Blurb:
He crossed a thousand years, obsessed with medicine, an aimless young man who unwittingly charmed everyone around him.
He never knew where his heart belonged. By the time he looked back, it was already too late.
In the end, his heart was shattered. He gazed out from the cliff at the moon, then at the sea beneath it.
He turned back with a faint smile, then leapt toward a distant horizon.
The wind rises in the heavens; clouds gather and drift away.
Is the moon still the same? Who can say?
Xiao Feng wants to thank Zhuzi for helping with the bug-swatting. It was a huge undertaking, and Zhuzi nearly bent in half carrying all the pest-control gear. Thanks again for your help
Dear readers, if you spot any bugs that escaped this big extermination drive, please tell Xiao Feng. I’ll follow up and do my best to wipe them all out. Thanks in advance for your help
Xiao Feng’s other works
Many thanks to Master Gui Gui for making Xiao Feng a cover, and of course to my classmate Xiaoning as well. Thank you both. The covers are lovely, and I like them both. Thanks
Oh, right! One very important thing!
This story is now complete. The final chapter will be uploaded on April 8 at 7:30 p.m.
Please leave a comment when you read, and don’t be a silent reader. The writing may be a little rough, but I wrote this the year I graduated from high school.
I finished it last year, and now it’s all uploaded. It took more than two years, so it really wasn’t easy.
Please give Xiao Feng at least a tiny reward... Even a little encouragement would be nice…
Theme:
I like sadistic writing. . . .
Do you need to be so pitiful?
Author, you are a very determined person. Although I barely read Chapter 25 and jumped directly to the ending, I admire your will. You were able to finish him off. It was so powerful = =|||
It's free today, so I just happened to see it. I only read one chapter. The writing is immature and some of the writing is hard to appreciate, but it's still okay to give it a thumbs up.
There are so many articles, but so few collections and comments... The author is really weird...
If you insult the royal family, you can be punished.
I can't guarantee that everyone's life will be filled with winter melon and tofu?
Hey, doesn't the heroine know that she has internal injuries?
Mo Di's brief review of "The Thousand Years of Bright Moon on Willow Tops" Mo Di has been writing this article for a while, but because Mo Di went for an internship some time ago, Xiao Feng has been waiting for this review for a long time. Without further ado, here's my review: Flowers: 1. Title. Millennium directly and clearly points out the theme of this article. Especially Mingyue, it is a double entendre. Mingyue is the heroine of this article, which makes it easy for readers to understand the theme of Xiaofeng's article. This is still very good. 2. Language. The language of this article is based on humor. Xiaofeng strives to present the whole story to the readers in a relaxed and funny atmosphere. It can be said that you did a good job in this regard. As a time-traveling woman, every sentence of the heroine has a strong modern flavor, which is worthy of praise. In terms of language, your control ability is barely adequate, and the article reveals a lot of literary flavor. Especially the pharmacological knowledge, which is the highlight of this article. The modern terms used by the heroine in the article are very reasonable and clever, making the article flexible. 3. Characters. There are many characters involved in this article. Xiaofeng, your description of the psychological activities of the characters in the novel is relatively rich, which is worthy of appreciation. The backgrounds of the characters are fairly clear and not confusing. 4. Plot. The beginning of the article attracts readers, which is very successful. The article begins with the turbulent waves of the river, hitting the readers with a sense of tension and suffocation. The overall layout of the article is quite reasonable and there are no flaws. After sending flowers, it's time for Modi to send bricks. As for articles, each article has its own merits and flaws, and this article is no exception. Paizhuan is not to dampen the author's creative passion, but is just for the author to make progress. Xiaofeng and Modi were treated the same way. Mo Di makes a brick below: Bricks: 1. Language. This article is obviously lacking in language, the description of the characters is not adequate, and the description of the surrounding environment is even less. From the article, it seems that this is your first time writing an article, Xiaofeng, and you are not sure about many aspects. The writing style of the article seems childish, and the description in the article seems very pale. So, if you want your writing to improve, you must learn to describe, learn to describe characters and describe the surrounding environment. Many things need to be set off by scenes. Without scenes, the entire article will appear boring. In terms of the narrative of this article, Xiaofeng, you obviously did not think it through carefully. The entire article was told in a straightforward manner, as calm as water, without any ups and downs. 