
The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Flower in Her Palm
绝世唐门之掌中花
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- Completed
- Length
- 540k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Ma Qingjiu cannot become a god, but Huo Yuhao must become a god. Their story is destined to be a tragedy.
I accidentally clicked in today and found that two extra chapters have been updated. After reading it, I wanted to come in and talk about it. I personally think that the author's idea is correct. No one can escape the ending of death. The relationship between Huo Yuhao and Ma Qingjiu is destined to be a tragedy. Ma Qingjiu is the son of Qinglian and will never be able to ascend to godhood. However, Huo Yuhao is different. He has many ten responsibilities. The soul of the ten-thousand-year-old soul beast possessed his spiritual consciousness in order to make him a god. He also promised them to do their best to become a god, so he must become a god. The difference in their identities determined that this was destined to be another tragedy. Gods cannot stay in the world for a long time. Even if they are the co-lords of heaven and earth, they cannot leave the human body and cannot step into the world of gods. Regarding the final ending, it is a bit sloppy, but it is appropriate. Time is really the most ruthless and cruel force in the world. Time has taken away all the memories and warmth of Ma Qingjiu, leaving only endless pain and darkness. Time has also taken away the warmth of Huo Yuhao. He will no longer laugh as wantonly and happily as before, leaving only a cold heart and endless longing for Ma Qingjiu. The time of gods and humans are different from each other. Even if Huo Yuhao can really go down to the world to find Ma Qingjiu one day, and Ma Qingjiu is still alive, then they may not be able to stay together forever. "Co-Lord of Heaven and Earth", this title sounds very powerful, the first person under the gods, but after all, he is a human. As long as he is a human, he cannot escape the ending of death. At that time, watching his lover who has been with him for many years disappear, but he is powerless, is the real cruelty. In contrast, many, many years later, Huo Yuhao went down to the next world to learn the news and saw the scattered traces left by Ma Qingjiu. Perhaps, he was not so sad. Time is really scary, that's right.
Although I know that this is actually a pretty good ending, that the son of Qinglian is destined not to become a god, and that Yuhao still has so many souls, I still want to say, author, do you like our tears? ! !
In fact, I think there should not be gods in Douluo Continent, and there should be no gods at the level of gods. It is best to be like those in Dou Po Cang Qiong, whose lifespan will be extended but will eventually end. When I first read Legend of the Gods, I felt that Ma Hongjun was miserable. Being a god and living forever was torture for him, and those were the only people who went to the God Realm in Dou Yi. Their teachers and parents were in the lower world, which was equivalent to the eternal separation between heaven and man. In Dou Er, his brother became a god. All his old friends except his wife are gone, although his parents They are all here, but I feel that there is still a kind of loneliness that cannot be dissipated, so I feel that I have to die. Nothing is eternal, but at least the feelings and stories will stay, which will prove that this person has been in this world. It is better than Qingjiu and Yuhao never seeing each other again (The Legend of Zhen Huan in the drama www)
I read the comments before reading this novel again. I knew it was a destined ending, but I still read it because the comments section made me curious about the story between them. Although the ending made me very sad, in fact, the last few chapters were really easy to cry. Although the ending is sad, it may be the most suitable ending for them, because Ma Qingjiu cannot become a god, and Huo Yuhao must become a god. Their endings are already destined.
What's more terrifying than time is loneliness, and watching familiar people around you leave one by one. They say immortality is a gift, but in my opinion, it is more like a curse. People around you will grow old slowly, but your appearance will not change, which is painful for both parties.
If you watch it too much, your heart will really harden. I used to burst into tears every time I watched Be, but now I am just surrounded by a touch of sadness. In fact, I think the ending of this article is the best I imagined. Flowers bloom and they will eventually fall. People who used to be called little guys are now called a group of old men and little guys. Apart from lamenting the power of time, I can't feel anything else. He gave me a different romance throughout the book. My suggestion is to build emotions during the battle. Wouldn't it be better this way? In this way, the emotional and fighting scenes are both satisfying, but everything depends on the strength. Without strength, it cannot be written well. It needs to be combined carefully. Either the writing is nonsense, or the writing is foggy. Only incisive writing can make people feel bright. Sentence fragmentation is a minor problem. After all, it is very troublesome for you to correct it when you are staring at this mobile phone or this computer. It will still cause some harm to your body. As long as the general meaning of what you write is not bad, it is fine. This is my opinion. Also, I really want to thank the author for giving me a great gift. It is my honor to read a good book.
In fact, this book is quite shocking to me. Of course, it's not about the plot or writing. It's about the real emotions. I cried all night. The author's logic is a bit unclear and the writing needs to be improved, but the real emotions are so shocking. In fact, I have relatively high standards for the things I read, such as composition novels and some literary things. But I really can't say anything after watching this, because I want to kill the author and write the plot well. Isn't he good? Give me some of this stuff to make me cry
I really want to know the outcome of Di Tian and other soul beasts, but it must be very sad that His Highness Xiao Qingjiu, whom they have loved since childhood, left them like this. But I was so excited when I saw that they could meet each other after the Douluo plane was upgraded. In the end, it was all in vain, just like the sentence at the end that the flowers in the palms have no roots and the snow between the eyebrows has no trace. That Ice Spirit Douluo might be very sad, after all, how much he loves Lotus Phoenix Douluo. The beloved child of Law and Plane Consciousness has left. How sad would Qing Yan and his lover Ma Hongjun be if they knew about it. Will Lingbing Douluo leave with his lover like Ma Hongjun? There are too many unknowns. It is a pity that the two proud people of Shrek Academy and the two lovers could not have a child, but even if they did, maybe they would be like His or Her Highness Ma Qingjiu's father.
After finishing the game, I was still sad about the ending. As Qingjiu said, I started to think about whether Qingjiu would not be so sad if he had not left the Star Forest. Time has erased Qingjiu's memory and taken away his happiness and smile. You and I are outsiders in the book, but we feel the same as the people in the book. I can't tell whether I am sad about them leaving or thinking about my own growth and the aging of my parents. Yuhao and Qingjiu love each other but can't stay together. Isn't it normal in the world? Very realistic and very cruel.