The lights flicker on and off, the peeling walls look like funny faces, and the old piano occasionally gives off a dull twang. None of that has anything to do with this story. The author was bored, so they tapped away at the keyboard and made 25-year-old Jiang Xingxue meet 15-year-old Jiang Xingxue.
I quite like Zhang Zhiming's description of youthful love~
The full text contains many details of life, and these details are described very delicately. They are not just a pile of words or descriptions of scenes, but can make people feel the vividness of the characters. At the same time, in these endless piles of details, there is both a hazy filter feeling in memories and a reflection on memories now. The two feelings are intertwined, which just reflects the feeling that we love and hate memories~
But there are too many details in the first chapter, which makes it feel a bit confusing and fails to grasp the main line. Personally, I think the pace of Chapter 2 is just right~
In fact, I quite like the idea of "life will be on the decline if you can't get into Peking University." When we were teenagers, we all set a preset life trajectory for ourselves and did not dare to think about the consequences of deviation. He did not deviate. After attending Peking University, he felt that it was not as brilliant as he had imagined. I deviated and went to a foreign country to be in a daze. I could also find ideals and fun. When I was a child, the results were so important that I ignored the process. Now I feel that the process is almost one of the best parts of life. But how did we know when we were children?
It's like my first love! Sometimes people are timid than they think, and no one dares to take another step forward for the sake of their future.
Looking forward to the next work!!!
Amazing! Spread flowers spread flowers
,,, ",, " That is, even if we can't be together, my heart is still gentle and I hope you have a good life.
The dual perspectives are great, but the pacing of the narrative is a bit flat, and the adolescent sense of being eager and secretly reserved is not enough. It needs to be detailed properly, otherwise it will be like reading a running account.
Of course, I think this article has its flaws and there is a lot of room for improvement. Looking forward to your next work! *^O^*
In fact, this ending is also very good
Waiting for the new story with peace of mind (???????)?*
Damn it, it collided with my novel's title.
I quite like Zhang Zhiming's description of youthful love~
The full text contains many details of life, and these details are described very delicately. They are not just a pile of words or descriptions of scenes, but can make people feel the vividness of the characters. At the same time, in these endless piles of details, there is both a hazy filter feeling in memories and a reflection on memories now. The two feelings are intertwined, which just reflects the feeling that we love and hate memories~ But there are too many details in the first chapter, which makes it feel a bit confusing and fails to grasp the main line. Personally, I think the pace of Chapter 2 is just right~
In fact, I quite like the idea of "life will be on the decline if you can't get into Peking University." When we were teenagers, we all set a preset life trajectory for ourselves and did not dare to think about the consequences of deviation. He did not deviate. After attending Peking University, he felt that it was not as brilliant as he had imagined. I deviated and went to a foreign country to be in a daze. I could also find ideals and fun. When I was a child, the results were so important that I ignored the process. Now I feel that the process is almost one of the best parts of life. But how did we know when we were children?
It's like my first love! Sometimes people are timid than they think, and no one dares to take another step forward for the sake of their future.
Looking forward to the next work!!!
Amazing! Spread flowers spread flowers
,,, ",, " That is, even if we can't be together, my heart is still gentle and I hope you have a good life. The dual perspectives are great, but the pacing of the narrative is a bit flat, and the adolescent sense of being eager and secretly reserved is not enough. It needs to be detailed properly, otherwise it will be like reading a running account. Of course, I think this article has its flaws and there is a lot of room for improvement. Looking forward to your next work! *^O^*
In fact, this ending is also very good
Waiting for the new story with peace of mind (???????)?*