2. Type of novel. This article is a time-travel article and has the characteristics of a general time-travel article. However, this article does not highlight the characteristics of time travel. When writing, it did not even introduce how the heroine Mingyue traveled through time. She couldn't just come to Yechao inexplicably, right? Then there is this night dynasty in another time and space. What are its customs and customs, what are its dignitaries like, what is the relationship between them, and what is the situation at that time? Xiao Feng, you have not introduced these. This article is a romance novel, but the overall article is in a scattered state and does not focus on romance. Even though it is written that there is an engagement between the heroine Mingyue and Lin Yu, you fail to grasp such a key point. The focus of this article is not outstanding, the male protagonist is not known for a long time, and there is not even a single character among the men described. This makes readers confused and bored when reading the article. The article is not prioritized properly. It can be said that the article does not have a main line. It can even be said that when writing this article, it was just written in a wild and wild manner, and I wrote wherever I thought. There is no clear direction at all, or even a complete outline. If you want this article to have a good development, Xiaofeng, you'd better draw up an outline and go through the entire story in your mind before writing. 3. Characters. As I said just now, this article involves a lot of characters. When you are unable to control the entire story, there should not be too many characters in the novel. There are many characters in this article, but their individual character traits are not obvious. Mingyue's character is outstanding. She is lively and active, but except for her, everyone else is in a hazy state. It is difficult for these characters to form a position in the minds of readers, which is why readers may not be able to read the article. In fact, this article can focus on describing King Yu, Lin Yu, and the prince, and other idle people can stand aside. It can be said that the performance of these people in the article is not strong enough, and they are drowned in a group of supporting characters. The characters in the article do not show their own characteristics. For example, King Yu, as the emperor's most valued prince, he should have his own uniqueness. In the court, he should have his own opinions instead of relying on the heroine's guesses. His character and ability to deal with things need something to set off. Another thing you need to pay attention to is that throughout the article, you have to pay attention to the order of the characters when they appear. The characters cannot appear in a messy manner. In the article, psychological description alone is not enough. The description of the characters' movements, expressions, demeanor and behavior also requires you to increase your writing. The overall description in the article is not enough, you can adjust it appropriately. 4. Plot. The biggest failure of this article is the failure to grasp the plot. The plot of this article seems to be dragging, and one plot is described too long, causing the article to be extremely slow. The framework of this article is a bit large, and the ability to arrange the plot is obviously insufficient. There is another extremely obvious failure in this article, that is, you did not switch the narrative perspective appropriately. This is mainly reflected in Ming Yue. You describe this article in the third person, but when you describe it in your mind, you turn to the first person. This leads to confusion in the description angle of this article, and the readers are also very depressed. The plot of this article shows naivety at every turn and always revolves around the bright moon. But in this strange country, don't they have their own affairs? This is also the reason why it is difficult to highlight the character. The whole plot is extremely dull, with no climax, no suspense, and no foreshadowing, which makes the whole story fall into a dead silence. If an article wants to attract readers, it must be suspenseful. Obviously you have not considered this. Then, Xiaofeng, you can consider adding suspense to make readers follow your train of thought. There is no climax in this article, everything is presented in a calm attitude, and the heroine wants to be funny in the article, but it is not very successful in the readers' eyes, and it feels a bit cold and humorous. Because she needs a foil, and you have ignored this foil, Xiao Feng. When narrating, pay attention to concise language and purified plots. You must delete some unnecessary plots and learn to compress the plots. The plot of this article is very cumbersome, even wordy, and overall has no focus. For example, when the heroine enters Shen Qing's Yuzi Villa, the plot description there needs to be condensed. Mo Di's comments are up to this point. This is a time travel article, but you haven't grasped the upper part of Xiao Feng. Since the upper part of the article is in this situation, it is a bit difficult to get off, so I hope that Xiaofeng will use a new attitude to write the lower part of the article more successfully. I also hope that Mo Di's comments will be helpful to Xiaofeng in writing your article. If I photographed something wrong or you have any questions, you can come and communicate with me. I wish Xiaofeng happy creation! ——Ink commentator: Shui Modi
Like it very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to the next volume!!!!!!!! But the male protagonist definitely doesn't want these two!!!!! So chilling!!!! Brutally torture anyone who has hurt the heroine, and don't let anyone go!!!!! They were so tortured that life was worse than death!!!!!!!!!!!