I was startled after them, please don't scare me orz) Fortunately, the small title page and some funny characters eased the situation a bit. I didn't like some of the characters, they were very annoying to watch, and so were the emotional lines. Xianjinghai's reversal was unexpected. Unexpectedly, it was still an identity card. The god of mahjong, yyds, I am so happy playing mahjong every day during the Chinese New Year. I have achieved everything I dreamed of, and I feel so immersed in it. And Zhang Jun and his wife Ono were tortured and the old lady was so angry! A few of the previous stories were actually quite slow to pick up, but this story has a lot of twists and turns, and it's very compact and fun to watch! Then there is the story of travel ghosts. Every time I see this kind of scene of traveling in Suzhou, I will dream back to visiting Suzhou three or four years ago, eating a lot there, staying in a nice little famous hotel, and visiting classic attractions (I'm glad I didn't join a tour hehe and Then I thought that many authors can actually write about famous hotels. It has more feeling than hotels and so on. You can add a lot of scary materials into it. Hahaha) There was a short story before and mentioned those gardens. I must mention that I regretted not going because it rained on the day I planned to go. So this article can be easily incorporated and I pretended that I had been there. Hahaha, when I first read the article, it felt a little too real, but after reading it, I felt that this kind of writing is really delicious! After that, there were several big twists and some terrifying scenes that really made me want to watch it. Haha, I am both afraid and loving to watch it. After that, there is a big fat title page, and the whole overall picture is intertwined bit by bit. The small stories in the later stages are really interesting! It is constantly interspersed with some short stories on small title pages, which are huge and beautiful! Sometimes I am really attracted by the small title page, that is to say, the author can obviously expand the small title page into a story or a book, but it will provide us with welfare~ It may be heart-wrenching or heartbreaking. The twists and turns between Ke and Peng confused me hahh, and the most funny scenes and characters, such as Brother Song, really made me laugh to death! Finally some of my little suggestions~ I feel that the author's writing style is a bit green at the beginning. In some small chapters, the reading is not very fluent. There are too many paragraphs and it seems a bit tired. For example, there is a chapter He xx//He xx//He xx //It is divided into three paragraphs. , I think it would be more comfortable if it were turned into one paragraph, but many people like this method of segmentation (because I have become accustomed to being attracted by the plot after seeing the later chapters. After all, in the face of absolutely awesome content, these forms are secondary). Later chapters become smoother; the text becomes smoother; The story definitely doesn't fully reflect the key points of the plot, and you can also feel that there are a lot of things to be given at the beginning. In fact, there can be more foreshadowing, which does not need to be given directly, to make it more suspenseful and attractive, because the beginning and copywriting of an article are really important, even if the subsequent units The content of the play is indeed very good, but the lack of an attractive beginning will make many readers who like this type of writing miss a good article; the description of some details will be a bit stuck, and may need to be processed with more layers. For example, when it comes to strange faces, the surrounding atmosphere has actually been given Now, if I describe what kind of weird face it is, and add another stroke, it will be more immersive, but it may also be the author's great intention in writing, whetting my appetite, making me want to read more, because when I really want to know what the female ghost in white looks like, Brother Ye woke up from the dream (falling!). Of course, I am simply picky and nitpicking, hahahahaha, it's just my reading sense! The short stories in the next few units hope to include scenes of interstellar, zombies, cultivating immortals (you can use Wang Daochang as the protagonist!), Or strange stories about rules (I have always wanted to write this kind of article, highly recommended), etc. I am really looking forward to the following stories! I am super impressed by the author's great ability and perseverance. It is really amazing for a 70k+ short novel and a unit drama! It definitely needs a lot of bragging~

