HP: The Rebirth of the Feathered Serpent

This, this, this...? Relationships develop so quickly? Why is the professor tempted? He has no memory of his past life? If the author wrote about a 15-year-old fourth grader, it would still be understood as the turmoil of youth. At 11 years old, he is just a little kid!

In fact, it could be written better, but from what I see here, the pace is too fast. Some foreshadowing, turning points, opportunities, etc. Can be added to make the emotional changes between the professor and Xiao Ha less abrupt.

The love line is a bit stiff, but I am happy without thinking.

Madam, do you think I couldn't laugh while watching the small theater?

Laugh:-D Xifu is so gentle ps: If I accompany your teammates, this trap can be blown up. From winning to drawing (or losing completely) hiahiahia [atmosphere destroyer]

Harry definitely didn't have any other intentions at this time, throw it down! Naobu is a disease and a cure!

This progress is a bit fast

It's so difficult for me to catch up from Old Ford to here! (Scored)

Excuse me for laughing when Deng asked Malcolm to call him dad.

This is too tempting. He is stiff and a pedophile.