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After the great war, the world changed.
As the global order was reshuffled, people’s formerly peaceful lives were turned upside down.
Espers, mutants, and all kinds of mutated creatures emerged in this world.
Mu Han, who had been sentenced to death, was unexpectedly given a final exile instead.
He was sent to Sin City.
It was a city of utter chaos, self-contained yet seemingly orderly. A city teeming with danger, savagery, absurdity, and slaughter.
The strong rule.
Power, money, desire: everything is measured by strength. If you’re strong enough, you can get anything you want.
Mu Han only wanted to survive. But one seemingly accidental event after another, all secretly set in motion by an unseen hand, gradually drew him toward the heart of a conspiracy.
As layer after layer of the mystery is peeled away, the cruel truth behind the world’s transformation slowly comes to light…
And Mu Han’s identity becomes the decisive factor that will turn everything around.
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This story contains BL and explicit scenes, but please don’t read it as an erotica novel. Thank you.
It contains potentially upsetting elements, so come in at your own risk!
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Some ideas were inspired by the BL game Togainu no Chi.
The setting is based on Lord Murong Qingming’s Sin City.
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Paid serialization announcement:
It’s confirmed: this story will become a paid serial on February 20. Thank you for all your support so far! I’m truly grateful.
All the supporting characters: Hun (Zhuo Tan), Li Fanghan, Qiu Yinan (Qiu Yin), Zhong Huo (Feng Qing), Han Yili (Prince Li), Feng Zhan Tian (Wolf), An Ling (Judge), Long Po (Instructor), Yan Kong (Executor), Yan Ying (Little Girl), Nate (IAR), Han Xiang (You Princess), Yin Gubai (the Vanished Man), Black Ghost, Bai. Did you spot them? XD Shh…
Theme:
Claw Machine is not divided into sections—Final Exile is a good book title. I came here after the title, but I knew this title because He Han Da~ When I searched, I found that there was this book about Final Exile. . . . Because from the introduction, the one from the Film University is cuter~ So I'll read the one from the Film University first. It's not easy to compare, so I won't comment on which one is cuter XD. He said that if Mu Han were to attack me, I would give up the article. No matter how good your writing is, girl, I won't read it (facepalm), so the moment I switched to attack, I was so happy. . . . . .
The final chapter is actually quite a stream of consciousness = =
But it's also an ending that fits the theme quite well…
But I started to struggle with a question, who is based on Shiki? Han Yili (→This name is inexplicably cute...) Or Li Fanghan? Or neither?
When I first read this article, I was immediately attracted to it, but the author's skills were limited (I'm not saying this article is not a good article, but it was obvious that he did not grasp the main plot very well in the later stages). The plot in the later stages was mostly draggy, and the final BOSS, Han Yili, was not well described. It was obvious that the author was speeding up the story for the sake of completion. I like the temporary CP changes very much, maybe because the author listened and changed the soul to be weaker, haha. But in the end I didn't quite understand. Fang Han must be dead. Oh my God, I studied it for a long time. . . . . Is it the sentence "Wake up, wake up... Look at the sky" that Mu Han said. He thought about it and slowly looked down, and found out. . . . When I saw Fang Han's conversation again, I suddenly felt depressed. I wondered if it was because of Lan Guang. The two classmates Fang and Han were all reduced to ashes~~~~~~~. . . . . But it's a good article anyway. The author has great potential. I support ING. Did you answer my question? ORZ
I can't understand the ending. . . = =
I've finished watching it…I still want to watch it~
Hey, Comrade Soul always gives me the illusion of a 3P. . .
Spread some flowers, I'll chase after you
Dear, I like the setting of the modern article better, but would you rather update two articles at the same time? !
I think there are many characters in the novel, especially the sub-line characters, and DaDa wants to describe each character with a unique soul (of course this is very successful, each character can still be vividly remembered), which requires laying out a lot of plots. Sometimes the protagonist Mu Han is not very outstanding, which leads to the later description of Mu Han - a kind of contradiction - both pure and simple. Pure and indifferent - or "a person who hides his compassion deeply" - this kind of light attracts many people. In fact, I did see the contradiction in Mu Han's character in the article. However, the unique light should be purity, that is, the uncut but extremely attractive thing that everyone abandons, but it is not fully displayed, and it does not fully meet the appearance that Da Da wants to describe. I saw Mu Han's growth - he became more cautious and mature, and more cold-hearted. However, the softness of his heart, the characteristics that touched many people, were not perfectly described. Maybe it was because he had been stranded for too long and he wanted to finish the story earlier~!
