A beginner's first attempt
Elementary-school-level writing
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Beneath the dim curtain of rain, a badly wounded boy who had fled his organization met his deity. In the years that followed, the boy and his divine lord became the most important people in each other's lives.
Chuya, blushing: Calling me a deity is a bit much, isn't it?
Sikong, smiling: No. You are my deity.
Because you exist, I am willing to love this world, which only ever brings me pain and has disappointed me completely. Simply because it brought me to you.
Theme: Someday, you will meet someone who makes you forgive the world.
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