I was completely attracted by the copywriting and the title. I like the suspense theme + the very rare male protagonist's perspective. I am very interested in reading it. To be honest, when I saw the copywriting mentioned 100 stories at the beginning, I felt very incredible. How much brain space does it take to write so many unit dramas? And now the ninth story is almost 800,000 words long before it is finished. It is hard to imagine how long it will be to finish writing 100 stories. The first story Before entering the plot, the writing style of this book feels very different, especially the suspense reasoning style that I have read in the past. The writing style is very similar to a light novel. Many of the protagonist's inner descriptions and thoughts are directly written, and the entire psychological activities of the male protagonist are vividly expressed. The writing technique is usually a scene + a few short sentences, and even the location is a separate sentence. For the subject of the novel, the sentence break is undoubtedly a bit too much. Some places can be written in one sentence, but they are forcibly broken into several sentences, and every sentence ends with a period even if it is not a statement. Take the second chapter as an example: "It's difficult to write." ", "And.", "As long as the dream continues, the story will not end.", "Great.", Etc., In my opinion, there are some parts where the sentence is not finished, and the next sentence should not be connected with a period, so that certain emotions cannot be expressed. It was very interesting for the male protagonist to join a group, write novels, and upload novels. It was inexplicably realistic. I admitted that I laughed very loudly. I didn't expect that I could laugh so happily in a suspense novel. It was completely different from what I expected. It was humorous and made me feel relaxed. The protagonist is somewhat narcissistic and self-confident. There is a big gap between reality and ideals, but who dares to say that he doesn't have expectations where he is giving his best? Who hasn't dreamed of becoming a successful person all of a sudden? Chapter 7 finally felt like it was wrapped up, and I almost forgot that it was a suspense article. However, I didn't expect that Chapter 8 started to be "unserious" again, writing about variety shows and talent shows. The last two chapters are an introduction and officially enter the main topic. Surprisingly, they are also linked to the author's name of the novel. It's quite imaginative, but I finally figured it out. The whole article should be in a humorous style. There are no ghosts in this house It is unfolded in the form of replies, and you can see the interaction of the audience. However, there were too many introductions about the three houses at the beginning, which made it feel a bit bland. The previous part got to the point and raised the atmosphere, but after reading this, I feel The mood and expectations have dropped again. As for what "I" encountered when I was sleeping alone at night, I don't know if it was because of too many repeated words and repeated sentences, or because of the humorous style and gags that were laid out before. Such a terrifying scene did not feel very scary. The third story: Haunted House with One Hundred People I feel that a lot of premise/background of each story has been explained, and the foreshadowing is too long, and there are many divergent things. By the time of the live broadcast, it was already Chapter 10. The more immersive and exciting part is Bai Yifei's live broadcast. This is also what I want to see when I see the name of this story. The immersive feeling, including the host Bai Yifei's own reaction and the audience's speech, makes people think carefully, and the terrifying atmosphere is well rendered. Except for the first anchor Bai Yifei, Zhao Yong's chapter is also very good. What I didn't expect is that the time and space bureau appears. The imagination is really big. The scenes of other people are average. Later, "Pa! There is an extra corpse on the ground." It appears repeatedly. It makes me feel a little happy to see it. In addition, there are too many people who participate because of their relationship between men and women. I have seen them reject their confessions several times. The Fourth Story Hades Co., Ltd. The setting of the special investigation team for supernatural incidents is quite interesting, but chapters 11 to 13 are a bit abrupt and the transitions are not very coherent. However, for the first time, I saw a relatively perfect character, that is the deputy team member Ruan Wenfei, who is responsible but not rigid. The Sixth Story: The Mysterious Mansion It's finally written from a girl's perspective. Before, it was from a boy's perspective, and most of it was a love setting. This time, it finally feels a little different. Wang Lingfeng's setting is very good, and he is the second more interesting character. He is very powerful, but sometimes it gives people a dull feeling. Maybe this is the sense of contrast. In addition, Si Yang is not bad, and there should be foreshadowing for the final disappearance. The Seventh Story: Ghost Recruiting Game This story is the longest, and the more familiar ones are the Four Corners Game and the Pen Fairy Game. The others are interesting if you don't know them, but as expected, the protagonist in this part is a love brain, and he is still the same love brain that cannot be loved as before. He thought that after knowing that a girl is with another boy, the relationship will fade away, but I didn't expect that even if I face the option that may lead to death, I still have a love brain. Si Yang appeared again, with a sense of innocence and sunshine, which mentioned that he could not contact the outside world. This may be the reason for his disappearance. In addition, Xian Jinghai turned out to be a traitor, which was unexpected. However, his previous behavior did seem to be deliberately sabotaging, and it was finally revealed here. At the end of this story, I finally saw Ruan Wenfei, which was very touching and connected many plots together. At present, this novel has tied it. The biggest feeling is that the world view of the novel is very large and involves many levels. Each story basically feels like it comes to an abrupt end. Maybe when you read the next story or the next few stories, you can trace some clues of the previous stories. The foreshadowing is very good, but the protagonist of each unit drama is different. Sometimes it feels like watching a self-made drama. I have to wait for a long time for my favorite characters. For example, my favorite Ruan Wenfei has relatively few roles. I strongly recommend adding more roles (no). It is only the 9th story so far, but it makes people feel like their brain capacity is not enough. And because my memory is not very good, sometimes I will overlook some details or miss something when I read it quickly, so I have to watch it again and again to keep up with the rhythm. But what's strange is why most of the protagonists of unit dramas created by the author are trapped in emotional whirlpools, and most of them are men who don't get what they ask for, especially Liu Shuai. At other times, he is very independent and has ideas, but when he meets the girl he likes, he gets sick, etc. There are too many such characters, which are too similar and have a bad perception, so what I like are all the "supporting characters", such as Deputy Ruan, Si Yang, and Wang Lingfeng. In addition, I wonder why the author didn't create a real protagonist and carry out this role from beginning to end? In this way, it feels like the characters have a stronger sense of presence, leaving a deeper impression on people, and maybe the story and clues will be stronger. Or does the author specifically want to create a group portrait novel, where there is no single protagonist and everyone has a unique existence? Generally speaking, after reading this, I can see that the author's style is more humorous. He intersperses the seriousness with gags, sometimes a little scary, sometimes funny. In short, the imagination is too big. Again, it is difficult to imagine that there are really 100 stories? If that's true, wouldn't it be possible to publish a book even with the outline! Shock!

Now everything is connected together. I admire the author. I can only say that this article is really not suitable for people who are impatient.

Now Monster Hunter is back as a guest star. He really loves Tieba. You can say that he uses Tieba to log in to watch live broadcasts and laughs to death.

Why are they all treated as mentally ill and imprisoned instead of simply silenced? Maybe there's something that could be exploited about this group of people?

Oh my god, it's even! Oh my god, it's over 700,000 words. It's really not easy, and it's not easy for the author to write either. I once again lamented, don't give in to Jinjiang, try other websites!!!!!

This male teacher has a conscience and never gives in to justice. Most people are not as good as him.

It was painful to follow the story, but I forgot about it later on. I had no patience to read it again, and I still can't remember the plot if I don't read it. Come on, ma'am. It's almost over. I'll watch it.

! It's really all connected. The one in the same ward as Zhang Tianxiang is a survivor in the third story. The other one I've been thinking about for a long time is the plot in the appetizer told by Yue Cheng in the eighth story. It's awesome, but Qian Shengda doesn't seem to have appeared before. Also, I want to know where Lumen went. Is he also part of Maoshi's group?