All in all, a very unique and creative article~~ gave me a very exciting enjoyment as a reader~~
Thanks for the great article~~~I hope to continue to create new ideas~~!
In fact, I think Gong's role is well-cast. When I first watched it, I thought that Li Fanghan, a man who has carried family hatred and survived in an environment of the jungle for 14 years, is really cold on the outside but soft on the inside? Although he is cute on the outside and cold on the outside, but soft on the inside, I always thought it was weird, until finally - ah, I suddenly realized it! ! I love this man so much. He is absolutely strong and possessive in his heart, arrogant and cold in his bones, cruel in his methods and deep in his scheming. It is all great love!
Sure enough, for Mu Han, it was both his luck and his misfortune that Fang Han fell in love with him...
Claw Machine is not divided into sections—Final Exile is a good book title. I came here after the title, but I knew this title because He Han Da~ When I searched, I found that there was this book about Final Exile. . . . Because from the introduction, the one from the Film University is cuter~ So I'll read the one from the Film University first. It's not easy to compare, so I won't comment on which one is cuter XD. He said that if Mu Han were to attack me, I would give up the article. No matter how good your writing is, girl, I won't read it (facepalm), so the moment I switched to attack, I was so happy. . . . . .
The final chapter is actually quite a stream of consciousness = = But it's also an ending that fits the theme quite well… But I started to struggle with a question, who is based on Shiki? Han Yili (→This name is inexplicably cute...) Or Li Fanghan? Or neither?
When I first read this article, I was immediately attracted to it, but the author's skills were limited (I'm not saying this article is not a good article, but it was obvious that he did not grasp the main plot very well in the later stages). The plot in the later stages was mostly draggy, and the final BOSS, Han Yili, was not well described. It was obvious that the author was speeding up the story for the sake of completion. I like the temporary CP changes very much, maybe because the author listened and changed the soul to be weaker, haha. But in the end I didn't quite understand. Fang Han must be dead. Oh my God, I studied it for a long time. . . . . Is it the sentence "Wake up, wake up... Look at the sky" that Mu Han said. He thought about it and slowly looked down, and found out. . . . When I saw Fang Han's conversation again, I suddenly felt depressed. I wondered if it was because of Lan Guang. The two classmates Fang and Han were all reduced to ashes~~~~~~~. . . . . But it's a good article anyway. The author has great potential. I support ING. Did you answer my question? ORZ
I can't understand the ending. . . = =
I've finished watching it…I still want to watch it~
Hey, Comrade Soul always gives me the illusion of a 3P. . .
Spread some flowers, I'll chase after you
Dear, I like the setting of the modern article better, but would you rather update two articles at the same time? !
I think there are many characters in the novel, especially the sub-line characters, and DaDa wants to describe each character with a unique soul (of course this is very successful, each character can still be vividly remembered), which requires laying out a lot of plots. Sometimes the protagonist Mu Han is not very outstanding, which leads to the later description of Mu Han - a kind of contradiction - both pure and simple. Pure and indifferent - or "a person who hides his compassion deeply" - this kind of light attracts many people. In fact, I did see the contradiction in Mu Han's character in the article. However, the unique light should be purity, that is, the uncut but extremely attractive thing that everyone abandons, but it is not fully displayed, and it does not fully meet the appearance that Da Da wants to describe. I saw Mu Han's growth - he became more cautious and mature, and more cold-hearted. However, the softness of his heart, the characteristics that touched many people, were not perfectly described. Maybe it was because he had been stranded for too long and he wanted to finish the story earlier~! All in all, a very unique and creative article~~ gave me a very exciting enjoyment as a reader~~ Thanks for the great article~~~I hope to continue to create new ideas~~!
In fact, I think Gong's role is well-cast. When I first watched it, I thought that Li Fanghan, a man who has carried family hatred and survived in an environment of the jungle for 14 years, is really cold on the outside but soft on the inside? Although he is cute on the outside and cold on the outside, but soft on the inside, I always thought it was weird, until finally - ah, I suddenly realized it! ! I love this man so much. He is absolutely strong and possessive in his heart, arrogant and cold in his bones, cruel in his methods and deep in his scheming. It is all great love! Sure enough, for Mu Han, it was both his luck and his misfortune that Fang Han fell in love with him...