I Became the Heroine of a Tragic Novel and Got Rich Through Microtransactions

Really, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is too abrupt. It feels like I was fed a mouthful of food when I saw the final ending. The classic god-level beginning is magically unfinished. It is obvious that the relationship between Zhulong and the female protagonist is natural and natural, but the male protagonist's sense of existence seems to be non-existent. Moreover, many of the previous foreshadowings were not explained clearly, and the presence of the later system became increasingly thin. . . . I feel like this article fell apart a bit towards the end of the writing process.

It's not finished... If you really want to write about Ji's emotional drama, you can write a separate article and describe it carefully. The second half is really sudden. I just read the article and wrote a stock buying article. Who knew that you had booked the male lead behind your back? I am really speechless. I can accept it even without CP.

By the way, when I was writing to the end, I completely missed the outline! Some plots are actually not over yet, such as the possessed dog master, the death of the Demon Emperor in the Netherworld, the heroine has not inherited the first position, and the wedding without a bride...

Although the ending is a bit rushed, it is not completely unacceptable in terms of the emotional line. In fact, the emotional drama between Ji Yan and Lin Yuxiu has been foreshadowed very early in the article. When Lin Yuxiu came back from Nanke for the first time, although everyone missed her, only Ji Yan stayed in the past and was obsessed with finding her. At the same time, Lin Yuxiu also discovered that the Qinglian Sword was Ji Yan's. Later, he learned that it was Ji Yan's natal spiritual sword. He actually had some guesses in his mind. After returning from Nankeli for the second time, Lin Yuxiu understood that it was actually cruel to treat Ji Yan like this. Ji Yan had been waiting for her, giving up his natal spiritual sword for her, waiting for the reunion after ten thousand years. These are reflected in some subtle details in the article. As for Zhulong, although he has a lot of roles and the two of them have a sense of camaraderie, they ultimately lack the obsession and emotion, because Netherworld spans time, and time has no meaning to Zhulong. For Lin Yuxiu, Zhulong is a very good friend, and this kind of friendship is similar to that of the sect. The masters and uncles are similar, but there is no further relationship. From the beginning to the end, Ji Yan and Lin Yuxiu have been working hard to go both ways. This relationship spans time and reverses the way of heaven. Although the writing is plain, you can feel the difficulty and touchingness if you taste it carefully. All in all, my wife writes very well! I was following this book when it was not finished, but then I didn't read it for a long time. I recently read it again and found that it was finished. I didn't finish it until today. I support my wife!

It's unfinished... I feel very uncomfortable... It's too big at the beginning, and there are many people and things left unexplained... For example, what happened to the old dog, where the senior brother is, why the relationship develops so fast, etc. None of it is clearly explained... I finished it in a hurry. I really like this book... But the last few dozen chapters really disappointed me. The ending of Longlong is also unclear.. The emotional line of the male protagonist is explained inexplicably. How did the female protagonist fall in love with the male protagonist... The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are not as clear as the female protagonist and Longlong. What happened to the system in the end? I hope you can treat every book well. Such a good worldview ended in such a hurry... Thank you for accompanying me. The first half of it is indeed a good book.

It ended hastily. Well. There is no follow-up to the Immortal Pill Furnace. The Demon-Slaying Sword has not been written in detail and many others have mentioned it. Alas π_π. What a pity

It feels like a bit of a trap, but generally it's not unacceptable. I'm more accepting of bad writing.

It looks good in the early stage, but weird in the later stage. Be careful when entering the pit. . .

Harmful, a bit regretful but not a regretful ending. In fact, I thought it was a bit boring when I watched it before, but when I got to Nanke, the characters and the world seemed to come alive, although it was limited to people in the Nanke world. Tianwen Nine Chapters, I thought I would enter the world of Nanke nine times, and I was very happy. The plot behind it is terrible.

At the end, I felt like I was suddenly drunk and fed shit